00:43:682 - missing kick
quite a few missing hs in the kiai too so probably wanna check that
00:50:965 (3,4) - decrease spacing as the drums intensity goes down, increasing it makes no sense
01:42:988 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nah nerf this or do smth interesting cus this aint it
at least nerf 01:43:161 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this part then and make it gradually build up to match what's going on in the vocals and add some more whistles to support the vocals, since rn it's not mega obvious you're emphasising anything lol