There are some 1/4 sounds missing in the intro part like 00:02:950 - , and 00:03:464 - can be mapped along with the vocal. The pattern here is maybe too similar to Hard, so you can buff it with 1/4 snaps and stronger chord, until 00:23:864 - .
And again about the gap from Hard, many places have even weaker chord/LN usage vs Hard, for example:
00:22:836 - less sounds focused
00:29:007 - single LN vs double LN and double release
00:44:093 - simplyfied pattern vs 1/4 snapping and LN jack
01:03:978 - much more complicated LN pattern in Hard
and many more... There are still large space to buff the pattern with chord, LN or minijacks if you want a little bit more technical.
You use jumptrill to emphasize 1/4th drum rhythms, it's ok even though ppl today are quite against it. But for a longer phase of chord trill, try to make a little variation to make it less bland, and you can certainly use different pattern in another part of music.
Otherwise the structure looks satisfying, and check AImod about timing reports in this diff.