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00:01:247 (1,1,1,1,2) - with this rhythm it's already something that you would do on easy, just follow the thing with lower spacing and some simplification if needed

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I just added sound.

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00:01:247

00:01:247 (1,2) - 00:02:675 (1,2) - 00:05:532 (1,2) - とかの流れの違和感がすごいので、普通にds保った方がベターに見えます

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保ちます

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00:06:246

00:06:246 - この音取りだとclap違和感すごいので消した方がよさそう

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00:11:782

Yuuma

00:11:782 (5,6,1) - 1/4のリバースに変えましょう

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おｋ

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00:21:246

Yuuma

00:21:246 (1,2,3) - 他の人がどう言うかわからないけど、俺はHardではこういう音取りをあまりしないほうがいいと思ってます。00:21:246 (1,2,3,4) - を1/1ずつにサークル置くか、それとも1/2に変えるか、どちらかにしたほうがいいです

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1/2に変え

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00:28:300

Yuuma

00:28:300 (4) - もっと00:28:032 (3) - に近づけてください

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00:31:425

sanairrt

00:31:425 (1,2,3) hardでこの間隔はやりすぎだと思う

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ナーフしてみた！

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00:33:925

sanairrt

00:33:925 (5,1) - ここの間隔は 00:34:104 (1) ここ強調出来てるからいいんだけど
00:33:746 (4,5) ここの間隔を広くするのはちょっと意図がつかめなかった。もっと狭くしていいと思う

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00:52:854

00:52:854 (2,1) - スタックずれてる

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fix

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00:59:461

00:59:461 (5,1) - 尾とくっつけないとさすがに読めないと思う。あと00:59:818 - に特に拾うべき音ないから、1/1スライダーにしちゃうのもあり

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01:25:175 (4,1) - 01:27:675 (1,2,1) - 01:30:532 (1,2,1) - も遠すぎる

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01:54:818 (1,2,1) - 01:57:675 (1,2,1) -

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03:58:032 (5,1) - 04:00:889 (5,1) - 04:03:746 (5,1) -

5 years agoLast edited by BaAR_Vendel 5 years ago.

Fix

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01:08:746

01:08:746 (2) - 今の置き方だと流れが少し崩れるのでx:486 y:174くらいがいいと思います

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01:27:675

01:27:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hardの割には連打が多いような気がするので1/4リバース２個にするのはどうでしょう

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01:30:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - ＾

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01:54:461 (1,2,3,4,1) - これ以外の難易度はすべて1/4リバース３つだったのでHardでも1/4リバース３つでいいような気がします

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01:57:318 (1,2,3,4,1) -＾

5 years agoLast edited by -__-_ 5 years ago.

個人的にはHardの連打は３連が限度だと思ってる(主観)ので３連以上はすべて1/4リバースでいい気がします。

5 years agoLast edited by -__-_ 5 years ago.

ラストパート以外の5連をリバースに変えます。

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01:41:157

01:41:157 - missing sound

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Change to Circle

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01:42:675

01:42:675 (4) - 伸ばしてる音を拾ってるわけではないから、赤線の音意識で1/2スライダーにしたほうがよさそう

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02:05:532

02:05:532 (1,2,1) - (5,1,2)みたいなNCにしたほうが曲に合いそう

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02:08:032

02:08:032 (2) - would be nice as circles, it's a very end of pre-chorus section and would give a nice impact going into it

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It's an aggressive rhythm, but interesting.

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02:10:711

02:10:711 (1) - 02:13:568 (1) - 02:22:139 (1) - 02:24:996 (1) - ほかのkiaiでこのNCの使い方してなかったのでけすといいと思う

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02:20:354

02:20:354 (2) - 青線の音も一貫性がないので素直に単発でいいと思う

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03:06:246

03:06:246 (1,1) - これ読ますのはさすがに厳しいと思うので離した方がよさそう

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少しずらしました

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03:25:354

03:25:354 - you could map this sound and stack it on top of 03:25:532 (1) - for emphasis

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03:33:389

03:33:389 (1) - みたいに03:32:675 (1,2) - も1/1スライダーで十分な気がする

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03:46:425

03:46:425 (4) - reverse would sound way better here, there's a really strong sound on 03:46:604 - that's being ignored

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03:52:675

03:52:675 (8,1) - 1/2の間隔に見えちゃうのでもう少し離した方がいいと思う。RCのガイドライン

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離しました

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