Dilemma

00:00:799 - place circle or make a slider at the first circle that you placed and end it here

00:03:352 - place slider. 00:03:511 - end slider

00:05:905 circle

00:06:065 (2) circle, you are missing alot ofsounds

00:10:852 (3) - unsnapped

00:10:852 - this section forward, I'm not sure which rhythm you are following, is it vocals? if so then you had ignore most of them like from 00:11:091 - 00:11:730 - as examples. If I'm wrong feel free to tell me.

00:11:011 (4) - There's no sound in the music on this slider, and the objects immediately before and after map the vocals so I would suggest moving it later by 1/4 to be on the vocal. (n.b. I'm going through timing/snapping issues on top diff now assuming that it's the same on all diffs so I can cover all at once)

00:11:410 - make this a burst, feels better like that so place a circle

00:12:128 (2,3,4,5) - and 00:17:235 (1,2,3) - has the same sound construct imo, determine which rhythm you use. I looks inconsistent

00:12:926 - and 00:13:086 - are fine but why 00:13:245 - ,<-- remove this circle

00:13:405 (1) - remove circle

00:22:980 (4,5) - I think a slider here would be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17883939/d876

00:24:894 (5) - It'll be better if you extend this slider until 00:25:772 - and mute the sliderend. It's because the vocal doesn't stop at 00:25:533 -

00:30:799 (1) - how about make this slider into 1/2 reverse slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17900216/ab2f ? it will give feedback for vocal at 00:30:958. (maybe you need to manage the sv and slider shape again if you agree with this)

00:32:394 (3,4,5) - why triple? there's no sound that support this, this goes for many other similar cases like this through out the map.

00:37:182 (4,5) - make it into triple/burst? because the vocal at 00:37:261

00:39:097 - remove slider and add circle 00:39:256

00:40:214 - stream here, ex https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17883952/20ca

00:42:448 (3) - Shape's kinda outstanding and considering there's nothing extraordinary there it feels kind of weird

00:43:964 (2) - i'm not sure it was intentional or not but there's no really a sound there so i would advise to move it to white tick and add circle on red tick

00:47:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels kind of weird with following considering vocals there, how about this?

https://imgur.com/M71Qcdt

00:47:873 (5) - why 1/4 slider? shouldn't it be 1/2?

00:51:065 - rhythm should be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17883965/b0de obviously note placement up to you

00:58:405 - this makes no sense, just make the slider longer and remove the rev

01:16:437 - no following vocals?

01:27:448 (4) - Slider end is 1/8 later than the vocal

01:30:001 - make this a slider and try to find other issues like this

01:43:086 (1,2,3) - 4 notes here, this should have an extra object

01:50:825 - 01:51:304 - 01:51:464 - missing notes, maybe make it 5 note stream or add kick slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17884000/c005, for 01:51:384 - make it a 5 note stream.

01:51:065 (2,3,4) - Same here, the rhythm continues through the slider and the gap so I would make the stream longer or make it a repeating slider

02:00:639 - stream should start from here with increasing spacing overtime.

02:08:299 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe change this, it feels off as there's no sound for triples, and it doesn't really follow the vocals.

02:09:256 (2,3,4) - make it a 5 notes stream

02:13:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - No real reason to make these triplets instead of connecting them. Same at 02:34:468 (6,1) (but the first gap is ok here), If you want to map the vocals I would say you can cut the stream (increase spacing for 1 object) without interrupting the rhythm

02:13:565 - to 02:14:043 - should be full stream instead of triples. And as for 02:14:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why a stream? the music doesn't show signs for this.

02:19:469 - 5 notes stream here

02:22:660 (2) - what happen here? shouldn't it be 1/2?

02:22:980 (1,2) - remove slider and make it 3 notes leading to 02:23:458 - then here, remove stream and make 1/2 slider followed by 1 note and slider, finally fix this rhythm here 02:24:176 (1,2,3) - doesn't really focus on anything really. Examples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17884051/b646 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17884056/83ba

02:34:469 - stream should start from here

02:39:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again, why stream? is better if you follow the vocals.

02:44:203 (2) - Shorten this last slider so the end is on the vocal, as even with a quieter hitsound at the end it still sounds weird if it's not on anything