00:07:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - there's a less dense piano follow before & after this, but suddenly following the dense vocals results in a weird rhythm switch and made it unnecessary dense on a calm section.
suggest u just map the pianos here
00:24:157 (5,6) - I recommended to increase ds here to avoid objects being too close together
00:40:803 (4) - how about changing it to a 3/4 slider + a circle? It could better reflect the vocals
00:40:803 (4) - in a clam section, I think it's enough.
01:05:498 (9) - main follow the drum.
01:02:571 (7) - 02:18:668 (7,8) - here, it's suggested to change it to a 1/2 slider + a triplet starting on the blue tick. the reasoning is the same as #4231978
02:01:655 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Considering the intensity of this section, spacing is too small. it could be increased to about 1.8x.
03:31:289 (7,1,1) - overlaps here looks a bit messy, maybe it could be modified like this: https://smms.app/image/rCeP4Bnj8O9guQf