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nah i like it this way, looks better

9 months ago

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01:04:441

01:04:441 (1,2) - can see your idea but since the new section starts off with a very strong beat, stacking this on the slider end does not do the song justice. Could space this out a whole lot more.

A simple change could be to ctrl + j and move it up

9 months ago

did it a bit different but d

9 months ago

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01:26:552

01:26:552 (2,3,4) - would be better to stack these since the lack of snares and space out 01:26:885 (1,2,3) - these instead

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9 months ago

oops didnt resolve

9 months ago

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01:35:941

01:35:941 (2) - i don't really hear anything here to justify 1/8 triple in the slow section

9 months ago

the hihats. dont rlly follow them in the rest of the section but they are much more prominent at this exact point imo.

9 months ago

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01:42:996

01:42:996 (4,5,6,7,8) - drums aren't really strong so this could rather be stacked and space out 01:43:552 (1) - this instead to give the new section a lot more emphasis

9 months ago

going with a decreasing spacing for each not instead since 01:42:811 (3) - is a strong note and it fits with the drums going down in pitch too

9 months ago

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changed this back too didnt like

9 months ago

01:57:774

from 01:57:774 (1) to 02:11:885 (4) o i love how to emphasize those snares. fun to play :)

9 months agoLast edited by Orangeholic 9 months ago.

02:22:663

smolship

02:22:663 (1,2) - this also kills intensity. Should be equal or higher to ur 1/6 streams yes?

9 months ago

ye didnt like it either changed it back kinda to how it was before.

9 months ago

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02:36:885

02:36:885 (4) - nc would be better

9 months ago

agree

9 months ago

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02:38:218

02:38:218 (1,2) - to represent the very strong sudden vocal here you could straighten this out and change the movement and spacing for 02:38:441 (3,4,1) - these instead (and nc on 02:38:441 - here instead of 02:38:218 - here)

An idea:

9 months agoLast edited by Night Mare 9 months ago.

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02:49:107

from 02:49:107 (1) to 02:52:441 (4) :
maaaaaaybe uhh feel more tense when you use slow short slider with HIGH distance, just small idea btw

9 months ago

not sure i know what u mean but tried making the slider 0.3, and i like so :thumbsup:

9 months ago

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03:03:552

03:03:552 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - seems following drum fill-in, but cannot understand rhythm choice of that phase
maybe more intuitive if change it like kinda decelerated kicksliders or bursts

9 months ago

simplified it. hopefully more intuitive

9 months ago