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I feel like from 00:05:923 (1) to 00:09:507 (13) the spacing should be higher to higlight the intensity of the guitar riff, Not as spaced as 00:00:713 (1,2) ... but a little less :)

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00:11:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - On this section too until 00:20:269 (1)

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alright sure, done for enough that im willing to do

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Also here, 00:10:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), I think the spacing should be higher, Maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18033114/2af7

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aight, kept the decel tho

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00:12:442 (9) - probably appropriate to nc here for the guitar change

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agreege

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00:14:722 (13,14,15,16) - could maybe map these as kick sliders or repeat it would fit much nicer than this weird spacing change

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eh I dont want it to take away from 00:15:701 (1,2,3,4) - kicksliders, & a repeat feels weird with the pause in tapping when it gets more intense so ill leave as is

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00:31:352 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A more intense pattern can fit here, but idunno what you think about it :)

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I think the curves just made it look weird, changed 2nd to straight line

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00:38:531 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - spacing on these should be lower not higher than the stream right before it cuz guitar pitch chills down

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while thats true for the guitars, kicks are introduced here & since its the end of a section having the spacing be more spaced makes more sense to me

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IF ANYTHING I could make 00:39:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a deccel stream

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00:45:223 (1) - remove nc

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I think I fixed this already :skull: they arent NC'd for me

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00:55:173 (3) - NC here?

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01:00:948 (2,8) - Also here and delete combo on 01:00:702 (1) ?

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these nc's dont make any sense, Im ncing based on the measures not the patterns themselves

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01:38:208 (13,14,15,16) - maybe repat or sm since nothing is happening

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and would make 01:38:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - have higher impact also could buff that to follow vocals bit better

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05:49:619 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - repeats so 05:50:275 (1) - this can have higher impact

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also could buff this 05:50:275 (1) - stream a bit

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gonna do deccel's instead of repeats for these since repeats would take away from following vocals on 01:39:186 (9,10) -

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dunno feels weird to have that as one stream since if u make it a repeat next stream will start out stronger and voclas will have bigger impact

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I agree with u, but it will also take away from the impact of the repeats I do on vocals

doing repeats on vocals: good

doing repeats on no vocals & vocals: weird

I like to keep my rhythm choices consistent

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there is difference in dynamic vocals where u can do them good with repeats like u did on some parts (like this 01:43:103 (9,10,11,12,13) - )
but this is just 4 notes of nothing into new start of vocals which just feel under represented like this

eg. 01:38:126 - vocals end here and start here 01:38:534 - rest is just nothing
yes u can hear lil sm on 01:38:452 - but thats not noticable while playing

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also sry ;_; i just want better rms map than sotarks one please fix up old stuff before you rank it to at least match your newer maps in some way im begging you

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I understand fully about the reasoning behind making 01:38:534 (1) - stronger emphasis, & I can see the thought process behind where adding a repeat 01:38:208 (13) - will help give that next vocal stronger emphasis (I do this many times in the map, i.e 02:49:944 (9,1) - 04:34:286 (9,1) - etc)

However, as you said the vocals end on the blue tick 01:38:126 (12) - (but really they start fading out on red tick 01:38:045 (11) - ) which means there is no significant sound on 01:38:208 (13) - to warrent a repeat slider, which has been the main focus of all my repeat sliders throughout the map.

I also feel that having a deccel start from where the vocals begin to fade out 01:38:045 (11) - to create a low spacing stream where there are no (1/2)

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continuation of the vocals from start of said stream, combined with an angle change on the next strong prominent vocal 01:38:534 (1) - is more then enough emphasis to represent the absense of vocals & the start of new strong vocals on 01:38:534 (1) -

I respect your opinion & I greatly appreciate your mods, however this one I personally disagree with due to how I structure the rest of my map's rhythm. If I were to accept this, I would have to change how I do repeat sliders for the entire map for me to feel happy with it (going against my original intention) (2/2)

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also as for the point u mentioned 01:43:103 (9,10,11,12,13) - I will keep these the same (no deccel) to help differentiate them

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" which means there is no significant sound on 01:38:208 (13) - to warrent a repeat slider, which has been the main focus of all my repeat sliders throughout the map." 01:38:208 (13) - theres a strong snare here thats perfect fit for a repeat

"01:38:534 (1) - is more then enough emphasis to represent the absense of vocals & the start of new strong vocals on 01:38:534 (1) -" also this i really think it doesnt it do any justice since vocals start off pretty strong this combined with low spacing that stream is and just flowing into it makes them really underespresnted

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unfortunately I am just going to have to hit you with the good ol'

subjective no change

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shit I forgot to hit resolve

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actually gonna keep this open until I add in the deccels

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added deccels

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01:46:350 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing makes no sense nerf it maybe 0.8x at best

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06:05:274 (1,2,3,4) - could do spacing you have been doing on stuff above to follow guitar pitch

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plus extend that repeat
06:08:203 (12) - and this oen
06:09:507 (13) -
06:10:811 (12) - u get the point its shit to play if u wanna do that map a long slider

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01:46:350 (1,2,3,4) - for these: buildup from 01:45:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - + 01:45:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - etc

06:05:274 (1,2,3,4) - dont feel like this spot in song is as intense as 01:46:350 (1,2,3,4) -

06:10:811 (12) - I do this intentionally to give a better/different emphasis on 06:11:138 (1) - (cuz bigger cymbol crash) but I didnt do it correctly for a few of them so fixed

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its super weird to do it with repeats please try long slider option (from white tick to blue) like this you are just leaving hole mid stream section like its really off putting while playing and it doesnt bring much in tame sections like that there is no super dynamic vocals or anything its just meh

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ill get more opinions on this

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01:52:559 (12) - extend this repeat since there is clear drum sound at 01:52:803

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or do sm like this https://ibb.co/txn1R0Q

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explained in other post, is for emphasis

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nah its ass extend u literally do ths correctly like 5 seconds earlier

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06:14:715 (13) - this ones even worse cuz ur leaving a gap when song is going mode extend the reverses and fix the spacing into next pattern so its not unreadable

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ok yea what was I smokign back then

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01:54:837 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - could do a decel here to follow guitar pitch would be nice

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im following drums here & I dont think guitar intensity is prominent enough

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02:12:939 (7,1) - spacing here is randomly really high for a calmer section so nerf to be similar to 02:09:026 (7,1) - 02:11:635 (7,1) - etc

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big agree tyty

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02:16:035 (5,6,7,8) - could buff spacing a bit to make it more consistent with stuff u did earlier

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sure

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02:35:280 (3) - definitely supposed to be 3/4 and not 2/3

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tru

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02:36:747 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - could make it viggle or sm for some cute variation

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keeping simplicity cuz rest of the map is simple

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fixed nc's as I saw appropriate

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Can you explain why you didn't NC 04:40:156 (5) - when you NC 04:37:873 (1) - ? They look pretty identical to me excluding the very, very minute spacing differences. I am just genuinely curious

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that is due to the fact that I have not updated the map yet because i am lazy lool

should show up now

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03:04:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can space this more :)

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wait I kinda like this

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03:09:512 (13,1,2) - this is really weird
rather do sm dumb like this https://ibb.co/QjQFvZC

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agree its weird, fixed it now I hope

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03:10:503 (1,2,3) - rhythm kinda cancerge, cuz 1/3 drums only rly start on 03:10:719 -, just use sotarks rhythm with a 2/3 slider on 03:10:503 (1) - with active 1/3 after it starting on 03:10:827 -

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id rather make the 2nd one a 1/3 repeat slider to keep playability tbh, the amount of people thats told me they love this rhythm over sotarks' makes me wanna keep it simplified

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03:10:935 - 03:11:043 - missing normal sameplset

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new hs applied, prob double check this

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03:50:117 (1,2) - if ur gonna keep the extended slider for the guitar on 1 then make this spacing readable cuz it looks like a 1/2 gap not 1/4

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tru

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04:10:660 (1) - pretty sure its meant to be 1/6 snapping like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19452186/0fea there is clearly drum on this white tick too 04:10:823 -

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oops got messed up in sv changes

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04:13:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ur spacing should be progressing up here as the guitar goes mode instead of going down

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the amount of times I do this is astounding

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you could add more curves to this part of the stream 04:17:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
just like you did here 04:18:966 (1) - to follow guitar better

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adjusted

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oops responded to wrong post didnt apply this yet

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that many changes too quickly gets messy & I dont like messy >:( keeping for simplicity / aes

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04:17:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - where are the spacing changes bro these shouldnt be the same spacing all across when guitar is varying so much

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04:20:922 (9,10) - could just make it one slider since it one sound

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04:22:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just delete this
thank you :)

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no u

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please ion wanna burning heart 2.0 in ranked :sob:

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04:26:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why are there only flat increases/decreases in spacing here when the rest of the section is mostly accel/decel streams, feel like this part should also be like that

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04:43:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The intensity of the guitar solo asks for a little more spacing here lol

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ok sure

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04:48:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - also why everyone maps this as 1/4 :sob: makes 0 sense and its shit to play please im begging you map it as it should be mapped

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cuz map is simple & also the actual rhythm here would just be aids to play if mapped normally, simplifying rhythm for comfortability is perfectly fine

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05:13:749 (1,2,3,4) - imo spacing a bit overkill here for an overall calm section, would reduce spacing a bit, would help buildup / transition to intense section here 05:15:054 (1,2) - stand out better

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kk toned down

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05:16:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - broken stack into the slider

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ty

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05:21:097 (1) - this stream could be better its pretty meh to play as it is now
could perhaps map this as a slider 05:21:423 (5,6) - so you have fine start for a new stream
then this as repeats 05:22:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
05:23:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this as a decel thingy start at maybe like 1.4x ds since i think it will flow better into this 05:24:180 (1) -
sm like this https://ibb.co/tqkqsYR

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also could nerf 05:24:180 (1) - this part of the stream by 0.2ds so you can follow vocal change here 05:25:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) since its bit stronger than part before

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agree 05:21:097 (1) - stream could be better, adjusted appropriately

05:24:180 (1) - nerfing by .2 would make it easier then the previous streams... goal of this stream is to make it the most intense part of the song/map so im keeping this as is. I do like the idea of increasing spacing on 05:25:484 - but any way I implement it I dont like sadly :< I might revisit this

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05:32:006 (1,1,1,1) - mute these slider ends, sounds horrible with the default hs sound atm

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thank u verm!

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05:32:658 (1) - remove hs from tail

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05:32:006 (1,1,1,1) - honestly just remove hs from all these tails, makes no sense to have hs on them

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done

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05:34:293 (8,1) - spacing here a bit high and out of place compared to other similar areas, prob nerf a bit to help other more intense downbeats like 05:39:671 (3,1) - stand out

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and just to be more consistent with 05:44:725 (12,1) -

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toned it down, lmk if needs more (did it best I could while still keeping visuals)

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05:49:619 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would be cool to contrast these better from 05:50:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - the vocals on downbeat clearly are more intense but spacing / contrast feels identical so perhaps make this like 01:47:002 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 03:02:663 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - how you did it everywhere else

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06:00:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - u did it here also so just use this rhythm

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yea honestly makes so much sense ty

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06:25:169 (1,1) - one of these shouldnt be nced probably the slider

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sry for my sloppiness

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06:32:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - could decrease spacing on each new thingy would be really cool also nc them

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kk applied

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06:45:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this shouldnt just be doing flat increases in spacing it should be a progressive spacing increase into a progressive spacing decrease as the guitar fluctuates

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ok makes sense

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06:52:547 (3,4) - i get it i really do but like could we avoid doing this almost at the end of the map for ppl to sb on :sob: just space it out

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thank u for forcing me to change it :sob:

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06:59:084 (1) - remove nc

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07:01:880 (1) - i know ur going for a cool sliderart but currently it really is hard to tell where the sliderball would go since 07:05:018 - these full overlapped sliderbodies might cause the player to misread it

so i'd suggest going with a different idea of sliderart with less confusing paths.

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for idea maybe u can draw like a 40 degree katana looking slider since the girl in the bg has a katana (or whatever that sword type is called i forgor)

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yea good idea, I changed it to smth a little simpler but it still kinda burais.

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07:01:880 (1) - i think this should end 1/8 earlier, held sound ends on 07:11:132 - in song

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truee, applied

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