I hate this pattern 00:23:496 (3,4,5). Keeping it the same spacing as all the other ones would be perfectly fine. At least make it equal spacing.
best map is simple; 00:24:911 (1) - 00:20:383 (1) - make normal sliders / curved sliders at a very light angle. implies to any other sliders in this map
idk i dont like the 2 in between 01:40:619 (1,2,3) - Especially with this spacing. Give the map a short rest
01:47:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you could gradually increase spacing during this stream, would fit the song and be a nice ending to the kiai