CYCLE HIT

00:01:035 use lower volume cuz there's a clear difference between this and 00:10:292 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,1) - in terms of volume

I'd also recommend to contrast the kiais with higher volume values like 00:39:435

overall I feel this needs a fair amount of volume switches to represent the dynamics of this song

00:41:663 - Perhaps changing this note to kat? I got a little bit offhand when testing this pattern, and it's quite uncomfortable to hit the latter patterns afterwards.

00:53:406 00:54:777 00:54:777 d to represent the low pitch bass growl like 00:52:463 (7,8,9) -

also 00:54:349 00:55:292 k cuz high pitch synth, could do kdk if kkk k k is too hard

01:45:949 (9,10,11,12,14,15,16,17) - tbh I don't really agree with mapping a clearly 1/4 snapped sound as 1/6 cuz the difference with 01:46:635 (19,20,21,22) - is kinda evident and makes this whole section sound very weird,

imo 01:45:906 mapping this and similars to go with 1/8 5plets would represent this musical section way better instead of that pair of 1/6 quads over the 1/4 synth

01:50:020 - Add a note here? The screeching sound looks like it's following in a 3/4 rhythm, and adding a note here would make the improvisation nicer.

02:46:977 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - 02:52:463 (77,78,79,80,81,82) - these could be a longer 1/6 like kkkdddk cuz the sound

but I'll leave it up to your own preference cuz this would make 02:57:949 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - this shit very hard !!!

also isn't 03:03:863 missing???

03:30:006 - Extra note here? I think it should be removed since it doesn't really follow anything, and you have omitted the note at 03:19:035 so it makes more sense for the sake of consistency to remove here as well.

04:18:863 - IRC with Asagi Mutsuki about toning down final kiai https://foxdoigua.s-ul.eu/kwu8ELYQ

(i don't have logs saved ingame so i had to get from web)

04:29:149 - 04:27:777 - I think you can change this note to kats. I playtested these for many times, and they seem to get easily offhanded after that triplet ends. I would suggest changing them to kats for easier playability + avoid notelocking and offhand.

05:02:749 finisher sv could be higher(?