00:11:931 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:16:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 03:12:244 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - these rhythms seem incredibly detatched from the rest of the map and I see no reason for these to be streams. at no other points in the map do you force rhythm like this where theres nothing in the song to back it up. its one thing if its a map wide feature but its just not here.
I agree that rhythm variety is a good thing but you dont use 1/8 sliders at any other point in this verse and the part you chose to use them on is not intense/different enough from the rest of the section to make sense. the only other times in this map you use 1/8 sliders are the first drop and the buildup to the final drop, so its weird for the ONLY other (unless I missed something) 1/8 slider ot be in a verse where the vocals its highlighting aren't much different than the other vocals around it. its really not that hard to change 00:32:947 (1,2,3) - to be more similar to 00:22:947 (3,4) - or vice versa.
Also would like to point out that rhythm variety is typically used to either prevent a constant rhythm choice from becoming boring, or show a change in intensity between parts, and theres not enough of this rhythm to justify the former, while the latter isnt really done throughout the entire second half of the verse so its not applicable here really either
00:39:197 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels kinda wierd, i get that that it is based on the vocals, but ignoring something as prominent as kicks, may be a little jarring, you can just space out the jumps leading to 3 and 4 to help that emphasis,
01:29:041 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i know theres calm part but its really annoying that we have to "click repeatedly" here
yea it is but it does not leave a room for improvement.
there's no ruining, having repetitive stacked circles is just annoying to play considering this section in song is pretty quiet.
do some sliders instead of clicking over and over, give player a break from tapping at chorus before
01:35:291 (1,3,2) - having 3 of 3/4 slider would be sad expression imo so recommend to change the rhythm for 01:35:759 (3) - to triplet and 01:36:072 (1) - to kick is much better
its an example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19289416/1b84
agere with len considering it's 6* map and chorus is a lot more active
imo this moment should be mapped a lot more dense to properly represent song's intensity at this moment
these 3/4's are not being a reasonable buildup since intensity doesnt really changes throughout whole section except vocal samples which you mapped as bursts