1. Easy Rank (1.45 stars, 66 notes)
2. Great Rank (3.93 stars, 116 notes)
3. Master Rank (5 stars, 256 notes)
4. Normal Rank (3.12 stars, 96 notes)
5. Ultra Rank (4.87 stars, 215 notes)

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi , my mod !

Easy Rank
add 2 timing points
00:49:245 - n:c2 here
00:49:495 - n:c1 here

Great Rank
00:06:370 (1) - add finish at the start of slider
00:38:120 (6) - add note here
00:38:370 (7) - add note here + finish hitsound
01:19:120 (2) - remove finish hitsounds from the start and reverse, and whistles to the start and reverse

Master Rank
00:22:120 (7) - add finish here
00:56:370 (4) - add reverse. add finish to the end of slider.
01:17:870 (3,4,5) - add claps here
01:19:120 (1,2) - remove finish hitsounds, and whistles

I <3 D&P , star, yeah.

IceBeam wrote:

MP3's bitrate is 320 kbps..
Please re-encode. I will.....

Also,BG is kinda small,but..well,it used to be such,so I won't complain about it.

[Easy]
00:09:370 (4) - Hm doesn't fit well to me,I'd remove. Fixed
00:58:370 - Adding a note here will do much better. Fixed
01:05:370 - Also clap sounds out of rhytm here. Fixed

[Great]
00:06:370 (1) - Hm,you wasn't using finishes in Easy,and this one sounds a bit lonely,maybe don't use them through the map then? FixedExcept pre-breaks like 00:38:370 (7). Removed
00:07:370 (1) - Remove NC? No, it doesn't matter.
00:46:370 (1,2,1) - You're awesome. It's a compliment, right?
00:58:370 - Note? Fixed

[Master]
00:32:370 (1) - Hm,starting point is hidden by slider,not sure if it's ok. Fixed

Really sweet map.
Best of luck.
Star.

Giorgos wrote:

Your image size is not correct. It has to be 800x600 or 1024x768

Easy Rank:
00:03:900 - 00:06:400 - too short break point here. It has to be at least 5 seconds to put a break point here.

I know that it is easy difficulty,and it starts good and has enough beats,but then I see a lot of spacing,so I think:
00:08:900 - put a circle here !!!!!!
00:09:900 - ^ !!!!!!
00:14:900 - ^ !!!!!!
00:15:900 - ^ !!!!!!
00:16:900 - ^ !!!!!!
00:17:900 - ^ !!!!!!
00:19:900 - ^ !!!!!!
00:21:900 - ^ !!!!!!


Great Rank: All Refused
I see some spacing here too:
00:19:400 - put a circle here
00:19:900 - ^
00:21:400 - ^
00:21:900 - ^


Master Rank:
Well,it looks better. I have nothing to say about it. Just try to make here more symmetry

That is all! Star!

winber1 wrote:

General

--Set offset to 380 and resnap all notes (everything below is based on this setting) Set to 395
--Possibly Set Kiai time (maybe starts at like 01:02:380 to the end or wherever you want) Will Do

Master Rank

00:28:380(1,2,3,4) - this is some epic whistle spamming (at least in my opinion). You should come up with some sort of pattern. (I was playing around with whistles and claps. In the end, I had a whistle at 00:28:380, 00:28:755, 00:28:880, 00:29:380, 00:29:755, and 00:30:005. I had claps at 00:28:630, 00:29:130, 00:29:630, 00:30:130. This is just one of many ways to pattern it; you can come up with your own way if you don't like it) Ok, changed the hitsound pattern a little
00:39:630(4) - add a clap
00:40:130(6) - ^ l Fixed and
00:41:630(4) - ^ l Changed
00:42:130(6) - ^ /

cool map.. couldn't find anything wrong except sound issues

Great Rank

Fine. I see you used slidertick claps here, but not in Master Rank. I guess it's fine tho cuz even with those claps in Master Rank, there are still intermittent clapping patterns.
Secondly, maybe you could make this level a little harder (i guess it's fine tho), and increase the DR, AR and OD. (something like DR +1, AR +1, OD +1)


Easy Rank

00:04:880(x,x,x) - I think you should add 3 notes on these three 1/1 lines. The long gap makes no sense to me
01:02:380(spinner) - end spinner here 01:04:380(and add finish), and place a note with clap here 01:05:380. (I think that works better)
01:19:380(spinner) - add finish

Nice Map

Star~

senaya wrote:

[Easy Rank]
It has no problems itself, but that hit-clap-hit-clap rhythm throughout the whole map is kinda boring.

[Normal Rank]
00:26:395 (2) - why does this slider has a sharp angle? maybe make it smoother? there are no any other sliders like this anyway..
00:50:145 (2) - nazi mod: swith to lvl4 grid and move this 2 grids up and 1 grid right to make it look better.

[Great Rank]
This might/should be harder. But I didn't notice anything wrong as it is now.
00:07:395 (1) - why new combo here?

[Master Rank]
01:02:395 - ohh, evil spacing starts here. maybe add a warning sign while the break lasts like 'harder spacing ahead' or smth?

That's all I could notice.

1. The Mp3 details shows this mp3 is 320kbps, make sure that the mp3 is 192~128kbps. Otherwise it's unrankable. Let me know if you need help re-encoding.
2. The BG is too small try to get a 800x600 or 1024x768 one. If it's impossible even a 640x480 would be ok.
3. Tags: Remove "pokemon" it's already in the source; "super" seems a bit generic, I'd remove it but it's ok if you want to keep it.
4. End the map using finish on the last note/repeat/slider end.
5. I see some nice curves and shapes in this maps, That makes me happy.

1. 00:05:895 (7,1,2) - I suggest to align the end of (7) with (2) so it looks more clear.
2. 00:13:395 (4,1,2) - ^ this time do it with (4) and (2)
3. 01:18:395 - This last kiai looks really odd, I highly suggest to remove it.

1. 00:09:270 (5,6) - Try to avoid overlapping for this blanket so it looks less messy.
3. 00:13:395 (3) - This slider is not following the rhythm correctly plus it might be too hard for Normal, Try this instead, It sounds much better and it's easier to hit.
4. 00:22:395 (1,2,3,1) - As you can see this pattern have inconsistent spacing while the objects have the same spacing in the timeline. This makes this pattern confusing and hard to read, make spacing consistent like this , or try something else.
5. 00:58:395 - I highly suggest to place a note here, to keep consistency with the other diffs plus it sounds weird if you start the break at the current time.
6. 00:49:395 (1,2,1) - These notes have the same spacing between them in the timeline, try to fix spacing so spacing is consistent between them in the playground.
7. 01:18:395 (1,1) - I suggest to use 1/2 sliders instead of those 1/4 repeating sliders, save those 1/4 for Hard or Insane, It might be too much for Normal. Oh and remove that Kiai please it doesn't fit at all.

1. 00:46:395 (1,2,1) - This looks really bad, let me give you a suggestion, it's not perfect but you get the idea. Try that or try something else, but you need to get rid of those sliders under each other.
2. 00:20:395 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistent please, Fix spacing between (2) and (3)
3. Oh again, remove that last Kiai time. It doesn't suit that part.

1. 01:02:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not a big fan of these kind of streams because In my opinon those streams are confusing and not readable at all. Try something easier to read.
2. I'm not convinced about some jumps, but well I guess it's ok for Insane, Just remove that last Kiai and I'm ok with this diff.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. The Mp3 details shows this mp3 is 320kbps, make sure that the mp3 is 192~128kbps. Otherwise it's unrankable. Let me know if you need help re-encoding. Oh crap, I forgot to full-submit....
2. The BG is too small try to get a 800x600 or 1024x768 one. If it's impossible even a 640x480 would be ok. ^
3. Tags: Remove "pokemon" it's already in the source; "super" seems a bit generic, I'd remove it but it's ok if you want to keep it. The contests themselves are called Super Contests
4. End the map using finish on the last note/repeat/slider end. Ok, will do.
5. I see some nice curves and shapes in this maps, That makes me happy. Hooray!!!

Easy Rank

1. 00:05:895 (7,1,2) - I suggest to align the end of (7) with (2) so it looks more clear. Fixed
2. 00:13:395 (4,1,2) - ^ this time do it with (4) and (2) hmm, ok
3. 01:18:395 - This last kiai looks really odd, I highly suggest to remove it. Fixed

Normal

1. 00:09:270 (5,6) - Try to avoid overlapping for this blanket so it looks less messy. Hmm, ok..
3. 00:13:395 (3) - This slider is not following the rhythm correctly plus it might be too hard for Normal, Try this instead, It sounds much better and it's easier to hit. Ok...
4. 00:22:395 (1,2,3,1) - As you can see this pattern have inconsistent spacing while the objects have the same spacing in the timeline. This makes this pattern confusing and hard to read, make spacing consistent like this , or try something else. Fixed
5. 00:58:395 - I highly suggest to place a note here, to keep consistency with the other diffs plus it sounds weird if you start the break at the current time.
6. 00:49:395 (1,2,1) - These notes have the same spacing between them in the timeline, try to fix spacing so spacing is consistent between them in the playground.
7. 01:18:395 (1,1) - I suggest to use 1/2 sliders instead of those 1/4 repeating sliders, save those 1/4 for Hard or Insane, It might be too much for Normal. Oh and remove that Kiai please it doesn't fit at all.

Hard

1. 00:46:395 (1,2,1) - This looks really bad, let me give you a suggestion, it's not perfect but you get the idea. Try that or try something else, but you need to get rid of those sliders under each other.
2. 00:20:395 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistent please, Fix spacing between (2) and (3)
3. Oh again, remove that last Kiai time. It doesn't suit that part.

Master Rank

1. 01:02:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not a big fan of these kind of streams because In my opinon those streams are confusing and not readable at all. Try something easier to read.
2. I'm not convinced about some jumps, but well I guess it's ok for Insane, Just remove that last Kiai and I'm ok with this diff.

Nice Sliders. Nice Map.

1. Hp drain +2 or at least +1, even a drunk baby could clear this with Hp drain at 1 ._.
2. Approach rate +1? I did a slider break on one slider because it was really slow.
3. 01:10:395 - Useless timing point

1. Hp drain +1
2. Maybe approach rate +1, not sur for this one.
3. 00:12:895 (2) - 1 grid up
4. 00:16:395 (1) - 1 grid right
5. 00:16:895 (2) - 2 grid down
6. 00:17:520 (3,4,1) - 1 grid down
7. 00:18:395 (1) - Copy it and paste it here 00:20:395 then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J for the symmetry.
8. 00:22:395 (1) - Move the end of the slider 2 grid to the left
9. 00:32:395 (6) - New combo here?
10. 01:16:395 (4,5) - This sound weird and empty, how about a slider?

1. 00:09:520 (3,4,5,6) - Stack on 1/4 and then stack on 1/2, I guess it's okay but it's confusing D:
2. 00:24:645 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh the spacing of the 1/4 isn't too high?
3. 00:47:645 (5,6,7,8) - This is a little confusing too.
4. 00:50:395 (1,2) - Those sliders have a weird shape, it doesn't really fit with the others

1. Lol the hp drain is at 5 while it's at 6 on ultra, hp drain +2?
2. 01:05:270 (5) - This note isn't well spaced, move it at the right place.
3. The end is funny with this crazy speed but 01:07:020 (5,6,7,8,9) doing a pattern like this with 1/4 is too much I think

footix31 wrote:

[General]
Add custom colours because the default have 2 red combo (don't know why ._. ) if you want to keep those colours you can just delete the second red combo. If you have 2 red combo colors, it's the skin itself.

[Easy]

1. Hp drain +2 or at least +1, even a drunk baby could clear this with Hp drain at 1 ._. HAHA, fixed.
2. Approach rate +1? I did a slider break on one slider because it was really slow. Fixed
3. 01:10:395 - Useless timing point Fixed

[Normal]

1. Hp drain +1 Fixed
2. Maybe approach rate +1, not sur for this one. Agreed and fixed
3. 00:12:895 (2) - 1 grid up Fixed
4. 00:16:395 (1) - 1 grid right Fixed
5. 00:16:895 (2) - 2 grid down Fixed
6. 00:17:520 (3,4,1) - 1 grid down Fixed
7. 00:18:395 (1) - Copy it and paste it here 00:20:395 then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J for the symmetry. Uhh, Fixed
8. 00:22:395 (1) - Move the end of the slider 2 grid to the left Fixed
9. 00:32:395 (6) - New combo here? Fixed
10. 01:16:395 (4,5) - This sound weird and empty, how about a slider? Fixed

[Great]
Well it's... great. Haha, great....

[Ultra]

1. 00:09:520 (3,4,5,6) - Stack on 1/4 and then stack on 1/2, I guess it's okay but it's confusing D: Fixed
2. 00:24:645 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh the spacing of the 1/4 isn't too high? Fixed
3. 00:47:645 (5,6,7,8) - This is a little confusing too. Fixed
4. 00:50:395 (1,2) - Those sliders have a weird shape, it doesn't really fit with the others Fixed

[Master]

1. Lol the hp drain is at 5 while it's at 6 on ultra, hp drain +2? HP -1 in Ultra and +1 in Master
2. 01:05:270 (5) - This note isn't well spaced, move it at the right place. Fixed
3. The end is funny with this crazy speed but 01:07:020 (5,6,7,8,9) doing a pattern like this with 1/4 is too much I think Changed

And here is a star for your map <3

Zelos wrote:

General:

Remove the D P and PT from your source, leave it as Pokemon and add Diamond Pearl Platinum to tags. (its a cyclone rule) since its in a series

Ultra Rank:

00:01:395 (5,6) - unevenly spaced Fixed

00:41:895 (7) - i suggest placing the note on the grid inbetween 5,6 Fixed

00:47:145 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make 2 3 4 like 5 6 7 or make 5 6 7 like 2 3 4 Fixed

thats pretty much all i could catch.

Weezy wrote:

General
- Remove countdown from Easy and Normal Fixed

Normal Rank
00:31:520 (3) Move it forward to red tick Fixed
00:33:520 (3) ^same Fixed

Ultra Rank
00:38:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Instead of the spacing getting smaller and smaller, do the opposite (suggestion) Hmm, it does look better that way.

thats is all
good luck with this

Sandpig wrote:

just a quick look.

all diffs are fine to me although the slider velocity in Easy and Normal seem a little fast. I'll get a second opinion on that.....

I found no issues when I tested it except timing

BPM:119.980 Offset:426 hmm, a bit drastic but i'll think about it.

don't forget to resnap notes.

Tags: add "Dansu Muzukashii" ohh, ok....

that's all, good luck

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
off countdown in [Normal] [Fixed]
2 sec of lead in is enough? [Fixed]
flashy warning for those SB in 1.2xBPM? [What?]

[Master rank]
01:03:290 (6,7,8) - spacing [Fixed]
01:!2:168 (9) - whistle seems weird here. remove and finish at ending? [Fixed for first, but what?]

[Ultra rank]
00:19:651 (4,6) - (4) left 1 grid, (6) right 1 grid [Fixed]
00:20:401 (1) - remove whistle? [Refused]

[Great rank]
00:17:900 (6) - remove clap? [Fixed]
00:24:403 (1,2) - clap at end [Fixed]

no big problems for normal and easy... but how about resnapping it by grid lv3? [Will Fix Later]

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. I got something for you to make this better.

On Easy Rank.

At 00:24:403: 2 (slider) - Move one grid left or one grid left and one grid up. That's gonna be better if you change this? Fixed
At 00:29:904: 6 (circle) - Move one grid up and one grid right. Fixed
At 01:05:416: 1 (circle) - The spacing's not gonna work to 1 (at 01:06:417, slider)... It doesn't matter, but Fixed

On Normal Rank.

At 00:07:397: 2 and 3 (Both circles) - Are you're going to space this between 4 (slider)? Yes?
At 00:20:401: 2 (slider) - Move 4 grids right... Not fixed
At 00:22:402: 1 (sider) - Make sure you don't overlap with 2 (circle) and Move 1 grid up and 4 grid right, okay? (That's a spacing.) Duh, it's spacing and I think it was Gonzvlo that gave me this arrangement, probably isn't but I'll get a second opinion on that.

Well, that's all I give you and I'll sure you check the other diffs next time.
Thank you and good luck.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Pulse.png",320,240
 L,62415,24
  F,1,0,500,1,0
  S,1,0,500,1,(something between 1 and 1.5)

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

MoonShade wrote:

General
- sb strobe may be too much, I suggest:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Pulse.png",320,240
 L,62415,24
  F,1,0,500,1,0
  S,1,0,500,1,(something between 1 and 1.5)

Easy Rank
- perfect

Normal Rank
00:07:897 (3,4) - why is there a jump? That feels really strange for a normal map
00:13:774 (4) - i would start this slider at 00:13:899
00:51:161 (2) - I think you can improve this slider this way:

SPOILER

[attachment=2:5dd88]screenshot154.jpg[/attachment:5dd88]

01:16:420 (4) - slider doesn't look so nice

Great Rank
00:08:897 (3,5) - overlapping doesn't look so nice here, maybe try to put(5) on the start point of (3)
00:16:150 (4) - looks unsymmetric
00:20:401 (1,2) - place them more to the right so they don't overlap with 00:19:401 (3)
00:22:902 (2) - with grid level 3, move 2 grids right so that (2) is at the same place as 00:21:402 (3) and rearrange 00:22:402 (1,3)
00:24:403 (1,2) - I think that would look better:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:5dd88]screenshot155.jpg[/attachment:5dd88]

00:56:163 (5) - with grid level 3, move 1 grid up
00:57:914 (4,5,6) - why don't you copypaste 00:55:913 (4,5,1) and flip it vertically?

Ultra Rank
00:09:272 (2) - place this at the end of the slider
00:27:779 (5) - try to optimise it this way:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:5dd88]screenshot156.jpg[/attachment:5dd88]

01:03:916 (5) - ^

Master Rank
01:16:420 (8) - 1 grid up

Nice Map, Star :3

Ekaru wrote:

POKEMON CONTEST FUCK YEAH!!!! eehee....

General:

-I would get rid of the strobe. It doesn't fit, can lag older computers running OpenGL in fullscreen, is distracting, and the Kiai Time is sufficient for the effect you're going for. You can keep the BPM change notice flashing, though. ok, but really, the BPM change thing isn't flashing, it's an illusion that goes with the strobe. Ehh, I need to know what's the code for that....

Master Rank:

00:08:147 (3) - The ends overlapping like this looks weird and a tad ugly IMO Fixed
00:22:777 (2) - Looks more like a dick than a slider. Can you make it a smoother curve to fix this? I don't get it, and ok...
00:24:778 (2) - Looks unbalanced. I would move the center slider node closer to the center of the slider. Fixed
00:54:413 (1) - Looks unbalanced. Just fiddle around with it for a bit. Fixed, and much better
00:56:413 (4) - ^ Yes, unbalanced sliders do have a significant impact on how the map looks. ^

Hmm, this is easy so far, I wonder if i- *break ends* "WOOHOO!"

Good map overall. ~

Ultra Rank:

00:04:396 (5) - The (2) from earlier overlaps this slider's endpoint, making it hard to see. Fixed
00:09:898 (5,6) - Space these out from the stack to both play better and avoid an uneven stack. Fixed
00:22:402 (1) - This note is hard to see because it's overlapped by a hitburst from the (3) from earlier. See if you can fix that. Fixed
01:18:421 (1,2) - Making these repeat sliders is just anti-climatic. Try making them closer to what you had in the Master Rank difficulty. Fixed

Also, the storyboarded hitsounds sound ugly and feel weird, no offense. Hitsounds are a user input, so having them be automatic like that is just weird. What storyboarded hitsounds?

Good map overall.

Great Rank:

01:18:421 (1,2) - Making these repeat sliders is just anti-climatic. Try making them closer to what you had in the Master Rank difficulty. Not Fixed

Also, the storyboarded hitsounds sound ugly and feel weird, no offense. Same as above...

Didn't find anything other than those minor things.

Normal Rank:

01:18:421 (1,2) - I would turn these into two 1/2 stacks spaced a bit from each other. Feels a bit jumpy, so do that. And yes, jumps are allowed on Normal if they aren't stupid. Fixed

Only one real problem with this map: Some of the 1/2s touch each other, while other 1/2s don't. It's inconsistent, obvious while playing, can throw newer players off, and just isn't pretty. Just go through and move some of the hit objects around to fix it. Same thing about storyboarded hitsounds BTW ugh......

Other than that, good job. ~

Easy Rank:

00:46:410 (1) - Remake this slider into a pretty arch or something. This just made me go, "...All the other sliders are so nice. WHAT IS THIS?" hahahahaha..... Fixed..

Good mapset overall. Star.

CracK wrote:

[Easy]
01:06:417 (1,3,1) - Can you make all these 3 perfect? It's clearly seen if you ctrl+h that they are not symmetrical Fixed
00:32:405 (2) - And this one Fixed

[Normal]
00:07:897 (3,4,5) - You chose here quite a strange rhythm Hmm, I did something a little different.
I would do something like this:
00:24:403 (1,2,3) - These are not perfect too Fixed, except (3)
00:46:410 (1,1,1,1) - And these.. Ehh.... Fixed
Well, just go through all of them and do you best to make everything look as good as possible. In all diffs

[Great]
01:12:168 (5) - Maybe unstack? Fixed

[Ultra]
00:00:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a pentagon?
00:01:145 (4,5,6,7,8) - And this Hmmm, changed a little bit

[Master]
00:45:785 (5,1) - They don't look good and the flow is broken. It will be better if you just do this: Fixed

image

00:52:662 (1) - Not a big problem, but it feels close to the previous slider Fixed

Here is a good guide for sliders: link

Good luck!