00:29:462 (4) - 00:29:635 (5,6,7) - would suggest nerfing the ds between these two since it's kinda large vs the rest of this section and doesn't rly fit the calmness of the section imo
01:52:872 (3) - add whistle since you're ending on piano note, also sounds better snapped to 1/4 here imo 01:56:254 -