https://i.imgur.com/TDfItnG.png 00:15:351 - here is some pause in piano compared to 00:12:436 - so would be cool to show that with different rhythm
00:16:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too sharp movement for new players can make it a bit more linear and placing them on similar distance can be confusing aswell 00:16:551 - https://i.imgur.com/ameHErv.png + 00:17:922 - https://i.imgur.com/O2ccMOS.png
00:17:922 (4,5,6) - I think this should maintain the even triangle shape you have just before. Here's an example I did by copy pasting the shape rotated 180°. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18346188/c898
00:21:189 - 00:31:818 - It is not fun to beat on the backbeat for almost 10 seconds. And sometimes it is not timed correctly and you hit 00:33:018 (1) on the backbeat. Incorporating vocal timing would improve this.
how about ctrl + j 00:39:522 (4) - than move 00:40:208 (5) - to x198, y287? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18357762/e37c
The flow sound good for osu new player