00:01:763 (1763|2,1763|1,1763|0) - I don't see a reason to use a triple here since you didn't use triples for any other kick in this section (apart from the one at the beginning but that one is justified)
00:33:998 (33998|0,33998|1) - there's no sound playing at this timestamp or anything so I think you should delete this double
00:38:410 (38410|3) - I can't hear any sound here so I suggest you delete this note.
Similarly, 00:39:821 (39821|2) - there's no kick here so I think you should also delete this one.
Same thing with 00:40:527 (40527|1) - but also 00:40:468 (40468|2) - this note should be at 00:40:498 - in 1/4 snapping
00:41:762 (41762|1,41762|0) - I'd like to see this double in the same column as this one 00:41:645 (41645|3,41645|2) - (then of course mirror these 00:41:880 (41880|3,41880|2,41998|2,41998|3,42115|1,42115|0,42233|0,42233|1) - ) similar to what you did with 00:41:880 (41880|2,41880|3,41998|2,41998|3) - and 00:42:115 (42115|0,42115|1,42233|1,42233|0)
00:56:468 - throughout this section the timestamps in which you put doubles for kicks seem to be pretty arbitrary, for example: you never put double at the end of a 3 note 1/4 stair (like this one for example 00:56:586 (56586|2,56645|1,56703|0) - ) yet you seem to have no problem putting doubles in the middle of a 5 note stream (here for example: 00:58:939 (58939|1,58998|0,59056|3,59056|2,59115|1,59174|0) - ) this is pretty contradictory to me, why not put doubles in a 3 note stair if a 5 note stream seems to cause no problem at all? also 00:57:174 (57174|3) - is a single, while 01:02:821 (62821|2,62821|1) - is a double, despite being exactly the same
00:57:762 (57762|1,57762|2) - reduce this to a single since this is the only time you used a double for a sound like this and there doesn't seem to be any reason to make this one a double
01:10:467 (70467|1) - since this is 1/3 a double for the kick here shouldn't be too difficult for this difficulty imo
01:25:526 (85526|0,85585|1,85644|2,85644|3,85761|1,85820|0,85879|2,85879|3,85997|1,86056|2) - I'm pretty confident snapping here is wrong, it should be 1/6
01:31:173 (91173|0,91173|1) - similar to my mod in alexa's diff I think this note should be in a different column to 01:31:056 (91056|1,91056|0) - and 01:31:291 (91291|1,91291|0) - since they sound a bit different
01:53:291 (113291|3,113291|2,113291|0) - I don't see a reason for this to be a triple, as it's just a kick like every other double in this section
01:57:173 (117173|3,117173|0) - since this is the start of a new section (or at least a new segment inside this section), and this is quite a stronger sound than the rest of the kicks in this section you should make this a triple