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00:05:311 (4) - missnap

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nerf spacing too

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fix

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00:36:427 (4,5) - think the SV of the kick sliders here is less emphasized than the spacing so make them 1.2 is more nicer to follow the music imo >w<

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ok owo

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00:45:782 (4) - stack error?

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fix

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00:46:427 (1,1) - could remove nc spam here coz seems nothing needs to be emphasized

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ok

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00:47:072 (1) - ここの緑線が1ms後に配置されてるのでもしかしたらこれは意図的じゃないかもしれない

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おk

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00:47:717 - , 00:50:298 - and 00:52:878 - couldnt find much of a reason why these places should be expressed as 0.6 SV imo

cuz compared to these parts: 00:36:749 - and 01:54:169 - , the intensity of the song did not change that much, and you know you expressed the song well even with 0.9 SV so it wouldnt be awkward to change the slider expressed as 0.6 back to 0.9

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removed sv

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00:49:491 (1,2) - whistles for hs feedback

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00:50:136 (4,5) - 00:52:717 (4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm to follow vocals better + add variety

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ok

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00:55:943 - i highly recommend to add rhythm as a note to follow the music here. then you can further emphasize the expression that the song briefly breaks at 00:56:104 -

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if so, remove nc on 00:56:104 (1) - as u did

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add circle

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00:56:104 (3) - vs 00:56:427 (1,2) -

i think these timestamps play too different for how similar the sounds are, making them the same pattern (both jump and stack works) so they feel more related fits better in my opinion

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02:02:878 (4,1) - is better, i think you can copy that instead

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02:02:878 (4,1) part pattern and unification.

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00:58:120 - you forgot to fix hitsound here; 00:58:201 (3) - should be set sampleset-normal and additions-soft with whistle on here

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00:58:120 I don't think we need HS here

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00:58:201 - this tick is different with previous, its intenser so i would suggest making it clickable like this

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added

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00:59:653 - how about using 1/2 slider instead of note here to keep the expression of the song and to avoid interrupting the vocal progression?

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add

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01:01:507 (1,1) - these two ncs look like spam, are they intentional?

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Intentional.

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01:07:072 (7) - 曲調が強くなってることを表現するために、少し下に下げてスペーシングをとってみてください

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02:14:169 (3) - 同じような感じで!

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ないす

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add

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01:07:717 - kiai

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add

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01:12:878 (1,2) - 01:14:169 (1,2) - i think stack circle on 3/4 sliderend is better so jumps emphasize vocals on 01:13:362 - 01:14:653 - instead of snares

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ok

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01:15:298 (5,6) - samplest normal

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おk

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01:34:814 (1) - 1/1 repeats here looks a bit undermap since here is still intenser, i would suggest buffing a bit like

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I want to place a 1/1 reverse slider periodically for vocal follow-up and as an accent. 1 with no changes.

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01:38:524 (1,2) - idk its intended cuz only added triple here

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ok add whistle

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,

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01:51:346 (2) - i really really recommend to remove here cuz the songs intensity isnt to loud, and not so really needed to catch tick sounds imo so just let it as note-triple is more fitting on here ig

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01:51:427 (2,3) - also hs

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ok removed
but not add HS

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02:36:427 (5) - i would suggest buffing spacing a bit since here is intenser than previous 02:35:137 (3,1) - and 02:33:846 (5,1) -

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ok

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02:51:265 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - very low movement for intense part of song

can buff spacing here or maybe swap placement of 02:51:588 (1) - with 02:51:911 (1) - and 02:52:878 (1) - with 02:53:201 (1) - so this feels more engaging to play

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That's right.

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03:02:556 (1) - i can here theres also a strong sound at red tick 03:02:717 - , could also catch this tick would be better feedback

or

both should be ok

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ok changed

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03:02:556 (1) - check hs

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fix

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03:02:717 - , 03:02:878 - missing hitsounds

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fix

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03:07:878 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 上の難易度と比べてサークルが多すぎると思う。曲もここまで激しくはないのでいくつかスライダーにする方が良いかもです。

03:07:878 - とかExtremeを見るとスライダーにしてもいいと思う。

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ok

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03:18:040 (1) - eeeh it's kinda personal, but not a fan of this big spinner for an Extra difficulty, for the Insane it's ok because you maybe want to be nice to newbies, but an Extra? i'd advise you end it at 03:19:007 - and then map the rest like the other top diffs lol

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ok

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03:20:943 (1) - Extraも1/4スライダーで強調していいと思う。
今のままだと表現として弱すぎると思います。

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ok

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03:24:975 (2,1,2) - this distance is a bit overdone compared insane imo? so would better to reduce 1 by moving it to x134 y63 around ???

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nerfd

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#4066247/10879012
No change for the same reason.

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03:46:104 (5,6,7) - ちょっとスペーシングデカすぎかもです。他の難易度見ても同じようなスライダー2連無いのでスペーシングをナーフするかリズム変えたほうが良いと思います。

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03:52:878 (1,2) - もスペーシングやばい

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微調節

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