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00:01:056 -doubled for consistency like you did at 00:03:948 (3948|4,3948|6) -

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00:05:032 I think you can do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18594540/7dfe which express the pitch more correctly.

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00:09:008 According to the consistency. Here you missed a note. It should be double. I suggest to have double on col3 and col5 which can express the pitch with 00:07:924 (7924|6,7924|4,8466|3,8466|5) -

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ys

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00:15:876 (15876|5) - move this note to col7 as the same reason #3723670

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fine

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00:19:129 maybe you missed a note for the consistency?

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keep

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for all the doubled thing
we can treat this as a chord sonud 00:22:020 (22020|2,22020|0) -
00:23:466 (23466|6,23466|0,23827|2,23827|4,24189|6,24189|1) - somthing heavy
but why 00:24:550 - 00:25:454 - 00:27:442 - those doubled?

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fot the mixed instuments

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00:29:249 (29249|4,29249|0,29611|6,29611|2,29972|0,29972|4) -
00:30:695 (30695|0,31056|4,31418|1) -
i cant undetstand why those two place had different setting if you catch the beat, cuz now cealy you didn't catch me vocal (otherwise it should be 3/4), so any reason for that? Cuz for me the intensity are pretty similar

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i want to highlight about this part: 00:40:815 - 00:46:237 - this part is calmer in the music wise but the pattern is becoming a little too spiky... especially if you comparing it with 00:29:249 - 00:40:454 -
also that part is having a little too big of a gap with [Easy] as well as too close of a gap with [Hard]

  • while i see that its following pianos, my suggestion is to delete this note 00:40:996 (40996|6,41177|5,42623|2,43888|3,44068|6) - so it can be more simplified by follows the kicks and snares and make the diff gap with [Easy] closer and widens it a bit with [Hard] so it can be more evenly gapped...
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fine

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The 1/1 jack can be the anchor for the 1/2 stream. So 01:06:840 (66840|0,67201|0,67562|0,67924|0,68285|0) - is the anchor here and it is 5 jacks here which I think can be more optimised : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18594555/5bc5

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01:11:538 - while i notice that this part is following pitch relevancy, this could be very problematic to right hand space-bar player since its so heavy on right hand:

try to even it on both hands to make it better in gameplay...
example like this:

  • what i did here is to make the pattern more evenly balanced on both hands while still keep the pitch relevancy (marked note)
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reranged

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01:37:201 so you may missed a note here. Because It has both vocal and drum here.

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didt hear drum

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01:38:647 I think the doubles from here should be changed in different shapes since the sounds here are different from here. One possible way is to make the first double on the left hand and the second on the right hand

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i see that you are consistenlty following vocal at the 2nd chorus as well (01:41:538 - until 01:53:105 - )
so i suggest to add note at here 01:52:201 - to keep consistently follows the vocal as what you did at here too 01:51:840 (111840|3) -

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fine

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01:52:924 Since I'm not sure what's your idea, here there should be a vocal with one clear character but this doesn't count in the next section. So it's up to you.

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I think 01:55:996 (115996|2) - can be not at col3 because it is needed to distinguish the melody 01:55:273 (115273|2,115273|0,115635|2,115635|0) - . So I'd like to change 01:55:996 (115996|2,116719|2) - to col2 with can be consistent with 01:55:454 (115454|5,115815|5) - on col6.

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02:17:527 - 02:31:096 - when comparing this part between [Easy] vs [Normal] vs [Hard], the [Easy] vs [Normal] felt the same amount note and the gap is too close (again, almost 90% same amount), while [Normal] vs [Hard] has a huge gap...

so i suggest you to buff [Normal] more to widens the gap from [Easy] and closes the gap with [Hard], for example:

  • 02:17:927 - 02:18:727 - you can change this type of 1/3 sound into 1/1 LNs to make it a little harder
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rerange the part

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02:19:927 It would be better to make the stairs here different in shape from the previous stairs at 02:19:127. You can see the shape is the same but the pitches of the sounds go in different ways. Mirror or just rearranging one of them can solve this.

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reranged

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02:39:839 (159839|6,160029|4,160219|2) - I have the same suggestion as #3723627 .

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changed the pattern

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fine

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here are some missing snares that i need to mention:
03:15:493 - 03:18:384 - 03:21:276 - 03:24:167 -
all of them are missing snares and you should add extra note to represent the snare sound for consistency as well....

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snare still use one note no mian instrment here

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fine

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