00:22:806 (3,4) - those standstills feels kinda inconsistent. Would rather stick to the left rights like you did for the rest parts in this section or making 00:24:584 (4,5) - this one standstill too
00:57:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what about editing those patterns a bit to something simillar like in the screenshot? (idk if everything is visible so):
Doing that i think this section would be a bit more interesting to play than currently