00:50:023 (1,2,3,4) - i think it should looks more like 00:39:277 (1,2,3,4) - this in terms of spacing. would emphasize volume changes better
01:02:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's kinda hard to read the rhythm correctly, how about add NC on 01:02:262 (2) - instead of 01:02:113 (1) - ?