If you're going to add whistle instead of starting from 02:00:846 (1) - 02:04:033 (6). You should actually start at 01:58:971 (2) - 02:06:283 (6) -
from what i can see your downtimes are a lot more intense compared to the kiais. if you want your kiais to stand out it makes no sense for the low intensity portions to be so much more intense than the kiai
00:37:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this in general i dont really recommend because its too difficult to be justified as buildup. and the kiai that follows after is much easier to play
in comparison i think 01:56:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is fine because its within the kiai and its intention can be better understood
Try to make these patterns 02:12:096 (1,2,3,4), 02:13:221 (1,2,3,4), 02:14:346 (1,2,3,4). like 02:10:971 (1,2,3,4).
00:01:596 ~ 00:10:033 I can hear the scale more clearly in these early notes than in the middle. So you can change the intervals to express the scale better.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16107832/2dc0
00:37:596 - when makeing stars like this (I don't know how to call the thing so I'll say what circles do I mean)
4, 5 circles in this case should be centered if u know what I mean, it would look better imo. (applies to some other on the map another example: 01:29:346 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:19:596 to 00:36:471 - I generally think that u should use more sliders than jumps on that section cause it would fill the rhythm more
for example 00:24:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1, 3, 5 portray more important sounds than 2,4,6 yet they have almost the same spaceing as if they were the same, they're not. and later that's why I have a problem with kiai, it doesn't feel like a climax or something harder than the rest of the map. (applies to the rest not only to this particular one)
I tried changing to sliders but that just makes it look weird. So I'm keeping it the same. I think it works well because the song goes up high while the notes do as well. I changed the 1, 3, 5 part. you were right. thank you! im still not sure about the kiai part. But we will see! thanks!
Nope, it doesn't work well because of 00:34:033 (5) - if the slider ctrl + h (flipped to the other side) it would be a wide angle from 00:33:846 (4,5,1). Maybe what you meant by "move it so it fits" would make sense, but I don't know how to make sense out of it LOL
Honestly, kinda funny, it was my very first original idea. I had it up there to make a "triangle" but I was thinking about the wide angles of 00:30:471 (4,5,1) - so I hesitated because wide angles look nasty to me at times xD But fixed! No more doubts about that! It looked better as a triangle as well! Thank you!