honestly would just cut everything up until here 01:40:554 (1) since theres literally nothing happening
03:36:159 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2) - missed opportunity to have the slider velocity change with pitch of the sax
the changes dont feel correlated to the pitch whatsoever. 03:36:159 (1) - this slider is higher sv than this one 03:36:462 (1) - even though the sax increases noticeably in pitch
05:38:508 (24,1,2) - i dont see why you would kink the stream here seeing as theres no vocal change on it and in the next 3 ish streams you entirely follow the vocals
i get that youre following the guitar, but youre only following vocals in the sections before and after
05:47:583 (1,2,3) - this stream would probably be better as a comically low spaced stream or something else to emphasise the change in pitch in vocals
i think this map is dead but, 06:13:683 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - these ncs makes the stream really ugly imo since theres no spacing change on each i would remove and just make it one long stream
i shouldve elaborated more. the jump doesnt follow circular flow and is also pretty large considering that its an awkward angle
06:31:683 (1,2,3,4) - this has the same spacing as the previous one. spacing should be lowered to around what you have on 06:32:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) for emphasis on the guitar.
06:34:389 (1) - slider end is overlapping the body pretty severely. it could cause breaks on it
06:37:388 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - i dont really see the need to have these be so wiggly and spaced out. keeping spacing around this 06:44:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) would probably be a better option
also would cut everything past 07:32:139 (1) cuz its 3 minutes of nothing and then gunga finger control with no stable bpm whatsoever
10:30:189 (1) - this should just be a slider with no reverses. there are no audible drums on the 2 reverses
10:41:041 (2) - i literally dont think theres a drum here at all. i might be wrong cuz hearing loss but it really doesnt sound like it to me