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Avril Lavigne - Wish You Were Here

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Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月11日 at 1:12:07

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Wish You Were Here
Tags: Softrock Pop Goodbye Lullaby
BPM: 83
Filesize: 9887kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Damn Crazy (4.89 stars, 549 notes)
  2. Damn Easy (1.4 stars, 180 notes)
  3. Damn Hard (4.55 stars, 435 notes)
  4. Damn Soso (3.02 stars, 264 notes)
Download: Avril Lavigne - Wish You Were Here
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All those crazy things you said

You left them running though my head

You're always there, you're everywhere

But right now I wish you were here



Thx for those 32 people had modded this map~! They are
SPOILER
[ Dan Go ]
Priestess
Strawberry 2 times
bossandy
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Haruhi_sama tried a GD
Sync
kissfly
lbh15174
merchat7
mancusojuanmattos
tutuhaha
Roddie
No_Gu
Shana Aisaka
Scorpiour
Lucy-Kaede
wcx19911123
Chewin
L_P
xMatryoshka
pianiac
Nyquill
stickmeister
lovhin456
Dusty
The 08 team_Bourdon
[Te][Amo]
akrolsmir
Starry
-Bakari-
SapphireGhost
Also Thanks to:
SPOILER
Alace for timing and a higher quality music track
sherrie__fay for skinning help
[ Dan Go ]
For the ez one:
00:15:669 4&5 moveto the center then up 2
00:34:317 5 down 1
00 44 615 2 ctrl+R
02 09 735 change the position of pink n purple notes
[ Dan Go ]
for the normal:
00 17 506 2 up 1
00 17 868 3 right 1
01 00 517 4 up 1
01 49 241 6 up1 right 1
01 49 495 up 1
01 51 844 3 right 1
01 52 205 4n5 down1 right 2
02 46 242+02 47 506 123 left1 down 1
02 46 784 123 right 1 down 1
[ Dan Go ]
for the hard or the insane:
00 11 181 1 left 1
00 31 241 slider should have 2 more turns
00 33 049 slider 1 n 2 ctrl+r
01 01 241 turn the slider into a note would be better
01 40 639 separate 6n7 6 on center right 4 7on center left 4
01 51 302 6 right 1
01 57 265 all yellow notes right 1
02 34 404 all yellow notes ctrl+h except 5, 5 left 4
03 24 374 make the squre bigger as well as the 4 sliders
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

[ Dan Go ] wrote:

For the ez one:
00:15:669 4&5 moveto the center then up 2
00:34:317 5 down 1
00 44 615 2 ctrl+R
02 09 735 change the position of pink n purple notes

all fixed THX
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

[ Dan Go ] wrote:

for the normal:
00 17 506 2 up 1
00 17 868 3 right 1
01 00 517 4 up 1
01 49 241 6 up1 right 1
01 49 495 up 1
01 51 844 3 right 1
01 52 205 4n5 down1 right 2
02 46 242+02 47 506 123 left1 down 1
02 46 784 123 right 1 down 1

fixed THX
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

[ Dan Go ] wrote:

for the hard or the insane:
00 11 181 1 left 1
00 31 241 slider should have 2 more turns
00 33 049 slider 1 n 2 ctrl+r
01 01 241 turn the slider into a note would be better
01 40 639 separate 6n7 6 on center right 4 7on center left 4
01 51 302 6 right 1
01 57 265 all yellow notes right 1
02 34 404 all yellow notes ctrl+h except 5, 5 left 4
03 24 374 make the squre bigger as well as the 4 sliders
all fixed thx
Priestess_old
- baby strawberry -

*please, use 1/2 notes, 1/4 notes can be hard for beginner, i think.
*please, use 'distance snap' for whole of normal diff
00:07:025 (5) - distance
00:08:109 (1) - ^
00:11:181 (1) - ^
00:13:350 (5) - ^
00:17:506 (2,3) - ^
00:28:711 (1,1,1) - ^
00:33:772 (4) - ^
00:36:302 (1) - dlelete
00:40:097 (2) - distance
00:42:446 (5) - ^
00:45:338 (3) - ^
00:52:567 (1,1,1) - ^
00:58:350 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:06:302 (3) - ^
01:07:748 (1) - ^
01:12:085 (1) - ^
01:30:157 (1,2,1) - ^
01:35:759 (1) - delete
01:38:832 (1,2,3,4) - distance
01:44:615 (1,3) - ^
01:46:061 (1) - remove tail ->01:46:784 -
01:51:121 (1,2) - distance
01:53:109 (1) - delete
01:54:735 (1,2) - distance
01:59:796 (1) - ^
02:04:133 (1,1,2) - ^
02:11:362 (1) - delete
02:14:615 (1) - distance
02:37:386 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:56:181 (1,1,2) - ^
03:05:579 (1,1,1) - ^
...
...
...
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Priestess wrote:

- baby strawberry -

*please, use 1/2 notes, 1/4 notes can be hard for beginner, i think.
*please, use 'distance snap' for whole of normal diff
00:07:025 (5) - distance
00:08:109 (1) - ^
00:11:181 (1) - ^
00:13:350 (5) - ^
00:17:506 (2,3) - ^
00:28:711 (1,1,1) - ^
00:33:772 (4) - ^
00:36:302 (1) - dlelete
00:40:097 (2) - distance
00:42:446 (5) - ^
00:45:338 (3) - ^
00:52:567 (1,1,1) - ^
00:58:350 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:06:302 (3) - ^
01:07:748 (1) - ^
01:12:085 (1) - ^
01:30:157 (1,2,1) - ^
01:35:759 (1) - delete
01:38:832 (1,2,3,4) - distance
01:44:615 (1,3) - ^
01:46:061 (1) - remove tail ->01:46:784 -
01:51:121 (1,2) - distance
01:53:109 (1) - delete
01:54:735 (1,2) - distance
01:59:796 (1) - ^
02:04:133 (1,1,2) - ^
02:11:362 (1) - delete
02:14:615 (1) - distance
02:37:386 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:56:181 (1,1,2) - ^
03:05:579 (1,1,1) - ^
...
...
...
i fixed most of the problems ,thank u so much for modding.im really appreciate it.
Strawberry
Requested in QQ

Hi Baby Strawberry:D
now begin

[General]
-BG改成分辨率1024x768或者800x600. 把1a517c51a269616e5ba2de6bbc5b8e29.jpg 改一下 现在是1366x768
-没有制作SB的话删除掉歌曲文件夹的.osb文件 然后重新full submission.
-你需要在每个diff都添加一个相同的preview point.
-song setup——source填Goodbye Lullaby

-不知道这种难度名是不是rankble...建议改掉.
-每个难度的kiai时间都太长 前两段kiai可以删去


[>~<]
既然是2星半的难度 建议HP-4 CS-1 AR-3~5 OD-3~5
如果想做的normal或者hard.那建议铺面再密集一些(或者更跳一些

00:25:474 (1,2) - 没有snap
01:09:924 (4) - ^
02:19:683 (4) - ^


[O3O]
HP-2?
00:05:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种不要这样排 可参考大哥在贴吧发的图 后面类似的地方也一样03:02:672 (7) - 没有snap
03:15:684 (2) - ^
03:16:046 (3) - ^
03:20:022 (13) - ^
03:39:178 (4,5) - ^


[TAT]
OD+1?
Timing-meter 改成4/4
00:54:735 (1) - 做个简单的SB提示出slider开始走哪个方向 不然第一次打很难读出来
00:57:988 (3) - 下一格
01:44:615 (2) - 同样建议做个简单SB提示
01:56:181 (2) - ^
02:54:012 - ^
03:17:145 (1) - 左上一格?
03:18:229 (1) - 左下一格?
03:19:314 (1) - 左上一格?
03:38:832 (5) - 左移一格


:) 是张很有潜力的图!加油~

BTW: 我喜欢你的ID lol你懂得
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Strawberry wrote:

required in QQ

Hi Baby Strawberry:D
now begin

[General]
-BG改成分辨率1024x768或者800x600. 把1a517c51a269616e5ba2de6bbc5b8e29.jpg 改一下 现在是1366x768
-没有制作SB的话删除掉歌曲文件夹的.osb文件 然后重新full submission.
-你需要在每个diff都添加一个相同的preview point.
-song setup——source填Goodbye Lullaby

-不知道这种难度名是不是rankble...建议改掉.
-每个难度的kiai时间都太长 前两段kiai可以删去


[>~<]
既然是2星半的难度 建议HP-4 CS-1 AR-3~5 OD-3~5
如果想做的normal或者hard.那建议铺面再密集一些(或者更跳一些

00:25:474 (1,2) - 没有snap
01:09:924 (4) - ^
02:19:683 (4) - ^


[O3O]
HP-2?
00:05:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种不要这样排 可参考大哥在贴吧发的图 后面类似的地方也一样03:02:672 (7) - 没有snap
03:15:684 (2) - ^
03:16:046 (3) - ^
03:20:022 (13) - ^
03:39:178 (4,5) - ^


[TAT]
OD+1?
Timing-meter 改成4/4
00:54:735 (1) - 做个简单的SB提示出slider开始走哪个方向 不然第一次打很难读出来
00:57:988 (3) - 下一格
01:44:615 (2) - 同样建议做个简单SB提示
01:56:181 (2) - ^
02:54:012 - ^
03:17:145 (1) - 左上一格?
03:18:229 (1) - 左下一格?
03:19:314 (1) - 左上一格?
03:38:832 (5) - 左移一格


:) 是张很有潜力的图!加油~

BTW: 我喜欢你的ID lol你懂得
most r fixed thx for modding XD
Derekku
@mapper/modders: please don't double/triple post; removed unnecessary kudosu.
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Derekku wrote:

@mapper/modders: please don't double/triple post; removed unnecessary kudosu.
im really sry...i dont know the rules ;_;
Strawberry
:) mod again

requested in game

[general]
-没用的绿线要删掉 自己检查一下>w<
-删.osb


[damn crazy]
00:13:350 (2) - 要和00:12:808 (1) - 对称 ctrl+J再ctrl+R就可以了
00:16:241 (2) - ^
00:24:374 (4) - ^
00:17:868 (5,6) - 形状尽量也不改变 可以旋转些角度
00:22:567 (1) - 有点丑
00:26:181 (5) - 右一格
00:29:073 (1) - 下一格
00:30:157 (4,5,6) - 左两格
00:31:241 (3) - 四分拍的就行了
00:38:109 (1,1) - 也要对称好
00:44:614 (1,2,3) - 右一格下三格00:44:976 (3) - 尾部的锚点向上一格
01:09:193 (1) - 尾部和01:08:832 (4) - 叠上怎么样?别的都依次往上移一些
01:59:073 (2) - 没拉好?
02:15:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆成这样如何?http://puu.sh/7KIe
02:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - 顺时针旋转7°
02:35:398 (3) - 有点被前面滑条挡到
02:35:579 (4,6) - 弧度和02:34:856 (2) - 一样更美观一些?或者平均有些角度
03:13:169 (1) - 右一格
03:33:229 (2) - 右一格

[damn hard]
-有一些note没snap上 timing-resnap all note一下
-尽量不要有太大幅度的slider变速
-slider再弄漂亮点><差不多的就复制过去旋转一下 别一个slider一个型 对称的地方一定对称好了
01:35:217 (2) - 这个slider rankble?

[damn easy]
-既然是easy slider不要变速吧
02:03:049 (1) - 02:04:133 (1) - 这两个有互相挡住
-slider问题还是和hard一样 比如02:05:579 (1,2) - ctrl+H就好了
03:22:205 (3) - 放在03:22:928 (1) - 轨道上美观点

细节地方一定要注意 加油
bossandy
挑2難度mod~

Damn hard:
SPOILER
00:15:699 (5) - 我不喜歡有note被前一個slider擋住lol
00:11:181 (1,2) - 跟前面的節奏一樣吧 突然又改跟歌詞 很容易miss的
00:19:856 (1) - 再多折返一次?
01:00:518 (5) - 開頭clap
01:09:916 (1,1,1) - BPM不能隨便用啊 請用相同速度的slider 把綠線去掉
01:48:772 (5) - 擺好看點...
02:39:555 (10) - 別往回疊啊...
02:41:181 (6) - ^
02:45:338 (1,2,3) - 這疊好
03:26:904 (1,1,1) - 刪除NC
03:32:326 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 這段是怎樣...
03:36:121 (2,3) - 疊好
Damn crazy:
SPOILER
00:13:892 (3) - 疊好
00:42:446 (4) - 不是很好看...
00:45:337 (4) - ^
00:54:735 (1) - 雖然做的很漂亮 但是一定有人會挑的 請修改lol
01:05:217 (6) - NC
02:24:374 ~ 02:25:097 把Break往後拉 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/173424
03:40:097 (1,1) - 刪除NC
務必聽取的建議
這個譜說實在的 很多的間距都不一樣
還有NC下的地方也是 所以很容易被騙
一方面也很容易被挑 請你能修改盡量修改
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

bossandy wrote:

挑2難度mod~

Damn hard:
SPOILER
00:15:699 (5) - 我不喜歡有note被前一個slider擋住lol 【我也不喜欢。。。fixed~!
00:11:181 (1,2) - 跟前面的節奏一樣吧 突然又改跟歌詞 很容易miss的 【这个我没有改,因为我是按照歌来的。。
00:19:856 (1) - 再多折返一次? 【我在(2)前多加了一个note~!
01:00:518 (5) - 開頭clap 【fixed~!
01:09:916 (1,1,1) - BPM不能隨便用啊 請用相同速度的slider 把綠線去掉 【好吧,最快的拉条改掉了,绿线以去掉 fixed~!
01:48:772 (5) - 擺好看點... 【恩,摆的的确难看,fixed~!
02:39:555 (10) - 別往回疊啊... 【其实我想坑爹一下下的。。。不过,fixed~!
02:41:181 (6) - ^ 【^ fixed ~!
02:45:338 (1,2,3) - 這疊好 【 这个我是叠好的。。不过玩的时候就会跑出来,怎么办。。。:C
03:26:904 (1,1,1) - 刪除NC 【呀,当时忘了删了,fixed~!
03:32:326 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 這段是怎樣... 【我觉得挺好看的所以就。。。。没有改OTZ
03:36:121 (2,3) - 疊好 【恩 fixed~!
Damn crazy:
SPOILER
00:13:892 (3) - 疊好【恩 fixed~!
00:42:446 (4) - 不是很好看... 【的确,可是我也发觉不出什么别的好看点的。。弄出点弯会好点?http://puu.sh/7Une
00:45:337 (4) - ^ 【^
00:54:735 (1) - 雖然做的很漂亮 但是一定有人會挑的 請修改lol 【恩,这个我问过,都说不确定,所以改掉了 fixed~!
01:05:217 (6) - NC 【fixed ~!
02:24:374 ~ 02:25:097 把Break往後拉 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/173424 【好的 fixed~!
03:40:097 (1,1) - 刪除NC 【fixed~!
務必聽取的建議
這個譜說實在的 很多的間距都不一樣
還有NC下的地方也是 所以很容易被騙
一方面也很容易被挑 請你能修改盡量修改
非常感谢mod~!~!~!
thank u very much for modding ~!~!~!
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Strawberry wrote:

:) mod again

requested in game

[general]
-没用的绿线要删掉 自己检查一下>w< 【恩,检查的差不太多 fixed~!
-删.osb
【删不掉 TAT ~!

[damn crazy]
00:13:350 (2) - 要和00:12:808 (1) - 对称 ctrl+J再ctrl+R就可以了 【恩,改了n多拉条 fixed~!
00:16:241 (2) - ^ 【^
00:24:374 (4) - ^【^
00:17:868 (5,6) - 形状尽量也不改变 可以旋转些角度 【恩 fixed~!
00:22:567 (1) - 有点丑 【相当丑。。。不过,fixed~!
00:26:181 (5) - 右一格 【fixed~!
00:29:073 (1) - 下一格 【fixed~!
00:30:157 (4,5,6) - 左两格 【fixed~!
00:31:241 (3) - 四分拍的就行了 【fixed~!
00:38:109 (1,1) - 也要对称好 【fixed~!
00:44:614 (1,2,3) - 右一格下三格00:44:976 (3) - 尾部的锚点向上一格 【fixed~!
01:09:193 (1) - 尾部和01:08:832 (4) - 叠上怎么样?别的都依次往上移一些 【Goodidea,十分感谢 fixed~!
01:59:073 (2) - 没拉好? 【必须没拉好 >~< 不过, fixed~!
02:15:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆成这样如何?http://puu.sh/7KIe 【就照你说的办~! fixed~!
02:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - 顺时针旋转7° 【fixed~!
02:35:398 (3) - 有点被前面滑条挡到 【移开了 fixed~!
02:35:579 (4,6) - 弧度和02:34:856 (2) - 一样更美观一些?或者平均有些角度 【我使用了 复制大发, fixed~!
03:13:169 (1) - 右一格【fixed~!
03:33:229 (2) - 右一格【fixed~!

[damn hard]
-有一些note没snap上 timing-resnap all note一下 【fixed~!
-尽量不要有太大幅度的slider变速 【2X 拉条已取消 fixed~!
-slider再弄漂亮点><差不多的就复制过去旋转一下 别一个slider一个型 对称的地方一定对称好了 【狠狠地改了拉条 fixed~!
01:35:217 (2) - 这个slider rankble? 【不能。。不过, fixed~!

[damn easy]
-既然是easy slider不要变速吧 【我觉得easy的拉条都是很慢的,我的拉条速度设的比较慢(也许吧。。。),不过改了不少超速拉条,所以,算是fixed吧? >~<
02:03:049 (1) - 02:04:133 (1) - 这两个有互相挡住 【移开了, fixed~!
-slider问题还是和hard一样 比如02:05:579 (1,2) - ctrl+H就好了【fixed~!
03:22:205 (3) - 放在03:22:928 (1) - 轨道上美观点【恩,是比我之前的要好看,fixed~!

细节地方一定要注意 加油
感谢草莓姥姥2次mod~!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
From Ar3sgice's queue

[General]
BG这是吓人呢= =?

新人mapper支持, 不过这首歌嘛 = = osu里比较受欢迎的还是anime/nightcore/th... 我随便mod一个难度好了

[Spinner]
没进度条 只有一边就算了 两边都没有 我怎么知道自己转了多少

[Crazy]
00:43:531 (-1) - 加NOTE
00:46:422 (-1) - 加NOTE
00:54:735 (1) - 文字出现稍晚ww
00:56:904 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - HERE加跳ww
01:10:278 (1,1,1,1,2) - NEAR叠起ww 要用专用梗啊少年ww
02:20:398 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星就算了 方向还不一样, 怎么打= =
03:35:217 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - v
03:38:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这是= = 反正我打不了= =
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

From Ar3sgice's queue

[General]
BG这是吓人呢= =?
【QAQ 怎么会啊。。。挺好看的吧。。。我觉得跟着个歌挺符合的就用了。。。。。
新人mapper支持, 不过这首歌嘛 = = osu里比较受欢迎的还是anime/nightcore/th... 我随便mod一个难度好了
【可是我知道的动漫或nightcore资源甚少 (摊手
[Spinner]
没进度条 只有一边就算了 两边都没有 我怎么知道自己转了多少 【好吧,这个要改皮肤了~!

[Crazy]
00:43:531 (-1) - 加NOTE 【恩, 的确是差一拍,fixed~!
00:46:422 (-1) - 加NOTE 【同上,fixed~!
00:54:735 (1) - 文字出现稍晚ww 【提前了一点点,不过话说开了拉条走向的话没有字也可以看清,不过不知道是不是rankable,fixed~!
00:56:904 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - HERE加跳ww 【好跳~! 加了点小跳,fixed~!
01:10:278 (1,1,1,1,2) - NEAR叠起ww 要用专用梗啊少年ww 【诶我当时怎么没看出来啊。。。好吧,用复制粘贴解决,fixed~!
02:20:398 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星就算了 方向还不一样, 怎么打= = 【。。。。。。果然坑爹了,全部改为顺时转,fixed~!
03:35:217 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - v 【同下 fixed~!
03:38:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这是= = 反正我打不了= =【这个我自己改的时候也发现了。。。 稍微改动了点,去掉几个note然后就貌似不坑了。。fixed~!
十分感谢mod, kd奉上~!
Haruhi_sama
!mod req

First.KiaiTime绿线必须在长白线上
例子:【Easy】
00:52:567 (1) - 把kiaitime绿线设在这上面
01:52:386 (2) - 这里容易误解
01:47:507 (1) - 转盘短一点。。不要后面马上跟note
01:56:181 (1) - ^(缩了的话可能太短。用slider代替也可以
02:22:928 (1) - ^
另外这个难度有点难、、叫normal把
求Guest EASY
Haruhi_sama
不过艾薇儿我很早就喜欢了。。。。一直纳闷为什么osu里这么少
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Haruhi_sama wrote:

!mod req

First.KiaiTime绿线必须在长白线上 【诶。。好像的确是啊。。看来3个diff的kiai都要改,谢谢~!
例子:【Easy】
00:52:567 (1) - 把kiaitime绿线设在这上面 【okok~!
01:52:386 (2) - 这里容易误解 【没坑就不好玩啦,所以。没动。。。
01:47:507 (1) - 转盘短一点。。不要后面马上跟note 【好的, fixed~!
01:56:181 (1) - ^(缩了的话可能太短。用slider代替也可以 【恩,的确微短。我在考虑考虑,感谢提醒~!
02:22:928 (1) - ^ 【同上
另外这个难度有点难、、叫normal把 饿、【好吧,的确是比一般的ez难点,那我就排满点来个normal好了~!
求Guest EASY 【批准~!送花~!加油做啊~!做好后游戏里面捕捉我就好了~!

Haruhi_sama wrote:

不过艾薇儿我很早就喜欢了。。。。一直纳闷为什么osu里这么少
我也是这么觉得呢,rank的一共就3个貌似,不过坑图很多,做的也不好。希望我的不要也坑了。。TAT
Breeze
:O 艾薇儿
加油
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Breeze wrote:

:O 艾薇儿
加油
>~< 一定会的~!
Sync
Hi, here from my queue.

General:
-- There are inconsistencies between the Preview Points. Damn hard is 10ms early.
-- There are inconsistencies between the combo colors. Change Damn hard's combo color #3 to 248,97,157. (it was 98,220,88)
-- The spinner isn't perfect. It's not *that* off but it's still noticeable.
-- I suggest capitalizing each of your difficulties. (Damn crazy --> Damn Crazy, Damn normal --> Damn Normal)
-- hit50k.png is unused.

Damn crazy:
00:42:446 (5) - I almost never comment on slider shapes, but this one sucks and it appears in this song a lot. Try to remake it like this: http://screensnapr.com/e/mSOxLI.png
00:45:338 (5) - ^
00:54:735 (1) - This slider is not readable. It's hard to tell which direction to go. Please change it.
01:32:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I have a problem with this section primarily because it is overmapped. Really, there is no need for all of these notes. You can still have many notes here. I think this combination fits the song best: http://screensnapr.com/e/lXbrDw.png
2:26:000: Move this inherited timing section to 02:24:374.
02:47:341: Unsnapped inherited timing section.
03:15:518 (4) - I suggest adding a note here to better follow the lyrics.
03:26:543 (1,1,1,1) - All of these slider ends are unsnapped.
03:37:386 (5) - End kiai time here.

Damn hard:
-- The stack leniency is set to 0.2, which is below the recommended leniency of 0.3
01:15:714: Unsnapped inherited section. Anyways, move it to the end of the spinner.
01:30:157 (4) - I suggest removing one of the repeats.
01:31:241 (5) - If you did, add a note here because this section feels empty.
01:31:422 (6) - ^
01:31:784 (7) - ^
01:31:964 (8) - ^
01:33:049 (4) - The same as before. Remove one of the repeats
01:34:133 (5) - Add a note here, etc
01:34:314 (6) - ^
01:34:675 (7) - ^
01:54:012 (2) - Move this one tick back (1/4)
01:54:374 (3) - Add a slider here that's the same length as (1) and (2) but with no repeats.
02:25:983: Unsnapped inherited section. Like before, move this to the end of that spinner.
02:47:341: Unsapped inhereted timing section.
02:49:675 (4) - Well, I suggest following the same combo pattern as before, so NC here.
02:50:398 (4) - ^
02:51:121 (4) - ^
02:51:844 (4) - ^
03:37:567: Move this back one tick.

Damn normal:
00:09:193 (4) - This doesn't sound good nor does it fit the music. Make this slider two ticks longer and make it repeat once.
00:17:868 (3) - ^
00:20:759 (3) - ^
00:23:651 (3) - ^
00:25:474 (1) - Unsapped
00:25:836 (2) - Never ever do this again. Do something like this instead: http://screensnapr.com/e/JyBwTv.png (also it's unsnapped)
00:29:434 (1) - This note is too far away
00:54:735 (1) - Make this one tick longer.
00:56:543 (2) - Add a hit circle here.
00:57:988 (6) - ^^ Or you could make 1-6 into 3 sliders.
01:07:748 (1) - You should never have jumps like this in Normal.
01:09:924 (4) - Unsnapped
01:10:639 (1) - Too close
01:15:699: Move this timing section to the end of the spinner.
01:30:880 (2) - Add two repeats
01:34:856 (1) - Never do stuff like this. it's hard to read and it plays bad. Consider making it into a single slider.
01:52:386 (2) - Overlapping sliders are very bad! (in this case, anyways)
01:53:109 (1) - Same as before.
02:19:683 (4) - Unsnapped
02:22:928 (1) - End kiai at the end of this spinner.
02:25:097 (1,2,3) - For the sake of consistency between your maps, I suggest removing these.
02:48:229 (8) - Insert break time.
03:36:663 (5) - Add a clap at the start of this slider.
03:37:386 (6) - Kiai should end here.

Good luck. For clarification, PM me.
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Sync wrote:

Hi, here from my queue.

General:
-- There are inconsistencies between the Preview Points. Damn hard is 10ms early.[ ok fixed~!
-- There are inconsistencies between the combo colors. Change Damn hard's combo color #3 to 248,97,157. (it was 98,220,88)[ ok fixed~!
-- The spinner isn't perfect. It's not *that* off but it's still noticeable.
-- I suggest capitalizing each of your difficulties. (Damn crazy --> Damn Crazy, Damn normal --> Damn Normal)[ ok fixed~!
-- hit50k.png is unused.
since im still working on the skin, i will prove it ,thanks for reminding.~!
Damn crazy:
00:42:446 (5) - I almost never comment on slider shapes, but this one sucks and it appears in this song a lot. Try to remake it like this: http://screensnapr.com/e/mSOxLI.png [looks better,fixed~!
00:45:338 (5) - ^[ fixed~!
00:54:735 (1) - This slider is not readable. It's hard to tell which direction to go. Please change it. [ ok i enlarged it and show the head and tail ,so fixed~!
01:32:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I have a problem with this section primarily because it is overmapped. Really, there is no need for all of these notes. You can still have many notes here. I think this combination fits the song best: http://screensnapr.com/e/lXbrDw.png [well, i didnt change cauz i think my notes are good ...
2:26:000: Move this inherited timing section to 02:24:374. [ ok fixed~!
02:47:341: Unsnapped inherited timing section. [ ok fixed~!
03:15:518 (4) - I suggest adding a note here to better follow the lyrics.[ nah...
03:26:543 (1,1,1,1) - All of these slider ends are unsnapped. [ ok fixed~!
03:37:386 (5) - End kiai time here.[ ok fixed~!

Damn hard:
-- The stack leniency is set to 0.2, which is below the recommended leniency of 0.3 [sry i didn't get it
01:15:714: Unsnapped inherited section. Anyways, move it to the end of the spinner.
01:30:157 (4) - I suggest removing one of the repeats. [yea, thats good,
01:31:241 (5) - If you did, add a note here because this section feels empty.
01:31:422 (6) - ^
01:31:784 (7) - ^
01:31:964 (8) - ^
01:33:049 (4) - The same as before. Remove one of the repeats
01:34:133 (5) - Add a note here, etc
01:34:314 (6) - ^
01:34:675 (7) - ^
01:54:012 (2) - Move this one tick back (1/4) [ instead, i make another repeat to reach that beat.
01:54:374 (3) - Add a slider here that's the same length as (1) and (2) but with no repeats.01:54:735 (3) -
02:25:983: Unsnapped inherited section. Like before, move this to the end of that spinner.
02:47:341: Unsapped inhereted timing section.
02:49:675 (4) - Well, I suggest following the same combo pattern as before, so NC here. [nah...
02:50:398 (4) - ^
02:51:121 (4) - ^
02:51:844 (4) - ^
03:37:567: Move this back one tick.[ fixed~!

Damn normal:
00:09:193 (4) - This doesn't sound good nor does it fit the music. Make this slider two ticks longer and make it repeat once. [well, fixed~!
00:17:868 (3) - ^
00:20:759 (3) - ^
00:23:651 (3) - ^
00:25:474 (1) - Unsapped [fixed~!
00:25:836 (2) - Never ever do this again. Do something like this instead: http://screensnapr.com/e/JyBwTv.png (also it's unsnapped) [ok, i changed it.
00:29:434 (1) - This note is too far away [ok fixed~!
00:54:735 (1) - Make this one tick longer. [ i didnt change it...
00:56:543 (2) - Add a hit circle here.
00:57:988 (6) - ^^ Or you could make 1-6 into 3 sliders. [i did the hit circle
01:07:748 (1) - You should never have jumps like this in Normal. [ok ,changed into nonjump notes..
01:09:924 (4) - Unsnapped [fixed
01:10:639 (1) - Too close [fixed01:15:699: Move this timing section to the end of the spinner.
01:30:880 (2) - Add two repeats [fixed
01:34:856 (1) - Never do stuff like this. it's hard to read and it plays bad. Consider making it into a single slider. [ok 2 single slider
01:52:386 (2) - Overlapping sliders are very bad! (in this case, anyways) [ok fixed
01:53:109 (1) - Same as before. [fixed~!
02:19:683 (4) - Unsnapped [fixed~!
02:22:928 (1) - End kiai at the end of this spinner. [ok,fixed`!
02:25:097 (1,2,3) - For the sake of consistency between your maps, I suggest removing these.[ nah i didn't....
02:48:229 (8) - Insert break time.
03:36:663 (5) - Add a clap at the start of this slider. [sounds good fixed~!
03:37:386 (6) - Kiai should end here.

Good luck. For clarification, PM me.
Another question is that i forgot who said that the kiai time for each diff should be exactly the same,is that true?
well, thx a lot for the modding, really takes time.
Sync
You should keep them the same if possible. In your case, it is possible. Also, no problem. Happy to help

In regards to stack leniency, it should be this: http://snpr.cm/U3WI5V.png
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Normal
00:12:085(3) - move it to 00:11:904
01:38:290(1)~(2) - bad overlapped
01:53:290~01:54:374 - like this http://puu.sh/8HGa It's fit with normal
01:56:181(4) - new combol
02:59:073(3) - ctrl + r

Hard
too many circle
00:49:314(3) - onr grid left
02:08:470(1) - remove new combol
02:09:555(1) - ~
03:11:362~03:13:892 - error distance.It isn't jump
03:23:651(1) - remove new combol
03:24:735(1) - ~

Crazy
00:05:759(4) - one grid up and adjust (5) too
00:59:073(1) - remove new combol
01:00:157(1) - ~
01:01:241(1) - ~
02:09:193(1) - ~
02:09:916(3) - remove new combol

It's my mod.Good luck
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

kissfly wrote:

Normal
00:12:085(3) - move it to 00:11:904 [yea u r right, sounds a lot better, but instead i put a short slider
01:38:290(1)~(2) - bad overlapped [ how about this http://puu.sh/8J2h
01:53:290~01:54:374 - like this http://puu.sh/8HGa It's fit with normal [ good, but due to the distance, i make it like thishttp://puu.sh/8J2S
01:56:181(4) - new combo [OK,fixed~!
02:59:073(3) - ctrl + r [nah, due to the distance cauze if i do in ur way, there is a 2Xjump

Hard
too many circle [oh yea~!
00:49:314(3) - onr grid left [oops~! fixed~!
02:08:470(1) - remove new combol [fixed~!
02:09:555(1) - ~ [^!~
03:11:362~03:13:892 - error distance.It isn't jump [ well, i made it not for jumps but to make the distance increases little by little.so, didnt change it...
03:23:651(1) - remove new combol[ fixed~!
03:24:735(1) - ~ [fixed~!

Crazy
00:05:759(4) - one grid up and adjust (5) too [oops, fixed~!
00:59:073(1) - remove new combol
01:00:157(1) - ~
01:01:241(1) - ~
02:09:193(1) - ~
02:09:916(3) - remove new combol [all new combo probs are fixed ,thanks~!

It's my mod.Good luck
THX for modding, really appreciate it. a kudosu! for ya~!
Haruhi_sama
我的easy交的可能会慢点。。学习忙啊(初一党
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Haruhi_sama wrote:

我的easy交的可能会慢点。。学习忙啊(初一党
嘿嘿,加油初一小朋友~!不着急,我这个图还在改。 :)
lbh15174
insane
00:23:470 加note
然后换位置00:23:109 (2) -
00:25:278加note
00:34:856加note
00:40:639 (2) - 这样 [img]http://puu.sh/8Tv1[/img
star
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

lbh15174 wrote:

insane
00:23:470 加note
然后换位置00:23:109 (2) -
00:25:278加note
00:34:856加note
00:40:639 (2) - 这样
THX~!
merchat7
As requested (M4M)

Not really my type of song through. Not fond of English pop and the bpm is really low so mod may be a bit lazy.

[General]

-No tags? I suggest adding Goodbye Lullaby since this song is from this album. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wish_You_W ... ne_song%29 Be sure to add for every diffs.
- spinner-background & spinner-metre must be at the same resolution, you have to fix this.
- Damn Normal has a preview point of 52296 which is different from the other diffs. Change to 52567.
- Combo colors 1 & 3 isn't consistent for every diffs. Make them consistent. Use 201,132,255 for combo color 1 and use 100,221,109 for combo color 3.
- Make sure kiai time is consistent. End the first first kiai time at 01:15:699. End the second kiai time at 02:25:097. Be sure to fix for all difficulties.

I guess everything else is fine, you have to fix everything in bold. I don't check skin so sorry if I miss anything there.

[Damn Normal]

- Difficulty settings is way too high for a Normal and the easiest diff of your beatmap. Do -2hp drain and -1 overall difficulty. This will also make your diff less than 3 stars which is required for ranking since your easiest diff must be below 3 star.
- There are lot and lot of inconsistent spacings, I would prefer if you snap every note to 1 distant snap.

00:28:350 (1,1,1) - I see no reason to do new combos. Remove new combo from 00:28:711 & 00:29:073.
01:01:241 (2) - Put it here http://puu.sh/8TwI. Can be confusing to hit since the hit circle is slightly hidden by the slider track of (1).
01:38:290 (2,3,4) - I feel it's too hard for a Normal. Can you try a repeating slider?
01:52:386 (2) - This look almost like a hit circle which can be confusing. Place it somewhere else. Something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8Ty0.
02:54:013 (1,1) - Use grid 4 / turn off grid snap and put the center point right in the center. They don't look good right now.
03:05:579 (1) - Slider start is covered by the slider track of the previous slider. Can you move this somewhere else?

It's pretty good actually. One main problem I have is, inconsistent spacing. Since this is your beatmap easiest diff, beginners will be playing this diff and they'll probably be reading the spacing. If the spacing is inconsistent, they will mess up and get confuse. I highly recommend that you use just one spacing.

[Damn Hard]

01:48:591 (5,6) - I can see that the spacing is inconsistent here, please keep spacing in streams consistent.
03:12:988 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This accelerated spacing is way too long and becomes quite annoying to play. Can you try something else or use more sliders perhaps?

Hm, I guess it fits the song.

[Damn Crazy]

00:28:350 (1,1,1) - Same as Normal, don't see a reason for the new combo.
00:48:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump is way too big and I don't think it fits the song. Can you use 1.5x distant snapping instead?
01:50:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I don't see any reason for you to make this whole combo a jump. I would prefer if you snap everything to 1.2x distant snapping. The jump is just too big and I feel is just there to make the diff harder and doesn't fit the song.

Pretty good map. Be sure to fix those jumps I mentioned. Those jumps really don't fit the song

Since my mod is quite lazy and map is good in general. Have a star.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

merchat7 wrote:

As requested (M4M)

Not really my type of song through. Not fond of English pop and the bpm is really low so mod may be a bit lazy. thats the reason why people dont want to mod mine i think, :(

[General]

-No tags? I suggest adding Goodbye Lullaby since this song is from this album. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wish_You_W ... ne_song%29 Be sure to add for every diffs. Well i think that is the source stuff..
- spinner-background & spinner-metre must be at the same resolution, you have to fix this. oops,fixed~!
- Damn Normal has a preview point of 52296 which is different from the other diffs. Change to 52567. fixed~!
- Combo colors 1 & 3 isn't consistent for every diffs. Make them consistent. Use 201,132,255 for combo color 1 and use 100,221,109 for combo color 3. THx, but i still dont know what is a color consistent :(
- Make sure kiai time is consistent. End the first first kiai time at 01:15:699. End the second kiai time at 02:25:097. Be sure to fix for all difficulties. THX,i got a bad time line skill..

I guess everything else is fine, you have to fix everything in bold. I don't check skin so sorry if I miss anything there.u did an awesome job THX~!

[Damn Normal]

- Difficulty settings is way too high for a Normal and the easiest diff of your beatmap. Do -2hp drain and -1 overall difficulty. This will also make your diff less than 3 stars which is required for ranking since your easiest diff must be below 3 star.
- There are lot and lot of inconsistent spacings, I would prefer if you snap every note to 1 distant snap. well actually i am waiting for my guest easy diff ..

00:28:350 (1,1,1) - I see no reason to do new combos. Remove new combo from 00:28:711 & 00:29:073. ok
01:01:241 (2) - Put it here http://puu.sh/8TwI. Can be confusing to hit since the hit circle is slightly hidden by the slider track of (1).ok thats good
01:38:290 (2,3,4) - I feel it's too hard for a Normal. Can you try a repeating slider? i did remove 1 and 3 to fix the rhythm better.
01:52:386 (2) - This look almost like a hit circle which can be confusing. Place it somewhere else. Something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8Ty0. lol, thats what i want to let it be. but since its a normal, i'll take ur method,THX~!
02:54:013 (1,1) - Use grid 4 / turn off grid snap and put the center point right in the center. They don't look good right now. i changed the shape of these 2 sliders and the other slider like thishttp://puu.sh/8U0W and thishttp://puu.sh/8U17
03:05:579 (1) - Slider start is covered by the slider track of the previous slider. Can you move this somewhere else? oops, i did Ctrl+R to both and it looks like thishttp://puu.sh/8U1O

It's pretty good actually. One main problem I have is, inconsistent spacing. Since this is your beatmap easiest diff, beginners will be playing this diff and they'll probably be reading the spacing. If the spacing is inconsistent, they will mess up and get confuse. I highly recommend that you use just one spacing. well a lot of people told me this but if i change the spacing, i need to remap all...yea i will change some a bit obvious spacings but not for all,thx for reminding~!

[Damn Hard]

01:48:591 (5,6) - I can see that the spacing is inconsistent here, please keep spacing in streams consistent. oops,thats by accident..thx~!
03:12:988 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This accelerated spacing is way too long and becomes quite annoying to play. Can you try something else or use more sliders perhaps? ok, i will think about it, :)

Hm, I guess it fits the song.

[Damn Crazy]

00:28:350 (1,1,1) - Same as Normal, don't see a reason for the new combo. ok.fixed~!
00:48:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump is way too big and I don't think it fits the song. Can you use 1.5x distant snapping instead? fine
01:50:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I don't see any reason for you to make this whole combo a jump. I would prefer if you snap everything to 1.2x distant snapping. The jump is just too big and I feel is just there to make the diff harder and doesn't fit the song.
oh yea thats the point, i did remap this part.like thishttp://puu.sh/8U5X

Pretty good map. Be sure to fix those jumps I mentioned. Those jumps really don't fit the song

Since my mod is quite lazy and map is good in general. Have a star.

Good luck!
THx a lot for modding, it really takes time actually, im really appreciate it.also thx for the star~!
Haruhi_sama
制作中....PS:这音质不太好
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Haruhi_sama wrote:

制作中....PS:这音质不太好
什么状况。。。还有更高音质的吗? :) :)
mancuso_JM_
Mod4Mod Request as my Modding Queue :P

General:
- Goodbye Lullaby is the album, so this goes in tags and not in Source
- You have to rename the mp3 to Avril Lavigne- Wish You Were Here and after that Full Submit
- I suggest this Combo Colours:
Combo1 : 255,255,166
Combo2 : 232,232,232
Combo3 : 255,174,174

Damn Normal:
HP Drain Rate -3
Overall Dificulty: -1
00:15:699 (4,5): I think that you have to delete the notes and add a slider that starts in (4) and ends in (5). Because is confusing to players that plays this difficulty if you add Notes in blue ticks
00:18:591 (4,5): ^
00:21:482 (4,5): ^
00:25:474 (1): Unsnapped Note (to resnap a note you have to go to Timing-->Resnap all Notes)
00:25:836 (2): ^
00:36:482 (1): This Slider have a lot of reverse arrows, Can you make another think?
00:38:832 (1): Remove New Combo
00:39:555 (1): ^
00:40:278 (4): Don't Stack
00:46:784 (1,2): I don't know if normal players could read that
00:47:688 (2,3): Spacing too close
00:53:651 (1): Remove New Combo
00:54:735 (1): ^
00:54:735 (1): And also think that you have to delete the reverse arrow and this slider goes to 00:55:458 and remove the clap at the end
01:05:217 (1): Remove New Combo
01:06:302 (1): ^
01:09:924 (7): Unsnapped Note
01:12:085 (1): Remove New Combo
01:15:159: Try to start the break out of Kiai Section, so try to make something like this
01:38:290 (4): This note goes in 01:38:470 (Red Tick)
01:45:699 (4): Maybe this note goes in 01:45:880 (blue tick)
01:51:121 (1): Remove New Combo
01:59:844 (1): ^
01:59:796 (1): ^
02:03:049 (1): ^
02:04:133 (1): ^
02:14:615 (1): ^
02:15:699 (1): ^
02:19:683 (4): Unsnapped Note
02:44:615 (3): Maybe New Combo

Damn Hard:
Overall Dificulty +2
HP Drain Rate +1
00:25:458 (1): Stack with (2)
00:34:314 (x): Add a Note
00:36:844 (x): ^
00:44:434 (x): ^
00:45:157 (x): ^
01:15:159: The same in Normal
03:32:326 (1,,1,1,1,1,1,...): This pattern don't follow the music, so it's unrankable. Try to fix it

Damn Crazy:
Overall Dificulty +1
You have to rename to Damn Insane for consitency
01:01:241 (1): Unnecesary New Combo. Remove it

In General I suggest to remove all patterns with only one combo, you have to remove New Combos and something else. Maybe I can say something else, but I'm going to finish my mod here.
The map need Hard Work so hand to work and Good Luck ;)
Oh I forgot if you want to add the video I can find it :)
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod4Mod Request as my Modding Queue :P

General:
- Goodbye Lullaby is the album, so this goes in tags and not in Source
- You have to rename the mp3 to Avril Lavigne- Wish You Were Here and after that Full Submit ok
- I suggest this Combo Colours:
Combo1 : 255,255,166
Combo2 : 232,232,232
Combo3 : 255,174,174
well i like mine better....

Damn Normal:
HP Drain Rate -3
Overall Dificulty: -1 ok fixed.
00:15:699 (4,5): I think that you have to delete the notes and add a slider that starts in (4) and ends in (5). Because is confusing to players that plays this difficulty if you add Notes in blue ticks but this the note in blue ticks are on the rhythm actually
00:18:591 (4,5): ^
00:21:482 (4,5): ^
00:25:474 (1): Unsnapped Note (to resnap a note you have to go to Timing-->Resnap all Notes) ok thx
00:25:836 (2): ^
00:36:482 (1): This Slider have a lot of reverse arrows, Can you make another think? yea i make it like thishttp://puu.sh/8V4O
00:38:832 (1): Remove New Combo fixed
00:39:555 (1): ^ ^
00:40:278 (4): Don't Stack ok
00:46:784 (1,2): I don't know if normal players could read that well it a little bit hard,since its a normal, i will change it.
00:47:688 (2,3): Spacing too close changed pattern.
00:53:651 (1): Remove New Combosure
00:54:735 (1): ^ ^
00:54:735 (1): And also think that you have to delete the reverse arrow and this slider goes to 00:55:458 and remove the clap at the end actually i make the slider shorter to finish on a white line
01:05:217 (1): Remove New Combo
01:06:302 (1): ^
01:09:924 (7): Unsnapped Note
01:12:085 (1): Remove New Combo
01:15:159: Try to start the break out of Kiai Section, so try to make something like this
yea thats good. but i think u didnt get my latest skins :P
01:38:290 (4): This note goes in 01:38:470 (Red Tick) i cant find a good place to place that note...
01:45:699 (4): Maybe this note goes in 01:45:880 (blue tick) i dont think so :?
01:51:121 (1): Remove New Combo
01:59:844 (1): ^
01:59:796 (1): ^
02:03:049 (1): ^
02:04:133 (1): ^
02:14:615 (1): ^
02:15:699 (1): ^
02:19:683 (4): Unsnapped Note all snapped
02:44:615 (3): Maybe New Combo yea sure

Damn Hard:
Overall Dificulty +2
HP Drain Rate +1 fine
00:25:458 (1): Stack with (2) looks better
00:34:314 (x): Add a Note i dont think so ..
00:36:844 (x): ^ ^
00:44:434 (x): ^ ^
00:45:157 (x): ^^
01:15:159: The same in Normal got it
03:32:326 (1,,1,1,1,1,1,...): This pattern don't follow the music, so it's unrankable. Try to fix it ok, fixed ~!

Damn Crazy:
Overall Dificulty +1 lol,i like it be be harder
You have to rename to Damn Insane for consitency but i think damn insane sounds....weird :(
01:01:241 (1): Unnecesary New Combo. Remove it fixed thx~!

In General I suggest to remove all patterns with only one combo, you have to remove New Combos and something else. Maybe I can say something else, but I'm going to finish my mod here. [color=#FF0000]well i do bad on new combo stuffs, :P
The map need Hard Work so hand to work and Good Luck ;) ok thank u~!
Oh I forgot if you want to add the video I can find it :)[/color]i don't think i need it since i got many skins and a video might be too big for my pack, anyway, thx~!
Thx a lot for modding really appreciate it~!
Haruhi_sama
Download: My Easy.7z我的方法更简单。适合新手mapper加他人GD.把压缩包里所有东西解压到song目录里这个歌曲的文件夹.然后F5
因为我换BG了。BG名字不可以随便改


kudo star for you
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Haruhi_sama wrote:

[attachment=0:72a56]My Easy.7z[/attachment:72a56]我的方法更简单。适合新手mapper加他人GD.把压缩包里所有东西解压到song目录里这个歌曲的文件夹.然后F5
因为我换BG了。BG名字不可以随便改


kudo star for you
先谢谢努力做了这么久,很开心~!
不过因为我换了音频,offset确实是205,但是你好像没有all snap所以note整个都是乱的。。。我试了一下发现note能调对,但是时间线我不会弄了。。尤其是蓝的(这个是干吗用的。。我看你有好多诶)。希望你能调整一下 :)
Haruhi_sama
可以的
Haruhi_sama
EDIT:Crazy 难度不要用tick4.
除非出现特殊条件(有三分之一拍。那也是用tick3

tick4很坑的.现在只有太鼓图有了
Haruhi_sama
tutuhaha
IRC↓↓↓

IRC~~~
17:25 *tutuhaha is editing (Avril Lavigne - Wish You Were Here)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37879]
17:25 <tutuhaha> : 这个normal是你做的么?
17:25 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 是
17:25 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 上传的都是我做的
17:25 <tutuhaha> : 设定首先太高了
17:25 <tutuhaha> : 在我看来你的设定基本上已经是hard难度了
17:26 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 啊。。。
17:26 <tutuhaha> : HP AR OD建议全部-1
17:26 <tutuhaha> : 对新手来说太快
17:26 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 恩 我试试
17:27 <-Baby Strawberry-> : ok没问题
17:30 <tutuhaha> : 00:26:951 (4) - 这个加个whistle
17:31 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 头还是尾?
17:31 <tutuhaha> : 头
17:31 <-Baby Strawberry-> : ok 不错~!
17:32 <tutuhaha> : 00:49:361 (1) - 这个spinner的结尾最好改到00:51:530
17:32 <tutuhaha> : 对于最低难度来说
17:32 <tutuhaha> : 跟的太紧
17:32 <tutuhaha> : 然后把whistle和clap去掉,只用finish就好了
17:34 <-Baby Strawberry-> : http://puu.sh/9dd7 我后面没改 拉条缩短了点
17:34 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 音效调了~!
17:35 <tutuhaha> : 01:05:988 (3,4) - 这两个感觉在normal里面最好不要出现,因为对于新手来说可能太难了
17:35 <tutuhaha> : 这两个合成一个slider比较好
17:35 <tutuhaha> : 然后再加个折返
17:36 <-Baby Strawberry-> : ok 更我想的一样 XD
17:36 <tutuhaha> : 01:09:602 (7) - 这里加finish
17:36 <-Baby Strawberry-> : ok
17:37 <tutuhaha> : 01:26:951 (3,1,2) - 这种遮挡的我不确定是不是unrank
17:37 <tutuhaha> : 但是肯定会被挑╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭.........
17:37 <tutuhaha> : 把01:28:759 (2) - 移到上面去吧
17:38 <tutuhaha> : 01:34:180 (5) - 5移到这边好一点
17:38 <tutuhaha> : 最低难度内最好不要有拿一个circle强调轻音这种节奏排法
17:39 <tutuhaha> : 会很难听出来
17:39 <tutuhaha> : 01:35:445 (3) - 这个加个NC好了,因为SV变成1.5X了
17:39 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 好吧 最低难度我全是压红白线的
17:40 <tutuhaha> : 01:38:156 (2) - 这个有点遮住了一是不好看二是读不清
17:40 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 这个我说实话不知道怎么放。。。。
17:40 <tutuhaha> : 01:40:686 (4) - 4移到这里
17:41 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 移到哪。。。。。
17:41 <tutuhaha> : 01:38:156 (2) - X192 Y376
17:41 <tutuhaha> : 01:40:506 (4) - 你本来是放在这里的,4
17:41 <tutuhaha> : 01:40:686 (4) - 移到这里
17:41 <tutuhaha> : 蓝线移到白线0.0
17:42 <tutuhaha> : 01:47:192 (1) - 这个加个clap好了
17:43 <tutuhaha> : 01:52:253 (4) - 这个也是移到白线比较好
17:43 <tutuhaha> : 02:00:204 (1) - 这个spinner在最低难度中貌似太短了
17:44 <tutuhaha> : 02:19:361 (4) - 这个不要遮住会比较好
17:45 <tutuhaha> : 02:52:072 (1) - 这个也是太短了
17:46 <tutuhaha> : 03:00:566 (1,2) - 这两个放到X280 Y288
17:46 <tutuhaha> : 然后对称一下翻转一下得到03:01:650 (1,2,3) -
17:47 <tutuhaha> : 因为你现在放的位置离03:03:096 (1) - 都太近了
17:48 <tutuhaha> : 03:14:662 (1) - 这个spinner从这里开始比较好(白线)
17:49 <tutuhaha> : 好了normal没了
17:49 <tutuhaha> : 一点点小建议
17:49 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 恩 怎么存聊天记录。。。。。
17:50 <tutuhaha> : 下次做图的时候最低难度最好全程DS
17:50 <tutuhaha> : 没事等会我存了post到你帖子里^^
17:50 <tutuhaha> : 你随时可以看哒╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭
17:50 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 我这个normal基本上照平时0.7 kiai1.0走的。。
17:50 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 好口牙!~
17:51 <tutuhaha> : 基本,就是说不是全部呀=A=
17:51 <-Baby Strawberry-> : QAQ
17:51 <tutuhaha> : 说实话你这个有点难读,对新手来说
17:51 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 没事,正在搞弱智ez~!
17:51 <tutuhaha> : 不过已经不错了
17:51 <tutuhaha> : 唔.....
17:51 <-Baby Strawberry-> : T~T~!~!~!
17:51 <tutuhaha> : 你不用easy了把
17:52 <tutuhaha> : 再做easy可能导致梗的重复
17:52 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 不会~!完全没有~!
17:52 <tutuhaha> : 唔那你normal后半段的节奏最好再加一些
17:53 <tutuhaha> : 设定不要动,然后把normal提到3星以上
17:53 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 我ez照着基本上完全对称。。。
17:53 <tutuhaha> : 你就成功了
17:53 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 好!~!
17:53 <tutuhaha> : easy的设定最好是HP2OD2AR3
17:53 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 好伤心http://puu.sh/9dgv
17:54 <tutuhaha> : 哦然后下次做normal或者easy的时候最好多用点slider
17:54 <tutuhaha> : 既好读又保证难度不会差太大
17:54 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 恩我也发现了,所以ez就用了好多。。
17:54 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 好的!~
17:54 <tutuhaha> : 你现在这个easy的设置太低,会被找茬
17:55 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 太低也会找。。。。。
17:55 <tutuhaha> : 恩
17:55 <tutuhaha> : 哦还有
17:55 <tutuhaha> : 一个神mapper和我说过
17:56 <tutuhaha> : easy和normal NC的数目最好在5以下
17:56 <tutuhaha> : 自己再看着调一下NC好一点
17:56 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 因为我nc比较弱。。所以一定要调一下
17:56 <tutuhaha> : ╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭
17:57 <tutuhaha> : 脖子僵了T-THard和Insane我就大概找一下好了
17:57 <tutuhaha> : Crazy这个
17:57 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 就hard吧、、、、crazymod的人比较多、、
17:57 <tutuhaha> : 00:57:313 (3) - 干脆和 00:55:867 (1) - 的尾巴重叠
17:58 <tutuhaha> : 00:55:867 (1) -
17:58 <tutuhaha> : soga
18:00 <tutuhaha> : Hard
18:00 <tutuhaha> : 00:23:698 (4) - 这个没覆盖好啊
18:00 <tutuhaha> : 00:24:421 (X) - 这边加个circle比较好
18:01 <tutuhaha> : 00:55:144 (6) - 这个也没覆盖好
18:01 <tutuhaha> : 00:57:674 (4) - 这个也没覆盖好
18:01 <tutuhaha> : 01:01:650 (1) - 改到白线开始
18:02 <tutuhaha> : 01:26:951 (4,5) - 这个好像是unrank的
18:02 <tutuhaha> : 嘛大概,但是会被找茬
18:02 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 01:03:819 (1) - 这个是白线开的。。。。
18:03 <tutuhaha> : 唔你摆的是红线开始的......
18:03 <-Baby Strawberry-> : http://puu.sh/9die。。。
18:03 <-Baby Strawberry-> : http://puu.sh/9die巨号巨号巨号
18:04 <tutuhaha> : ...............
18:04 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 我吐血了!
18:04 <tutuhaha> : 打空格
18:04 <tutuhaha> : 我以前也这样╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭
18:04 <-Baby Strawberry-> : http://puu.sh/9die打空格
18:04 <-Baby Strawberry-> : http://puu.sh/9die 好吧
18:04 <tutuhaha> : ╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭
18:05 <tutuhaha> : 噢噢噢我说的是前面那个是spinner
18:05 <-Baby Strawberry-> : 。。。。。。
18:06 <tutuhaha> : 02:48:638 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 颜色数目都到15了.............
18:06 <tutuhaha> : 加NC
18:06 <tutuhaha> : 03:10:325 (3) - 没覆盖好
18:06 <tutuhaha> : 03:34:180 (1,2,3) - 没覆盖好
18:07 <tutuhaha> : 哦也没了
18:07 <tutuhaha> : Hard AR-1
18:07 <tutuhaha> : 没啦

加油加油~
Roddie
Hey there.

Damn Easy
  1. 01:03:819 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish on the beginning.
  2. 01:13:217 (1)-Add a whistle?

Damn Normal
    1. 00:49:361 (1)-On the end of that spinner, did you left it on the yellow tick on purpose? It might be better if you end that spinner on 00:51:530.
    2. 01:58:759 (1)On the end, you left this on purpose too? Well, it might be better if you end it on 02:00:927.
    3. 02:03:819 (3)-Hm... Was this left on purpose or by mistake? If it was a mistake, have this slider end on 02:04:542. It sounds better that way~

Damn Hard
Nothing wrong here~

Damn Crazy
Here too.

Nice job~

Good luck getting this map ranked. (:
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

Roddie wrote:

Hey there.

Damn Easy
  1. 01:03:819 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish on the beginning. well, i tried but the difference is not that much, but i changed it~!
  2. 01:13:217 (1)-Add a whistle? actually no, i want it to be quiet~

Damn Normal
    1. 00:49:361 (1)-On the end of that spinner, did you left it on the yellow tick on purpose? It might be better if you end that spinner on 00:51:530. oops ,thats a mistake ~! to me it sounds better at the red tick after the yellow,but its to near to the next note, so still can find a good way, i'll just leave it.
    2. 01:58:759 (1)On the end, you left this on purpose too? Well, it might be better if you end it on 02:00:927. same as the previous one.
    3. 02:03:819 (3)-Hm... Was this left on purpose or by mistake? If it was a mistake, have this slider end on 02:04:542. It sounds better that way~ basically i made all these part with same rhythm, the shape of the slider is not good i knowT~T

Damn Hard
Nothing wrong here~thx~!

Damn Crazy
Here too.thx too~!

Nice job~THX~!

Good luck getting this map ranked. (:
thx for modding, really appreciate it~! :)
No_Gu
request from my queue

3:37 - 2diff

[General]
AlbumArtSmall.jpg
Folder.jpg
这两张应该是没用的。删掉full吧
[normal]
00:24:602 (4) - 和3压一起
00:44:301 (2) - 和1压一起的话感觉会让人误解
00:59:120 (1) - 去掉NC
01:09:602 (7) - NC.后面的1去NC
01:30:566 (2) - 不推荐3个折返
01:45:747 (5) - 随手摆了一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/188081
192,184,105747,2,0,B|192:96|328:96|328:184,1,210,8|0
02:46:470 (4) - NC
03:22:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+h
整体来说还行- -但是感觉很乱。
第一是间距问题。正常来说easy和normal都不应该有跳。看图里有些间距1.多有的才0.多
其次是hitsound的。既然BPM是83. ..在加clap的时候就别按166的BPM加了。。而且有一段好像还没有hitsound- -

[hard]
00:25:506 (2) - 好像挺难看- -
01:53:698 (2) - 不推荐3个折返
02:38:518 (7) - NC
02:41:771 (10) - ^
03:19:000 (10) - ^
Topic Starter
-Baby Strawberry-

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

3:37 - 2diff

[General]
AlbumArtSmall.jpg
Folder.jpg
这两张应该是没用的。删掉full吧 【我都不知道怎么多出来的。。folder里面也没有。。。还是通过上传删没用东西删了重新加的背景才弄好。。
[normal]
00:24:602 (4) - 和3压一起 【好
00:44:301 (2) - 和1压一起的话感觉会让人误解 【这个我也没有办法。。开着ds怎么着都是压。。。
00:59:120 (1) - 去掉NC 【好
01:09:602 (7) - NC.后面的1去NC 【好。。我nc真的很差劲。。
01:30:566 (2) - 不推荐3个折返 【嘿嘿 这个连续性高
01:45:747 (5) - 随手摆了一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/188081 【随手节奏少一拍 >~< 不过你的随手摆还是挺好看的,改了改形状,改的圆了点。之前的确不好看
192,184,105747,2,0,B|192:96|328:96|328:184,1,210,8|0
02:46:470 (4) - NC 【好~!
03:22:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+h 【那样的话对新手来说赌徒会不会有点难度? 改成了别的形式,note压拉条的确不好看。。。
整体来说还行- -但是感觉很乱。
第一是间距问题。正常来说easy和normal都不应该有跳。看图里有些间距1.多有的才0.多 【一怒之下用1Xremap全部~!
其次是hitsound的。既然BPM是83. ..在加clap的时候就别按166的BPM加了。。而且有一段好像还没有hitsound- -【 除了ez我的hitsound基本上都是以hard为基准弄得,没设hitsound应该不会啊。。。我还是很在意hitsound的,,,都一个一个调的肿么会没有T~T

[hard]
00:25:506 (2) - 好像挺难看- -【 是嘛。。。可是怎么改啊。。。话说我还真没觉出难看来,就是太长了。。。
01:53:698 (2) - 不推荐3个折返 【去掉了一个折返,在后面拉条钱加了个note感觉更坑,嘿嘿
02:38:518 (7) - NC【的确是combo多了点,但是加了nc反而觉得乱呢。。。
02:41:771 (10) - ^ 【可以~!
03:19:000 (10) - ^
十分感谢mod~!kd送给你~! :)
Shana Aisaka
Hi ~ >~<" A request from My Modding Queue ~ :)

Purple - Map seems okay~
Pink - Suggestion

[Damn Hard]
00:05:988(4) = move it to 00:05:807
00:06:349(x) = add note
00:08:879(4) = move it to 00:08:698
00:09:241(x) = add note
00:33:639(x) = ^
00:44:120(x) = ^
00:44:843(x) = ^
00:47:735(x) = ^
00:48:458(x) = ^
00:54:964(x) = ^
01:00:747(x) = ^
01:36:891(x) = ^
01:49:000(x) = ^
01:49:361(x) = ^
03:15:204(x) = ^
03:20:988(x) = ^


[Damn Crazy]
00:28:217(x) = add note ~
00:28:578(x) = ^ http://puu.sh/9zhb xD
01:42:494(7) = NC
01:58:036(x) = add note


Damn! That's all! xD
I love this song so i will give you star ~ >w<"
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