TremENDouS

00:37:544 - This jumpstream is a bit weird from a patterning standpoint but we can fix that. I see that you wanted it to be even on both hands, but it ends up being more awkward to play than anything, so I rearranged it so it's more comfortable to play. In addition, I made 00:37:805 a triple to add a bit more emphasis to the sound here since a double is a bit weak for a stronger sound. I provided an image of how I would arrange this jumpstream.

00:37:935 -> 00:38:196 You got the right idea by making to notes follow the melody, but we can move the notes a bit to follow the melody a bit closer. We can shift back 00:37:935 & 00:38:000 by one column since these are higher of a frequency, especially compared to 00:38:131 & 00:38:163 which I would move so the first not is in the same col as 00:37:935 but have 00:38:163 be on the second column instead of the 3rd like we did with 00:38:000. Then we would place 00:38:261 on the first column. In case you are confused, I provided an image for reference about what I'm talking about.

00:38:783 -> 00:39:435 The excess notes here kind of take away the emphasis you have with 00:38:718 so as a solution, I would recommend removing the notes in the section except for the following: 00:38:979, 00:39:109, 00:39:239, 00:39:305, and 00:39:370. This would also server as some diversity in-between all the handstreams for a beginning section at that.

01:00:109 - I believe you are missing a note here for the bells in the song since at least in this section, you seem to prioritize them.

01:03:109 - I think a note here would help into the buildup for 01:03:370 since you would be emphasizing the riser here.

01:03:370 -> 01:04:152 - This section would benefit from just being chordjacks instead of jumpstreams. It would differ from all the handstreams and jumpstreams from not that long ago and it would at least help 01:04:152 -> 01:04:413 stand out more. I've provided an example image of what you can do if you apply my suggestion.

01:13:022 - Would recommend removing notes like this since the main thing the song is focusing on is the melody which is 01:12:761 & 01:12:892 so by removing 01:13:022, you would help emphasize it more.

01:15:500 -> 01:15:892 is weirdly snapped. You should just have it be a 1/8 single note stream instead (this means getting rid of the double at 01:15:500)

01:17:587 - A double into a 1/8 stream at this bpm I imagine would be frustrating to play so instead I would improvise and have had it be without doubles and would keep the 1/8s going until 01:17:979

01:18:718 -> 01:18:892 - I don't exactly get what you are doing with the 1/6 here since it seems snapped to nothing, and you miss out on being able to make a 1/4 stream from 01:18:761 -> 01:18:957 with a double at 01:18:761.

01:19:805 - This double makes this part frustrating more than anything so it's best to just remove it from how negative it affects gameplay. Also remove the double at 01:19:674 since it makes your streams flow weirder and would give you more freedom by removing it.

01:20:066 -> 01:20:326 - This would be much better as regular trills instead of jumptrills since it plays badly after going through the 1/8 stream, especially with the way it's currently patterned to be with jumptrills.