00:01:459 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - this whole section here is only sliders, I'd break up the rhythm with some circles since sliders are harder for newer players
00:14:792 (1,2,3) - (1) and (3) are almost stack together, you may want to make its space bigger
00:22:125 (4) - tbh I'd just make this a 1/1 slider for the guitar rather than mapping to the drums
00:38:792 (1) - 00:52:125 (5) I think you need to focus more on the red ticks at sliderend instead of white ticks right after them. Since those white ticks is literally silence and the main sounds are in the red ticks. So I think you may changed it
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I think this map style is more easier than the usual Normal diffs, which I think is better to use in Easy one. So you should map at the red ticks more ( like I said above ), then it more easier to catch the beat when play it
00:38:792 (1) - silder end silence, also at 00:40:125 (3) , 00:41:458 (5) - , 00:45:458 (3) - , 00:49:458 (1) - , 00:50:792 (3) - and 00:52:125 (5) -
00:54:125 (8) - would def do something a bit different here with this pattern, players will see this slider fading in as they click 00:53:125 (6) - which could cause them to misread since it's closer to it than 00:53:458 (7) -
00:58:792 (1,2) - this isn't following time-distance very well, move these up a bit so this pattern is easier to read
01:03:458 (3) - there's nothing on the white tick here, start this on the red tick instead for the guitar