12:12:556 (4) - till end
Would recommend you try give a bit more of emphasis on cymbals by having a bit of spacing increase on them you emphasize some (like with 12:09:484 (3,1) - ) but others (like 12:06:773 (3,1) - 12:06:773 (3,1) - and others) get a similar spacing as the jump they are in, which doesn't make them stand out a lot, which I feel they should as a crash is by itself an important sound
some of them are reflected on the gradual intensity of the vocal, not sure if that make sense. short story ill leave it.