00:17:009 (6) - rhythm seems strange here when theres two very loud sounds on 00:17:322 - and 00:17:478 - . its especially strange when you consider the only sound on 00:17:009 (6) - is some synth, and that same synth also appears on 00:17:322 - and 00:17:478 -
00:24:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is tied for second longest 1/2 circle chain in the map which seems odd considering the intensity of the music. (00:57:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:02:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - are tied with it and 02:36:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 03:08:416 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - beat it, all 4 of which make sense given the intensity of the song in these sections). should probably just make 00:24:353 (3,4) - a 1/2 slider to decrease tapping strain on the player
00:29:041 (3) - there is not a single other 1/1 slider in this section that has a vocal inside it. should just be a 1/2 slider into a circle at 00:29:353 - imo.
00:41:853 (4) - spacing makes this very misreadable, move to somewhere in the top left corner
today im fixing his mods so yeah
fixed, moved added the note 00:41:541 (4) - and made the 00:41:541 (4) - with proper spacing
00:57:634 (6) - downbeat on sliderend here doesn't follow the vocal emphasis logic you established with the previous two sliders, would just make this 2 circles and group the 2nd circle with 00:57:947 (1,2,3)
same thing at 02:02:634 (6) and also similar problem at 02:04:197 (7,8) come to think of it - but the second one is a bit trickier because i think its the choice to use 02:03:884 (6) that ended up screwing you over
suggested alternate rhythm:
00:57:634 (6) - made a two notes instead of slider
^02:02:634 (6) - same
^02:04:197 (7,8) - fixed and user your rhythm
01:07:009 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - thats a lot of sliders in a row, should probably break it up with some circles.
01:40:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - easily misreadable as a linear pattern across the 1, 3, 5 - please rework this to have a more distinctly visible flow
for a more detailed explanation of this problem please refer to #4516433
01:42:322 (10) - you could make this a reverse slider to more distinctly represent the bassline, but if not please move nc to 01:42:791 (2)