03:52:554 (7) id stack this under slider 6 for consistency's sake and maybe space out the next combo to the right a bit to make up for lost spacing emphasis
02:37:271 (7,8,9) i would make 7 a 3/4 then slider circle, feels more natural and kinda plays off what was done in kiai 1 and 2. additionally, id also replace 02:36:564 (4) with 2 circles.
01:11:942 (1,2,3,4,5) a general spacing buff for this pattern would be nice so the buildup wasn't for naught
00:45:763 (1) i feel this could use a bit more spacing from 4, though you'd have to rearrange the entire pattern
00:37:838 (4) id unstack this circle, spending an entire beat with your cursor in the same place just kinda boring yk
btw hs (volume is mine) and tags taken from https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1860745#osu/3825620