Future Cider

00:01:050 -> 00:21:049 - this and normal diff feels very monotonous without any significant differences and interesting cues. i feel like going for vocal-only focus would do a benefit. example would be deleting non-vocal - 00:03:383 (3383|3) - and changing some into LN - 00:07:049 (7049|3,7383|1,8049|3) -

02:11:716 - applicable to all similar section

for any section like 00:01:050 - till 00:11:716 - ,

I just wanna ask, why did you not use double for all the obvious different sound like 00:01:716 - just like what you have at kiai?

I personally think it's such a waste to not use the double

00:07:049 - till 00:09:049 - ,

the vocal LN usage is a bit questionable here.

the sudden break at 00:07:716 (7716|2) - doesn't feel natural since the long vocal sound is still there.

the same long vocal sound is also available at 00:08:383 (8383|3) -

there are two ways to fix this.

1. make 00:07:716 (7716|2) - & 00:08:383 (8383|3) - LN just like normal diff

or

2. make 00:08:716 (8716|1) - LN so you will have a second sound LN vocal pattern that goes along with 00:07:716 (7716|2,8049|0) -

I personally would suggest to go with option number 1

00:19:716 (19716|1) - ,

Technically, there's nothing wrong with this but if we compare it with normal diff, the gap is quite wide.

I would personally suggest to split this 1 4/1 LN into 4 1/1 LN.

how about to remove 00:21:549 (21549|0) - ?
to avoid using more than 5 consecutive 1/2 notes.

why not to add some note at 00:24:383 - & 00:24:716 -
like what u do at 00:29:716 (29716|1,30049|2) -

00:42:383 - double?

01:11:549 This 1/2 LN here breaks RC guideline that states: "Long notes should be held for at least one beat. Faster release timing is too difficult for players of this level." I would recommend getting rid of this note entirely and changing the note at 01:11:383 into a 1/1 LN in exchange

01:14:383 - vs 02:07:716 - ,

both share the same sound against each other yet you mapped it in different way, could have been more consistent.

would suggest to rearrange 02:07:716 - into the same way as 01:14:383 - had

how about to move 01:45:716 (105716|1,106049|1) - at 3rd col ( 1234 )
imo place a note while pressing LN on 1 hand is too hard for easy

01:57:216 (117216|3,117383|2) - pindahin ke tengah? keknya bagus