00:03:813 (9,10,11) - and 00:08:787 (11,12,13,14) - 1/4 reverse slider for both of these pls u dont need to have it so dense cuz then this diff winds up bein a lot denser vs the normal
00:47:647 (4,5,6,7) - ds kinda died n 1/1 vs 1/2 breaks blend together rly badly, should distinguish them more clearly
00:51:533 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3) - https://imgur.com/V8h7HEr this kinda rhythm would b much more straight forward for this kind of difficulty
00:52:466 (4,5,6) - could turn this into a reverse tbh now that i look at it, what i suggested was a bit too straining in terms of rhythm
is there any reason to have it unstacked while everything else (00:51:533 (3,4,1), 00:52:777 (1,2,3)) is stacked?
it feels like it's better to stack it
00:58:528 (4,5) and 01:14:383 (3,4) - these are rather random places to deviate from the approximate ds by so much, would be better for consistency if you kept the ds here as well
ye perhaps, also i think the pattern would be much more readable and clear with 00:58:839 (5) rotated like this https://imgur.com/Tj426cT ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g and reposition basically