04:24:880 - double
03:42:489 - wrong snaps https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19411795/5121
03:36:184 - jacks with lns are spike, 03:36:184 (216184|3,216619|0) - delete these notes should be better
03:15:532 - double
03:02:054 - jack here
02:47:706 - 03:01:619 the balance of left and right hands in this section should be improved especially 02:54:010 - , continuous one side trills on left and there is no corresponding pattern on right hand
02:46:891 - add a note
01:22:271 (82271|0) - ln, 01:22:489 (82489|1) - rice, 01:22:815 (82815|0) - ln
01:16:402 (76402|2) - extend to 01:16:402 (76402|2) -
00:56:402 - 01:10:315 this section is same as 00:42:489 - 00:56:402 , copy and flip horizontally will be better
now is fine to me
lns on 01:53:334 - are just to express snap, but there is melody on 01:55:529 -
done
i think there is asound
fixed
00:35:530 - , 00:43:335 - really different from 00:34:554 -
00:17:481 - 00:18:213 changed the pattern to express the repetition of music 00:22:359 done