00:29:985 (1,2,3) - these should be placed away from 00:29:399 (4,6) - imo since they're following a different vocal phrase, if you wanna keep the pattern you could maybe ctrl+g or something like that to have a clearer transition into the new combo?
01:36:547 (5,6) - 感觉这个拉米还是和前面的拉米一样上下错开比较对劲
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16191963/bda8
顺便感觉1 3在上面好一些，因为01:35:610 - 这个antiflow有点不是很合这个地方。
从01:35:375 - 到01:35:610 - 3个音都是渐强的没有啥比较急剧的变化； 另外拉比米音调高一些，拉在上面打着体感也会好点。
02:25:766 (4) - 5% volume slider head, this may be hard to hear over the song.
02:27:641 (4) - 5% volume circle, this may be hard to hear over the song.
02:29:047 (3) - 5% volume slider head, this may be hard to hear over the song.