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00:04:405
드럼노트 추가하면 좋을것 같네요

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좋습니다

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00:08:280 - missing a finish hitsound

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fix !

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차트 전체적으로 강한 피아노음에 밀도를 주셨던데 00:12:074 - LN double 어떠신가요?
바르 다음에 나오는 피아노 음은 두드러지게 들리지 않고 드럼 소리에 치우쳐서, 연속적으로 double LN 쓰게 되지 않을 파트라 적당한 것 같아요.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18723621/d4d5

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해당부분은 저 개인적으로는 일단 애매하다고 생각돼서,
차후에 의견이 더 나와보면 수정해보도록 하겠습니다.
일단은 열어둔 상태로 남겨둘게요

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sound isn't strong enough in my opinion for double

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저도 솔직히 큰 소리라고 생각은 되지 않아서, 일단은 현재 상태를 유지하도록 하겠습니다.
I honestly don't think it's strong, so I'll keep it as it is for now.

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00:15:526 - 00:16:560 Not quite sure what the LN's are representing when you already represented the bassline

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fix.

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00:20:095 (20095|3,20095|2) - i think you should emphatyze the piano here since it's too noticeable to be ignored,
suggest to change those notes in LNs and maybe and here? 00:20:440 -

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good idea

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00:20:436 (20436|3,20436|2) - feel like this should just be a single and not a double as there's no extra sound here but the drum and they follow the single notes 00:20:522 (20522|1,20608|2) -

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good idea

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00:28:974 Triple might be too heavy here, maybe a double?

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00:30:698 Same here, the chord has different dynamics

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reopen

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good idea !

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00:30:784 여기도

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굿

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00:33:888
00:31:819여기부분이랑 일관성 맞도록 노트추가하면 좋을것 같네요

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수정했습니당

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00:34:315 - note missing?

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added !

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00:34:578
여기도 빠졌네요

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조아용

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00:37:422
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18675080/e70b
이렇게 노트추가 하면 좋을것 같네요

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좋습니다

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00:39:832 (39832|0) - moving this to three would make more sense imo since 00:39:832 (39832|2,39918|1,40005|0) - and 00:39:229 (39229|0,39487|1,39574|0,39746|1) - are disconnected from each other

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that's a great idea.
taking your suggestion into consideration, i've made some modifications to make it easier to play certain parts of the pattern from 00:39:229 (39229|3,39229|2,39229|0) - to 00:44:487 (44487|2,44487|3) -.

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00:43:457
여기도 1노트 추가

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해당부분은 멜로디 강조를 위해서 더블 LN을 그리고, 피니쉬 강조를 위해서 트리플을 사용했는데,
00:43:457 . 해당 음까지 표현하면은 개인적으로 연주감이 무너진다 생각되네요. 또한, 해당 소리는 표현하기에 개인적으로 다소 과하게 작은 소리가 아닐까 느껴져 일단은 현상대로 유지하겠습니다.

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작은소리는 취소하겠습니다.. 은근 크네요

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00:45:436 - missing a note here?

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sure

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00:48:371 Maybe double here

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instead of 2 triplets and 1 single, it is more natural to fix it with 3 doubles. that's a good idea.

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00:50:436 - this should be a double for the kick

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changed !

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00:50:694 (50694|0,50694|3) - .
I've applied double-note to the highlighted sections, as the double-note in those parts produces a slightly louder sound compared to the other single-note. However, despite the double-note, it still seems somewhat subdued compared to the other elements that have been double notes. Therefore, I'd like to inquire about your thoughts on potentially treating those sections with a single-note approach.

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upon reviewing this section, I feel like this pattern prob works best for full representation of what's going on, see what you think (the tension on the 2nd column is intentional):

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good idea ! i'll fid it.

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00:54:060
여기도 1노트 추가

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해당 부분은, 여타 다른부분과 곡의 분위기가 바뀌는 부분이라 일부 악기 소리들을 살짝은 무시하되 대신 피아노 사운드를 ln으로 강조하고 싶었습니다.

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00:55:871 LN Here should end at 00:56:129 since piano note ends here

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sure. and, i fixed it like this:

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00:59:922 / 01:00:009 여기를 2/1 로 바꾸거나 2/2로 바꾸면 좋을것 같네요

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그렇네요, 롱놋 길이를 잘 못 잡았었군요.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18675537/9758

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수정했습니다.

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어 아니네요, 롱놋 길이는 원본이 맞군요. 원래 해당 부분은 피아노를 강조하기 위해 롱놋으로 표현한 부분이였는데, 일단은 일관성과 밸런스를 위해서 원래 상태를 유지하도록 하겠습니다.

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흠 3 / 1로 일단 추가해봤습니다.

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01:07:936 - 앞 부분과 다르고, 01:16:211 - 비슷한 소리의 피아노 사운드와도 일관성이 맞지 않습니다. 크게 다른 소리도 아닌 것 같습니다. 노트 넣을 공간도 충분히 있구요.
01:07:936 - 이걸 싱글로 하시던가 2번째 반복되는 부분이니 처음 나온 파트와 다르게 뒤쪽 파트에 더블을 넣으시는 것도 하나의 방법입니다.

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저거는 실수가 맞네요. 싱글로 바꾸겠습니다.

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01:09:233 Double LN might feel a bit too heavy here

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01:08:543 (68543|2,68802|1,69060|2) - . It was for comparison with the previous three LNs, and it was expressed that way for connection with the double note next(01:09:491 (69491|1,69491|0) - .).

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01:09:319 여기도 1노트 추가

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해당 더블 롱놋은 실제로 오른손을 굴리듯이 연주되는 노래 부분에 맞는 느낌을 주기 위해 3번 LN 4번 단놋 -> 2번 LN 1번 단놋 -> 3번 LN 후 마무리 더블 LN으로 구상된 파트입니다.
때문에 해당부분에 1노트를 추가함은 오히려 피아노 부분을 강조하려는 일관성 벨런스가 깨져버릴것이라 생각되네요.

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01:16:560 여기는 좀 강하게 갈 필요가 있을거 같네요 앞에 롱놋 2개로 2/2 제안해봅니다

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저는 개인적으로 앞에 이전부분이 스윙 -> 스윙 -> 스윙으로 이어졌으니 마지막에 폭발하듯이 끝내는 느낌을 주는것은 트리플 단놋이 더 적합할것이라 생각합니다.
개인적으로 4col도 사용하는것이 어떨까 생각은 해봤지만, 01:16:733 (76733|2) - . 해당 노트와 겹쳐져서 연주감이 별로더라구요. 때문에 일단은 트리플로 유지하도록 하겠습니다.

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01:17:595 - suggest to rearrange with something like this to follow more the decreasing pitch of the piano

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01:17:677 (77677|1,77763|2,77849|3,77849|0,77936|1,78022|2) - . corresponding part and 01:18:194 (78194|2,78280|1) - . To give a different feeling, the direction of note movement was expressed in opposite directions. First of all, I personally like the expression method, so I will keep the current method. However, if there are more opinions in the future, we will consider revising it.

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01:18:888 여기도 1노트 추가

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죠습니다

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01:19:401 - 여기에 LN이 필요한 것 같습니다. 01:19:832 - 이쪽 소리와 매우 비슷한 성질이라 01:19:315 (79315|3,79574|3) - 얘네와 같은 취급으로 Single로 해버리면 어색한 것 같습니다.

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타당합니다.
아래와 같이 수정했습니다.

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01:19:922 여기는 2노트 이상으로

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01:19:836 (79836|0,79836|1,80095|1,80095|0) - . 두 피아노 멜로디의 강조를 위해 일부로 해당 드럼음을 강조하지 않았습니다.

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01:21:987 - 01:32:849 - missing W hitsounds compared to hard

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fixed !

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01:22:250 여기도 빠졌네요

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01:22:164 (82164|3,82164|2,82422|0,82422|1,82422|2,82681|1,82681|3,82681|0) - . 해당 파트는 피아노음을 강조하기 위해서 짜여진 파트입니다. 일부로 넣지 않았습니다.

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01:22:422 이쪽부분 한칸씩 다 밀린거 같습니다

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#3797001/10166409 . 해당 토론 내용과 같습니다.

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01:24:319 여기 드럼노트 빠졌네요

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좋아용

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Can be changed to 1/12 stack here 01:34:578 since piano has a bit delay

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good.

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01:34:578 -

If you change the existing arrangement as shown in the picture, it will be a better finish.

01:16:302 (76302|0,76474|0) - 01:08:026 (68026|0,68198|0) - It will change to a different flow from these, but this is what I felt while playing.

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sure

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