in the Garden

00:11:891 (50,51) - idk if it's intentional or not but this is missnapped. Either (dk) from 00:11:913 or (ddk) starting at 00:11:868

00:13:565 - 00:26:422 I would suggest increasing density. While I understand you want to keep it easier than the other kiais since this is the first one and early in the song, this feels too low in density for a kiai imo. Most of it is 1/2 with only 2 7plets

00:22:940 (7) - do something with this patterns so it finishes with a k for consistency

00:26:422 - changing this to D would better represent the pitch difference and intensity drop of the song

00:37:940 - could add notes for improv like 00:31:511. dkddk works pretty well

00:45:841 - personally don't think this triplet works well here, would emphasize the crash sound better by changing 00:45:708 to finisher and leave a 1/1 break afterwards

00:57:627 - could add note for the drum sound, I think it works well for the intensity buildup

00:59:770 (236) - Ok so here with feels wrong is the kkkk in this pattern
I tried things but I think to fix it you can rework it as a : ddkkddkdkkd

Like that it would fit better and the player switch hand to play the next pattern -w-)b

01:08:074 (332) - feels weird to play this short section what I recommand is:

01:08:475 (337) - put this note as a k
01:08:676 (339) - this one as well

01:19:926 (459) - this as a k because it's too repetitive with 01:18:252 (443) -

Overall kdd is a pattern that I find really annoying to play, especially at high bpm. But what I think this pattern reveals is that you emphasizes the wrong note, look what i'm saying:

01:18:319 (444) - see this exact note? Put it here: 01:18:185. You now got a ddk with emphasazing the the last note as we do in taiko.
Now that you got this patterning rework what comes next to follow the melody

In the future: if you put a kdd try to check if it really does represent the song, can you rework the pattern and it still works without kdd? If it doesn't do what we just did and you got your response.

01:21:199 - since you've been emphasizing the snare+crash sounds with k, ddd or ddk (vocals on third note) here would fit the song better since there's no such sound here

01:53:743 & 01:59:569 - I'd suggest removing these for a less dense section. The music structure is similar to 00:39:279, and although difficulty progression is fine, I feel like these are a bit excessive and is too dense. Removing these still keeps the progression as well

03:13:565 - 03:26:422 this section is put as kiai while this one isn't 01:24:279 - 01:37:136. They feel exactly the same to me so I would suggest to make it consistent. Imo you could remove kiai in the second instance and up the density a bit in the first one

03:17:716 (1379) - something is off here I think
try ddkdkkddk?

03:18:185 - could remove this note since the 9plet feels excessive for a relatively calming section, especially when there's a triplet right after