00:09:739 honnestly it feels off to not use a note here cuz there is a loud snare
00:15:415 same
Added note there and changed some patterns around
00:11:057 -> 00:11:260 better vocal emphasis?
same 00:17:746
Alright!
00:22:206 d for decreasing pitch
fixed!
00:26:462 kkdk to emphasis snare sound
00:29:706 delete and 00:29:503 d
Fixed everything
00:28:793 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - feel like something better can be done emphasizing the 1/4 vocals and/or the double trumpets at 00:29:402
maybe kkdkdkddk or kkddkdkkd
kkdkdkddk
kkddkdkkd
changed to kkdkdkddk! actually a very nice idea.
00:44:806 maybe circle for drum and fill the gap
added d there
00:57:475 -> 00:57:272 for drum improv? going past a downbeat at 00:57:576 in the middle of a 1/4 kinda weird as it doesnt ahve trumpet like 01:04:265 (2,3) -
Moved it and change that to k as well
suggestion, could del 01:15:617 because theres actually only 3 sounds but up to you
current is also fine
you're right, deleted it :)
01:20:481 so offhand, kkdkddk