00:07:921 (1,2,1,2) - 01:17:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - These two places are the same, but what you make is different, please be consistent
00:12:279 (3) - Replace with a 1/2 slider, This allows you to better express your vocals, and it can also take into account the drums above 00:12:446 -
00:24:011 (5) - nc, and remove nc on 00:24:178 (1) - Because this is the beginning of another vocal
00:24:513 (5,6,1) - the intensity of the vocal here is a bit less intense than 00:23:005 (1,2,3,4,1) - yet the movement throughout this part is really similar. Would suggest to do a softer movement 00:24:513 (5,6,1) so this wont section dont feel like one whole intensity.
00:46:804 (4,5,6,7) - intensity dies down here a bit yet the spacing is still constant as if it was still the peak of the vocal here. Would suggest to nerf it a bit more.
00:54:178 (6) - could spaced this more since the vocal pitch are high and so prominent here. cant treat it the same with 01:10:268 (5) - that have same pattern or spacing since the vocal pitch lower its pitch gradually