-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

01:49:180 (8,9,10,11) - I've always thought patterns like this play strangely as you have to press mouse/keyboard keys in a constant, somewhat fast rhythm, but the cursor sort of has to move more abruptly. That's sort of hard to understand, so maybe just put these in a line or something. ok i got what u mean, but i didn't get how to deal with it, u mean to put them between a really small distance? Try something like this, maybe? Different rhythm, and you might have to fix some spacing, but I think it's alright. PM me again afterwards, I'll try not to take so long.

SapphireGhost wrote:

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

01:49:180 (8,9,10,11) - I've always thought patterns like this play strangely as you have to press mouse/keyboard keys in a constant, somewhat fast rhythm, but the cursor sort of has to move more abruptly. That's sort of hard to understand, so maybe just put these in a line or something. ok i got what u mean, but i didn't get how to deal with it, u mean to put them between a really small distance? Try something like this, maybe? Different rhythm, and you might have to fix some spacing, but I think it's alright. PM me again afterwards, I'll try not to take so long.

actually i found your way is better than mine, easier and looks better.
Edit: 01:57:223 (2) - on [Damn Crazy] isn't following anything still, as before I wouldn't use 1/8 in this map.
T^T i forgot there is a same problem pattern. thank you~!

SapphireGhost wrote:

Stuff

All necessary fixes have been made, map is good and ready. Have fun with ranking!
Bubbled!

narakucrimson wrote:

Heyya! Everything looks good, so I'm going to rank this.

Only thing I want to say is that you can improve your slider composition a bit, for your next maps. Try this guide!

Anyway, great job! I like the skin

hoLysoup wrote:

喔喔~! 恭喜你第一張ranked map :>!

FruitTingles wrote:

Grats! Nice map

vizzy wrote:

Congrats on getting ranked. This map is great.

iMercurial wrote:

Congratulations

Chewin wrote:

Oh I remember this >< Gratz o/

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey Congratz. I love this Song

Maybe I'll rank another version on future

bossandy wrote:

阿哈!!! Rank啦 ~~
恭喜恭喜^^

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Congratulations on your first ranked map!

Breeze wrote:

恭喜rank
more Avril song yay \:D/

Gasaiyuno-chan wrote:

Avril song+you=win aha.