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Ron's Muzukashii guest difficulty by [R]
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00:30:524 - would move this note to 00:30:700 - instead, it would sounds more natural with the drums.

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It would also consistent with 01:24:259 -

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Reed_405

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00:53:906 - could add a triplet here as it's have similar drums like 00:55:318 - and would bring nice emphasis with the vocal.

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ok

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01:04:847 - consider making this to dkd to emphasize the 3/4 vocal? I think it would be more engaging to play as well.

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01:06:524 - would suggest to move this note to 01:06:347 - i think giving some emphasis on strong sounds would be better in representating the song. If applied, consider recoloring the patterns around for playability.

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01:30:435 - finisher this? It still the same rhythm with 01:30:083 - 01:30:788 - this would bring better emphasis with the guitar.

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01:39:083 - feels awkward to left this unmapped considering you mapped every prominent drums in this section, could add a note here, would be benefical in emphasize the drum.

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Reed_405

ok, add k

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01:58:583 - how about add a note here for drums? As the drums here is quite intense, this way would emphasize the drums better.

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02:04:583 - this is quite nitpick, but imo the improvisation here is unnecessary cuz there is no 1/4 sounds nor something that make sense to have improv pattern. So consider removing this note, this way would emphasize the finisher nicely.

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ok

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02:17:553 - just a snare sound, should not be a finisher as it would make it overemphasized.

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03:06:435 - make this to normal note

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02:49:847 - finisher? Noticable cymbal and it would be consistent with 02:50:377 -

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03:03:965 - finisher this as well, rhythm is almost identical so i will post it here instead of making new post.

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03:06:788 - finisher

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03:30:612 - finisher

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ok

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03:03:435 - probably missed a note here for the tom drum.

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03:16:671 - make this a normal note? You didn't really make this following note to finisher 01:15:259 - 02:14:553 - so it would be better for consistency.

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03:31:935 - move this to 03:31:671 - then add a k in 03:32:112 - would be better in representating the drums, would be more intuitive to play as well.

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