00:30:289 (3) - can adjust the sharp part of this slider to hit here 00:30:474 to match the bass in the music. Since current sharp corner on here 00:30:567 doesn't really emphasize anything particular in the music
you did it well here 00:33:252 (4)
some inconsistent spacing around the kicksliders, like between these two 01:42:141 (10,1) and 01:46:771 (1,2). I would consider going through them to ensure their consistency.
like, I would buff this jump a bit 01:46:956 (2)
02:16:678 (1,1) - NCs seem unintentional, since it's the only time you did it and doesn't have any drastic SV changes.
Here too 02:28:530 (1,1). Probably either stick with these NC style, but be consistent with it and apply it to the first kiai as well, or remove the NCs. This vocal rhythm happens quite often, so I recommend just removing it since it's less work.
02:25:289 (1,1) - these too, but it's likely you intended this for style, so it's fine in that case
02:43:808 (2,3,4) - can NC these to emphasize the distinct rhythm with which these should be played, easier to sightread
02:57:141 (4,5,6,7,1) - this is weird. nomi, faxaxaxa and i did four note bursts here. You can nerf with like triple ending in 1/4 slider but a quint into triple is like really off since 03:02:697 (5) - doesnt exist and 03:03:160 isnt mapped