will stay as it is, it will be inconsistent with a similar part like this suggestion here: 00:14:922 (1) -
00:30:587 (1) - I think it'd make more sense to start this slider on 00:30:411 - since that's where the vocal starts
Would also consistent with 00:40:846 (1) -
00:31:252 (2,3,4,5) - a bit boring to have this part as a natural curve shape like this, maybe you can move 00:31:415 (3) - into x:262 and 00:31:578 (4) - into x:331. So that you have some movement control in drum transition at 00:31:415 (3,4) -
adjusted the flow in 00:54:378 (2,3,4) - instead so that its more consistent from similar parts in the chorus
00:55:356 (1) - 01:00:574 (1) - 01:05:791 (1) - 01:11:009 (1) - Consider dashes to these? They're all on the "climax" of the vocal lines/sentences and most of them also have a finish hitsound, having them as walks feels a bit underwhelming
01:15:256 - missing note? or you are intented to leave it empty cuz density? tbh i wonder why you decided to leave this guitar sound as you started to follow guitar at 01:13:626 (1) - . You have a note at 01:19:332 (2) - eventho it has lower tone tho
01:21:941 (2,4) - if you bothered with the density, personally id like to delete this note cuz this isnt really important note to keep, also leaving this spot empty will give better rhythm for preparing the drum sound at 01:22:756 (1,2,3,4,5) -.
You can move 01:22:104 (2) - a bit more to the right