Rest moment stuff:
00:18:534 - 00:53:443 - there are no 2/1 breaks anywhere in this section.
I would suggest you remove 00:22:216 (31) and put a d there instead
I would do the same thing for 00:30:943 (67), 00:39:670 (103) and 00:48:398 (141)
01:01:080 - 01:37:080 - there are no 2/1 breaks anywhere in this section
I would suggest you do the same thing with 01:05:852 (182), 01:14:580 (218) and 01:23:307 (254)