02:33:441 (1,2,3) - think it would be better to unstack these since the current pattern suggests the same sound is played thrice
02:42:013 (1,2) - would avoid making this equidistant from 02:40:659 (3) - and 02:42:915 (1) - since there's an additional 1/2 gap on 02:42:915 - which could make this a bit too easy to misread for novice players. I don't see other points where you do this kinda thing so yea