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00:03:185 (3185) - to 00:28:785 (28785) - just a suggestion, maybe change the doubles in a way so that it represents the piano pitch more? For example 00:07:585 (7585) - can be changed so that it goes to the left rather than to the right etc.

00:05:985 (5985) - missing double for the piano

00:31:570 (31570) - consider adding a note here for the piano

00:34:544 (34544|1,34544|3,34674|2,34805|0,34805|1) - the doubles don't represent anything here, it should be 1-2-1 in terms of chord size

00:37:218 Apparently there's a sound here

Why does 00:37:283 have only one note and 00:37:413 has two? it sounds the same sound in both, I think it would be better to have 2 notes at 00:37:283 as well

00:37:544 - This jumpstream is a bit weird from a patterning standpoint but we can fix that. I see that you wanted it to be even on both hands, but it ends up being more awkward to play than anything, so I rearranged it so it's more comfortable to play. In addition, I made 00:37:805 a triple to add a bit more emphasis to the sound here since a double is a bit weak for a stronger sound. I provided an image of how I would arrange this jumpstream.

00:37:935 -> 00:38:196 You got the right idea by making to notes follow the melody, but we can move the notes a bit to follow the melody a bit closer. We can shift back 00:37:935 & 00:38:000 by one column since these are higher of a frequency, especially compared to 00:38:131 & 00:38:163 which I would move so the first not is in the same col as 00:37:935 but have 00:38:163 be on the second column instead of the 3rd like we did with 00:38:000. Then we would place 00:38:261 on the first column. In case you are confused, I provided an image for reference about what I'm talking about.

00:38:783 -> 00:39:435 The excess notes here kind of take away the emphasis you have with 00:38:718 so as a solution, I would recommend removing the notes in the section except for the following: 00:38:979, 00:39:109, 00:39:239, 00:39:305, and 00:39:370. This would also server as some diversity in-between all the handstreams for a beginning section at that.

00:39:305 (39305|2,39370|1,39435|2,39500|1,39566|2,39631|1,39696|2,39761|1,39826|2,39892|1,39957|2,40022|1,40087|2,40152|1) - perhaps change the pattern slightly so it's not as col 2 3 heavy

00:56:457-01:03:239 What were you mapping out here in that part? I couldn't quite figure out whether it was the piano or the background sounds, or something else

01:00:109 - I believe you are missing a note here for the bells in the song since at least in this section, you seem to prioritize them.

01:03:109 - I think a note here would help into the buildup for 01:03:370 since you would be emphasizing the riser here.

01:03:370 -> 01:04:152 - This section would benefit from just being chordjacks instead of jumpstreams. It would differ from all the handstreams and jumpstreams from not that long ago and it would at least help 01:04:152 -> 01:04:413 stand out more. I've provided an example image of what you can do if you apply my suggestion.

01:10:674 (70674) - you should use burst pattern here instead of 01:11:718 (71718) - since the rhythm is in 1/8 rather than just 1/4, you can use 1/6 for playability. As for 01:11:979 (71979) - it is very clear that it is in 1/4.

01:13:022 - Would recommend removing notes like this since the main thing the song is focusing on is the melody which is 01:12:761 & 01:12:892 so by removing 01:13:022, you would help emphasize it more.

01:15:500 -> 01:15:892 is weirdly snapped. You should just have it be a 1/8 single note stream instead (this means getting rid of the double at 01:15:500)

01:15:631 (75631) - remove this double, this isn't representing anything important, you can keep the double on 01:15:500 (75500) - instead of representing the percussions on these two bars, consider it as representing the "wub" sound with chords (Same goes for 01:17:718 (77718) - 01:19:805 (79805) - etc.)

01:17:587 - A double into a 1/8 stream at this bpm I imagine would be frustrating to play so instead I would improvise and have had it be without doubles and would keep the 1/8s going until 01:17:979

01:18:370 (78370) - there's a slight hihat burst thingy here, maybe double into 1/6 can do if 1/8 is too much

01:18:718 -> 01:18:892 - I don't exactly get what you are doing with the 1/6 here since it seems snapped to nothing, and you miss out on being able to make a 1/4 stream from 01:18:761 -> 01:18:957 with a double at 01:18:761.

01:19:805 - This double makes this part frustrating more than anything so it's best to just remove it from how negative it affects gameplay. Also remove the double at 01:19:674 since it makes your streams flow weirder and would give you more freedom by removing it.

01:20:066 -> 01:20:326 - This would be much better as regular trills instead of jumptrills since it plays badly after going through the 1/8 stream, especially with the way it's currently patterned to be with jumptrills.

01:24:239 (84239) - this should be the same with 01:15:892 (75892) - either use doubles or triples to represent this sound

01:25:022 (85022) - the 1/8 burst here doesn't seem to be representing anything noticeable, consider making it into a splittrill

01:26:392 (86392|1) - consider removing this note to differentiate both chords before and after it

01:26:718 (86718) - maybe make this a 1/6 or 1/8 burst into the double for the "hihats" burst

01:30:500 (90500) - the doubles in this section should be on 01:30:500 (90500) - 01:30:696 (90696) - 01:30:761 (90761) - 01:30:892 (90892) - 01:31:022 (91022) - 01:31:087 (91087) - 01:31:283 (91283) - instead

01:32:848 (92848) - to 01:38:848 (98848) - not sure what these doubles are representing here, consider removing them

01:38:848 (98848) - change this to triple for the crash sound

01:47:326 (107326|3,107457|1) - consider removing these two doubles since the only sound here are the pianos

01:47:457 (107457|1,107587|1,107718|1,107848|1,107979|1,108109|1) - idk if you consider this a bad thing, but here's an anchor that could be avoided if you messed with a few notes

in 01:48:761 it was inevitable, since it had handstream, but in 01:47:457 da to avoid the anchors if you want, since it is Split trills just distribute the notes in some different way that already decreases the anchor

1:48:761 v

01:48:239 (108239) - missing triple

02:02:979 (122979) - maybe make this a double so it's more "consistent"?

02:02:979 (122979) - maybe make this a double so it's more "consistent"?

02:04:152 (124152) - this should be a double and 02:04:544 (124544) - should be a triple, there are some percussions on 02:04:283 (124283) - 02:04:413 (124413) - as well, maybe use doubles here instead of streams

02:11:653 (131653) - same issue as #3869992

02:21:804 (141804|1) - not sure what this note is trying to represent, I'd suggest removing it

02:23:327 (143327) - I'd say make this trill into minijack from col 4 to 1 so that it fits the song and it's funnier (i.e. single note as 44332211 in columns) do make adjustments to the pattern after this if you accept it

02:24:077 (144077) - two issues:

1. 02:24:077 (144077|0,144077|3,144077|1,144170|2,144170|1,144264|2) - this block of notes isn't consistent with the layering with others, where the chords 3-2 has minijack and the single note doesn't, here it has minijack for 2-1, consider changing it
2. 02:25:108 (145108) - there's not much of a reason for this to be a double, make it single

02:25:577 (145577) - there's quite a bit of layering issues within this section, I'll list a few below

I also highly recommend making use of minijacks as a part of layering, since it looks pretty random right now

02:37:108 (157108) - should be double as there are no audible percussion here

02:49:764 (169764) - 02:52:764 (172764) - etc. should be single, there are no audible sounds here to be represented by a double

03:07:858 (187858) - I'd suggest changing the anchor placement to better represent the song, pattern should look like [134][34][34][124][12][12][134][34][123][2] in columns as 1/4 (this includes the last note, making it a minijack), the same applies to others after this

03:08:702 (188702) - please change this goofy ah trill to something like a ladder (213243), adjust it to fit the next chord

03:10:108 (190108) - missing note for the "vocal"

03:19:577 (199577) - maybe make this triple to represent the "thump" sound

03:29:427 (209427) - suggest removing these doubles and the jumptrill after this, for emphasizing the doubles are representing the "vocals" here

03:29:538 (209538) - this "burst" doesn't really fit with the intensity of the song, consider nerfing this into a simpler jump stream with doubles on 1/2, if not then check for anchors, especially on columns 2 and 4

04:48:576 (288576) - the triples should be on 04:48:696 (288696) - 04:48:816 (288816) - not 04:48:576 (288576) - since the melody is not here, the same applies to 04:50:496 (290496) - 04:52:416 (292416) - etc. If these triples are representing both the bells and the melody, keep the triples and still change the others

05:03:396 (303396) - missing double

05:07:236 (307236) - missing double

05:08:256 (308256) - just a suggestion, maybe make this into a 1/6 burst to represent the "brrrrrrrrrrr" and also differentiate this from the previous parts

05:13:536 (313536) - consider making this a 1/4 stream to represent the melody

05:19:716 (319716) - this should be a double as there's a melody here

05:27:636 (327636) - make this a double to represent the melody, ie make it as a jumptrill, same for 05:28:116 (328116) -

05:40:896 (340896) - the triples here feels pretty off since it's not on 1/1 and it is not representing the melody as well, I suggest changing this pattern

06:01:536 (361536|3) - heavy anchor on column 4
06:06:936 (366936|1) - column 2

06:07:776 (367776) - highly suggest using triples on 1/1 beat, and if there are sounds on 1/4 beat, make it double and make the 1/1 after or before it (if any) as double

06:26:382 (386382) - should theoretically be double

06:36:329 (396329|3) - unintentional anchor on column 4?
same for 06:37:908 (397908|3) -

06:43:698 (403698) - consider representing the burst here with 1/8 or 1/6