Tsurezure Monochrome (TV Size)

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Artist Name: フジファブリック
Romanised Artist: Fujifabric
Title: 徒然モノクローム (TV Size)
Romanised Title: Tsurezure Monochrome (TV Size)
Tags: yukizura- tsuritama fishing ball yuki haru natsuki akira op opening anime jpop j-pop pop japanese

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https://www.fujifabric.com/special/fablist
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMgM8Pg470s

wb -1592,397.350993377483,4,2,1,70,1,0 instead of two points

arutama cooked 😭

Given that the record company for their 2013 album (which the full song is on), Voyager, is Sony, I recommend adding Sony to the tags. I know this isn't the most important suggestion, but it is something noteworthy.

Red line offset on the intro sounds misplaced by about 25ms~30ms late, namely 00:00:794 -> 00:06:754 (especially when you slow down objects on and around 00:05:363 - ). Could knock back a little and add a reset around 00:06:754 .

Pogger

I'll continue my mod once the intro timing offset is fixed btw - feel free to poke me once you do so.

Silencing sliderticks works better for the intro since the song doesn't get as instrumentally dense as the verses, though works in detriment of feedback for parts like 00:32:582 -> 00:54:833 - since sounds like kicks/snares are usually ignored in most diffs in favour of vocals. For the lower diffs especially I think it's worth considering adding and changing to a duplicate sampleset or something so the sliderticks are heard.

Some of the triplets like 00:14:105 / 01:22:449 etc. are lacking audio feedback. Just having soft-hitnormal may be not enough. Consider adding maybe soft-claps or drum-claps to these.

00:51:456 (6) - Missing whistle
00:02:383 / 00:05:562 - Missing potential finish

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Reminder to add "j-rock jrock rock" to the tags later

The map is fine but it is not rankeble, I notice that the patterns are 90% good but literal it is, just turn around the entire screen, it lacks structure and logic in the position of the objects, it tries to improve the flow more to make it more comfortable and nice to press

nice map sir ;3

green line at 00:00:009 on easy normal and insane before any red lines should be deleted

combo 3 is kinda dark, i feel like 80 luminosity works a bit better than 60

You should make Yuki the actual diff owner of the top diff with this button https://puu.sh/IyFSU.png and let them respond to mods, unless there's some kind of reason for not doing so. (In which can you can explain in reply to this.)

timestamps are for the insane, but should apply to all diffs

00:02:383 - 00:05:562 (1) - should have soft-hitfinishers
00:07:946 (1) - should have soft-hitclaps
00:04:966 (2,3,4) - should have drum-hitclaps
00:05:761 (2,3) - should have drum-hitfinishers

I don't see a reason why there should be normal-hitwhistles here 00:22:449 (2) - 00:25:628 (2) - (more like that in this section). In general I would suggest using a lot more soft-hitwhistles on vocals instead of normal one's since those fit more specific sounds instead of melodic stuff.

"audio 2.mp3" and "normal-hitclap.wav" are unused, so they should be removed

Combo color 3 could be a little brighter maybe to make approach cirles more visible against full dim. Just a little.

Good luck with ranking this <3

affwe

Audio quality is currently too low -> http://puu.sh/IxRMY/11039d15e1.mp3, use this mp3 instead, make sure to adjust timing points and offset

You could add whistles to objects with vocals to give the player more feedback.

Pop is missing from tags (j-pop/jpop isn't sufficient)

uh fix stuff before i come back (just in-game me ig)

drum-hitwhistle and soft-hitwhistle are unused

shee

pog map

I'm begging you my pardon but I am not seeing any metadata for the song itself. Please add this in the map description or simply add the information here in the mod thread as note :)

Background picture is too large. You need to shrink it.

Small suggestion: 01:10:797 add here a new volume point with Kiai time on, and also add here 01:10:599 one, WITHOUT Kiai time on. (Yes AiMod will be annoyed, this is not a problem) but - you emphasise this 2nd part of the chorus with another star burts. (Mainmenu & Ingame Stars shooting = Fun)

offset 79 (+10) works better for me

Cute Set, good luck! :) (Me hyping a Japanese Map. POG)

ctrl + shift + a

check distance snapping issues

go

nice

good

yoshino is tsuyoi

ar suggestion:
e: 3
n: 5
h: 7

01:21:923 chorus ends here so move the end of kiai here.

could move the preview point back a smidge to let you hear the whole "ha" sound in the preview as it is currently cut off a bit.

remove the .osb in the folder since it doesn't do anything

bg resolution is too high. here's a shrinked version: https://og.s-ul.eu/WqHVB5jt