Chiisana Koi no Uta (Takehirotei Remix)

00:01:390 (1,2) - better rhythm if ctrl g'd

00:03:572 wb a rhythm like this https://imgur.com/N6TifGT cause there's no (notable) sound on 00:03:981 (3)

00:04:273 (4,1) - think spacing goes a bit too hard for the intro

00:04:955 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - This entire section should be mapped on 1/2
just the same way you did here 00:00:592 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) -

its literally the same melody, why would you change it to 1/1 sliders and a weird 1/3 double

00:06:046 (3,1) - space this a bit more

00:06:728 - missed sound here,
00:06:955 (4) - is unsnapped,
00:07:319 (2) - is unsnapped,
00:07:546 - is missed.

You don't mapping silent time ticking over piano and raindrops, do you?

00:06:864 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the way you mapped this is really confusing. The piano is a lot more dominant, so I think you should focus on those sounds instead

00:07:117 better to map the 1/3s rather than just mapping as 1/1 cause that's really boring

make 00:07:137 either one of these https://imgur.com/a/IXkDZfD
don't mix both of them because its weird to play + this way you're leaving out both melody and percussion.

00:08:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - all of this should be 1/3 instead

00:11:910 (2) - that note can't be here since the piano started at 00:11:773 tick and it's already passively mapped by a slider's end. You need to change something there in case to map something with a note, but not the 11:910 tick.

00:18:046 (2,3) - mapping 2 note here while only 1 syllable is not natural, better to use one slider.
00:18:592 (5) - mapping AAAAAAAAAA-iiii with a reverse slider is interesting, but not like that. It should start from 00:18:455 tick and reverse back at 00:18:728 so the end lands on 00:19:001, at the tick where your 00:19:001 (5) note at.

And also, sliderend not equals clickable tho. Clickable means you press your key to hit the object, and you do not need a key press to hit the slider's end since you already holding it.

00:18:728 - would be better to make this vocal clickable, since you mainly focus on vocals in this section
00:19:682 - same

00:27:182 (1,2,1) - can just put another 1/1 slider here instead for the vocal like you did with 00:26:773 (5)

00:29:208 your 1-2's here are all the same spacing even though 00:29:617 (2,1,2) has much stronger instruments. I would create some spacing variation and maybe buff the spacing on 00:29:617 (2,1,2) for emphasis

00:30:046 (1) - 00:47:501 (1) -

You could've make the spacing much bigger since stronger instruments. Not telling you to make a cross screen shit but this goes good with 1/1 jumping or 1/2 slider-jumping sections

00:35:481 (3) - would just make this into a 1/1 repeating slider

00:37:682 (1,2) - would've make jumps here since the hardbass hits and it is a topdiff.

The more thing is not the spacing you should apply, but you should understand that you better to make hardbass sounds clickable, all of them, especially topdiff.

00:47:501 (2) - maybe nc this instead of 00:47:773 (2), bc that sound is a lot more worth emphasizing

01:00:592 (1,2) - would've put it to 00:59:501 (1,2) like that

so it creates a pattern with 00:59:501 (1,2).

01:01:935 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The spacing is way too intense for this part of the music, and even if you wanted to keep the back and forth, you should create some more movement when the music changes (vocals come back) at 01:02:481.

01:02:501 - 01:03:455 mapped poorly imo and here's the remap:

I decided to follow the lyrics to make people rest from big jumps and also it sync with the song + good chorus to 01:03:728 (1,2) - part

01:03:728 - having this land a slidertail feels weird cuz it's where the jump pattern should start.

01:07:117 (1) - buzz sound is at 01:07:253
01:07:390 (2) - buzz sound is at 01:07:526

01:07:137 - circle here pls

01:07:935 (1,2,3,4) - This is pretty hard to notice that you have a 1/2 gap in the middle especially since there's a sound that you chose to ignore here 01:08:140 despite it being quite noticeably part of the burst. I think you should just map 01:08:140 active with a circle, or make 01:08:072 (3) - into a kick slider

01:25:137 (1,2) & 01:25:955 (1,2) - - even if this is mapped to vocal i'd change this for simplicity
01:26:501 (1,1) - 1/4 burst missing here
01:27:046 (1,2,3) - mapped to nothing
01:26:092, 01:26:637, 01:27:182 - missing circles
01:27:319 (1) - make this a spaced triple instead for simplicity
01:27:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this a 1/4 burst (440 bpm is heavily overmapped honestly)

01:27:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is really awkward to play. the switch from no movement in the kickslider to slight movement to get to the burst then accel again to hit the burst while being linear is f-ed. would suggest ctrl-g 01:27:592 (2,3,4,5,6) - and reduce it's spacing a bit.

01:27:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - since this is in 1/8 it's basically a 440 bpm burst out of nowhere. That's way too overkill - the sounds are in 1/4 either way. Same with the previous buzz sliders and triples. There's no point in overmapping the song so much

you can put 01:27:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - idea instead of 01:26:501 (1), 01:25:955 (1).

01:30:728 (1,2) - would place each of these sliders one 1/2 tick later so that they start on the vocals
01:31:410 (2,3) - you should also turn these into a slider, there's no point in putting jumps here bc of the long vocal

01:31:819 (5) - 1/2 slider here + 1/2 jump on 01:32:092 & 01:32:228 would fit the timing better than the current pattern, the last slider is mapped to nothing rn