00:48:417 (1) - space this further from 00:46:817 (2) - just like you've done with 00:45:217 (1,2) -
01:01:217 (1,2,3,4) - 02:05:217 (1,2) - this could've been more dense could add more active notes for the vocals
01:24:417 (2,3) - 01:26:017 (1) - 01:30:017 (1) - tone down spacing here jump doesn't seem necessary
02:15:617 (2,3) - 02:15:617 (2,3) - 02:23:617 (1,2) - 03:16:417 (2,1) - 03:22:017 (1,2) - 03:24:017 (1) - 03:30:817 (1,2) - would reduce spacing, it's the same if not bigger as 1/1s like 02:01:217 (3,1) - despite being more straining to aim
03:16:283 (1) - can space this away from 03:16:017 (2) - since it's 1/1 gap, it was better how it was before