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00:03:723 (1,2,3) - Since you already introduced 3/4 rhythm it would be great to present it here also since its supported by both the vocals and the instruments, current rhythm doesnt really convey this because the 1/2 ticks dont have something really notable on their own

I Would recommend soemthing like https://i.imgur.com/ryuDAZS.png to better reflect this

00:08:135 (2) - this is more of a subjective thing but I tried ctrl-g and placing this on x:104 and it felt really natural to play with how the song develops, because you get rid of the direction change between these 2 00:07:252 (1,2) - and you end up direction changing only the vocals inside the objects.

By cutting one direction change you effectively kinda balance this pattern in terms of movement

00:24:458 (3,4,1) - you can get more impact out of this pattern if you delete 00:24:679 (4) - so you have a nice 1/1 gap to cover a lot of movement.

Increasing density in this section is a good idea and I think you had a nice development going but I think that it would be the best to introduce density increase in the end of this measure where the vocals are the strongest like here 00:30:855 (2,3) - . (more on this on #3016598 )

00:30:855 (2,3) - Feels really barren during mapping to go for a rhythm gap when the vocals are the strongest on the whole measure

Would recommend a rhythm like https://i.imgur.com/4CMuQEQ.png (1) is on 00:30:193 -

What this rhythm does is:

• 00:30:855 - creates a 1/1 gap only after this part to add a nice hold effect on the vocal
• 00:31:296 - continues the 1/2 mapping here to emphasize the drums, adding more density as we reach the vocal climax of the section
• 00:31:958 - maps this as the start of a slider instead of a slider-end. This creates a nice connection with the next section of the map and starts the movement on the first 2 beats of it

00:32:841 - If #3016598 is applied which I would strongly suggest for it to be applied, this remains unmapped with the new rhythm, since it was a slider end before. So how should this be mapped now?

00:33:061 (5) - / 00:33:502 (7) - these try to map the red tick vocals here, however i feel like the vocals are really really fluid in this section, and the drums are a bit more important, so how about we layer them in a drum rhythm instead of just mapping them as a main focus?

https://i.imgur.com/QZt6NLt.png Consider this rhythm

• 00:32:841 - the 3 1/2 notes here map both the strong instrumental but also cover a vocal note in a way that it feels like it connects the song

00:39:017 (1,2) - Vocal layering can still happen well here even if you use a rhythm like https://i.imgur.com/LdBAraD.png but on this instance you also get some focus on the melody after without being too dense on the pattern

00:50:267 (2,1) - tight walk, could reduce

00:55:120 (2,3,4) - Not a fan of the rhythm here because there's not highlight on the cymbal on 00:56:664 - which is the centerpiece of your emphasis in every section.

I have 2 suggestions:

https://i.imgur.com/kXS5O3K.png If you want to add more density beforehand on the vocals and have a 1/1 gap.

https://i.imgur.com/QHS4VTO.png if you want to continue the same rhythm as the previous kiai patterns with some patterning variation

these 2 options have the strong cymbal on a sliderhead which leans closer to your usual patterning