1. Easy (1,8 stars, 170 notes)
2. Hard (3,97 stars, 240 notes)
3. Insane (4,77 stars, 339 notes)

1. Offset: 1704. Current fit to music, but doesn't fit to time signature (4/4)

1. 03:00:550 (1) - Maybe start this spinner on 03:00:780.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Daaaaaaaaaaaaamn.

SPOILER

Also, I downloaded Gonzvlo's .osb pack in advance. This mod takes Gonzvlo's latest SB, so download that .rar and update the SB to see where I'm going off of.

01:37:936: In the lyrics, he says, "'cause every girl in here wanna be her" (her her her) etc. Perhaps you should reuse one of your Her.png files? (Similar to 00:09:00 and 01:34:00)

There's a lot of duplicate files in the beatmap. I don't see any differences between (this is in the Lyrics folder) 2.png, 4.png, and 9.png; 20.png and 20a.png. You're able to reuse the same image for multiple objects o.o...So this seems a little redundant. Not to mention, there are also Lyrics files in the Song Folder, not in the Lyrics folder. Are these perhaps 'duplicates' too? (The duplicates are 20.png, 20a.png, etc. etc. all the way to 29.png).

Moving on...to the Effects Folder. The maximum dimensions for SB elements is 800x600. Could you perhaps resize purple.jpg and purple2.jpg and change the Scale sizes to compensate for that? oxo

The dark red, crimson combo color might be a little dark (Combo color 4) . It can get real hard to read them on higher difficulties. Maybe making it brighter would do.

With all that aside, this is a great map! It's the usual darck style I remember :R~ Smooth curves, smooth curves. And nice storyboard, Gonzvlo! You managed to make this map appealing without it being jailbait. Excellent job guys.Star.

Ok

[Colours]
Combo1 : 86,248,196
Combo2 : 128,0,255
Combo3 : 130,245,255
Combo4 : 148,40,255
SliderBorder : 192,192,192

James2250 wrote:

SB comments:
the lyrics go
"cause every girl in here wanna be *her*" but you missed off the her, look at 01:37:00 (and make it repeat the word her like the other ones?) -- unless the picture there takes the place of the lyrics

Antu Villegas wrote:

2 cosas para decir:

1-La letra dice "nothing you can compare to your neighborhood HOE", y es: "nothing you can compare to your neighborhood WHORE".

Sorry, I think you are wrong.

2-Las chicas en el SB están pixeleadas, excepto la s3.png :

[attachment=1:6644f]s1.png[/attachment:6644f]

[attachment=0:6644f]s2.png[/attachment:6644f]
(Ok, Thanks)
Eso es todo, es un buen mapa con una buena canción, Buena suerte.

1. Timing looks good to me
2. You could remove the "." and "-" from the tags. Just putting spaces between each word works fine.
3. Make a Normal? Having an Easy, and then Hard with a Normal feels weird. A Normal would complete the map.