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mapped by PORTTAYER

submitted 7 Aug 2023

ranked 29 Jan 2024

This beatmap was ranked on 29 January 2024!

nominated by Monoseul and FLeVI

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00:02:500

00:02:500 - there seems also worth to be double, since there is also have a piano chord and it's on a measure's start.

16 months ago

to balance the density, better to simplify 00:03:437 - to be single if you accept this

16 months ago

done

16 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

00:05:625

00:05:625 - double？

19 months ago

fixed

19 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

00:25:937

00:25:937 (25937|3,26210|2) - 前面双押，后面那个鼓就可以加个note，不过没啥必要

19 months ago

就是为了防止出现1/4子弹才这样排列的

19 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

00:30:156

00:30:156 (30156|1) - Would flow better in col 3 as it feels a little rough to transition from a left-handed pattern here like 00:29:687 (29687|1,29843|1,30000|0,30156|1,30312|0,30312|1)

Would move 00:31:406 (31406|0) to col 4 for similar reasons

15 months ago

done

15 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

00:39:843

00:39:843 (39843|2) - missing ln as in 00:29:843 (29843|1) - ? also, consider to put the LN like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18991541/01ec and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18991542/ac53

14 months ago

fixed, but i think 1/1 length ln maybe too long

14 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

01:05:078

01:05:078 (65078|2,65156|1,65234|2) - 这里音乐那种萎掉的感觉可以加俩note来体现，和顶难的分值变换大概意思

19 months ago

done

19 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

01:05:625

01:05:625 - The way this LN is combined with the streams really doesn't feel fitting as it's just a rising sound building up to the piano, the 1/4 kicks are mostly drowned out by then so this feels counterintuitive. Some notes don't represent anything either.

Suggestion:

15 months ago

fixed but this ln is used to express the rising synth sound so i keep it

15 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

01:10:937

01:10:937 (70937|1) - 1/4 ln?

19 months agoLast edited by 1545940348 19 months ago.

ln只用在重低音钢琴，是前面多采了一个

19 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

01:20:000

01:20:000 (80000|1,80000|0,80208|0,80208|1,80416|0,80416|1,80625|3,80625|2,80625|0,80833|3,80833|2,80833|0,81041|3,81041|2,81041|0) - 可以不放同列，因为钢琴还有音高变化，前后都还采的钢琴

19 months ago

fixed

19 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

01:22:500

01:22:500 - any consider to add a double on this kickdrum? it's have similar strength with 01:22:812 - etc.

16 months ago

done

16 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

01:26:640

01:26:640 - 实际上 01:26:406 - 01:26:640 - 这样的地方依然有旋律声在这，跟后面 01:28:906 (88906|1,89140|2) - 等一样，尤其是 01:26:640 - 好歹得补一个，节奏缺位了已经

16 months ago

音色音高跟后面还是有区别所以用了单点表示

16 months ago

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01:45:156

01:45:156 - 这两个旋律音还是能听到的，强行空缺这里体感上并不是很好的表达，你要不补上这俩旋律音吧。

same sug in top diff

16 months agoLast edited by FLeVI 16 months ago.

done

16 months ago

Marked as resolved by PORTTAYER

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