00:43:241 (265) - 00:43:562 (269) - no sv on these notes are making the sv look jarring when the music doesnt warrent them... i think somehow you forgot to apply sv on these
00:58:963 (80) -> 00:59:123? don't see a reason to improvise when you're omitting a stronger 1/4 hit, would make more sense
01:04:337 (123,124,125,126,127,128) - ngl would adjust the rhythm to have the 1/6 start on the actual buzz sound, smth like this: