00:11:716 - honestly too monotonous. This is not to mention all the 1/4th pattern is just there for the sake of being there. I’d recommend to follow the vocal https://i.imgur.com/JJwlsl0.jpeg or more specifically the “vocal flow” instead of its vocals “vocal”
02:22:383 - yes
00:11:716 - till 00:17:049 - ,
from your response at #3281724 , I believe if you're trying to go for progressive pattern here, I believe the 1/4 is still not necessarily needed because the 1/4 is not quite relevant with the vocal sound.
I believe it would be good to focus on focal from 00:11:716 - till 00:17:049 - and then go with 1/4 instrument detail from 00:17:049 - till 00:21:049 - .
in short, 00:11:716 - till 00:17:049 - could do something like normal diff has but buff it a bit and remove the 1/4 for a better progressive pattern.
just suggest 00:32:383 (32383|1) - change to column 4
because this pattern 00:32:383 (32383|1,32466|2,32549|1) - its not comfortable for newbie player
and if you change it will make the impression of the note like left and right
00:49:049 - till 00:49:383 - ,
quite inconsistent with overall pattern concept around this section.
it should be something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18115362/ad9e since the LN at this section is only for roll-y growl-like synth sound.
if you want to keep the LN, at the very least remove the note at 00:49:133 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18115361/0f60 .
I would recommend to remove the LN and the note for consistency tho.
01:15:716 - this (and to an extension insane) feels very…. Empty. Well, there is vocal there, why not highlighting some of them. Idk smth like https://i.imgur.com/DpS1bqd.jpeg ig
02:11:716 - this one especially
02:07:216 (127216|0,127383|1) - ctrl+g this thing, because it seems to have similar sounds as - 02:06:716 (126716|3,126716|0) - https://i.imgur.com/U1o5tad.jpeg consistency stuff
for 02:36:883 (156883|0,156883|3,157383|1) - , why dont u make same method like 02:39:549 (159549|0,159549|3,159883|1,160049|3,160049|2) - ?
imo its seems same for me