1. Ciel (2.71 stars, 88 notes)
2. Kid's Grell (5 stars, 287 notes)
3. Sebastian (3.82 stars, 105 notes)

banvi wrote:

Hello.

mod

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General
Delete" Kuroshitsuji" and "SID" in tags.
They are used by source and srtist , so do not need.
I think , note number of this skin is invisible;_;
Ciel
Difficulty set is a bit high for easy.
HP drain rate: -1
Circle Size : no change or -1
Overal difficulty: -2
Sebastian
NO BG?_?
Difficulty set is a bit high for normal.
HP drain rate: -2 or -3
Circle Size : no change or -1
Overal difficulty: -2
I seem you are not used properly distance snap in first half.(but not jump) Spacing is important~
00:14:076 (3,4) I think , suddenly jump for this pattern for normal.
00:17:076 (1) 2 grid right?
00:37:876 (1) start 1 before red line?(00:37:676)
Kid's
NO BG?_?(After you add BG , choose fullsubmit please.)
00:19:676 (9) 1 grid left?
00:21:276 (1,2) spacing miss or jump? I think , this distance(or jump?) is incomplete.
00:26:076 (3) 1 grid left?
Nice map , star & gl

Sekuyi wrote:

Heya~! Some mods:

[Ciel]
I don't like the small circle size here. I think it's way too small for a 1,21 star(s) map. Also the slider speed may be a bit too fast.
- 00:41:476 ~ (2) repeat the slider. finish-hitsound only at the end (00:42:276)
- 00:43:876 ~ add finish here?
- 00:44:676 ~ start at 00:44:476 and add a note at 00:45:476
-- 00:45:476 ~ add finish here
- 00:54:276 ~ (2) slider end on the next red tick?
- 00:57:476 ~ (see 00:44:676)
- 01:02:876 ~ (1) start at next white tick?
- 01:04:876 ~ add a note here?
- 01:11:476 ~ (2) delete this slider and use (copy) the previous one. start is 01:11:076
- 01:12:676 ~ add a note here with finish hitsound

[Sebastian]
- 00:27:676 ~ (6) renew this one. repeat point is the red tick
- 00:29:476 ~ (3) renew also. repeat point is the red tick. and move (4) to 00:30:076
- 00:35:276 ~ (1) renew this too. repeat point is the big white tick.
- 00:44:276 ~ remove this note
- 00:44:876 ~ slider end at 00:45:276
-- 00:45:476 ~ add a new slider from here to 00:45:876
- 01:11:076 ~ (2) repeat once more

[Kid's Grell]
Everything fine with me. But I think you should redo the hitounds. Maybe use this rythm?

Hitsound mod:

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- 00:03:876 ~ (4) clap
- 00:06:107 ~ (2) clap
- 00:06:276 ~ (4) remove clap
- 00:06:676 ~ (end of 5) clap
- 00:07:676 ~ (1) clap
- 00:07:876 ~ (3) remove clap
- 00:08:276 ~ clap

Nice maps and interesting song^^
Have a cookie~*

Death_the_kid wrote:

Ciel:

00:13:876 (?) - Add note
00:17:076 (?) - Add Note and then add new combo
00:17:476 (1) - If you took the sugestion above then remove new combo
00:23:076 (?) - Add note here
00:23:476 (3) - Turn this into a slider that length 00:23:476 to 00:23:876
00:26:276 (2) - Make this slider reapet
00:27:676 (3) - Kinda weird looking
00:44:476 (1) - No point in having new combo
00:45:476 (2) - Delete note
00:57:276 (1) - Move this up 1/2
00:58:476 (2) - Delete note
01:11:076 (1) - I Don't know about the new combo here


Sebastian:

00:20:676 (1) - Get rid of new combo
00:21:476 (1) - ^ Same as above
00:23:876 (1) - ^
00:28:076 (2) - Maybe drag this out on this time line to 00:27:676
00:32:676 (1) - This slider is to easy. Maybe you can divided into smaller sliders/ circles
00:42:876 (1) - ^
00:41:876 (1) - Remove new combo
00:44:476 (1) - ^
00:54:676 (1) Same as above

Around the end it gets to easy. (For a hard)
You still have some of your Normal in it.


Kid's Grell:

.......You need to get someone else to mod.


I won't get into spacing since you just figured out.

Anywayz good job!
I would star but I already did!


I'm behind you on this map!

Clare wrote:

hihi~

[Ciel]
add some whitle?
00:15:076 (3) - new combo?
00:27:676 (3) - ^
00:31:276 (4) - ^
01:04:476 (2) - ^

[Sebastian]
add some whitle?
00:15:876 (2,3) - spacing
00:17:476 (2,3) - ^

[Kid's Grell]
00:34:076 (6) - new combo?
01:01:476 (6) - ^

nice map!
star!

Frill wrote:

you should do by three.

jeffplante wrote:

I like the song and the map looks perfect for me a normal osu! player

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Death_the_kid should be in tags in all difficulties Fixed

Ciel

00:13:476 (1,2,3) - Unequal spacing. Fix however you would like. Fixed

00:21:476 (4) - Move right and up 1 unit or reapply the distance snap to fix the symmetry. Fixed

00:22:676 (1,2,3,4) - Move right 1 unit. Fixed

00:33:609 (2,3) - I don't like how these are so close to note 1 compared to their spacing. They seem really confusing to read for an easy set up that way, especially with the non-noted sound at 00:33:276 - I'm not too sure how I can change that, and I don't think it's too confusing especially if your listening to the song. I'll change it if i get any other complains for this combination. Until then I'll leave it the way it is. You were right, Fixed it now

00:37:076 - Add a note here and stack it on 00:37:276 (2) - ? Fixed

00:41:176 - Add a note here and stack it on 00:41:476 (2) - Then take the stack and apply distance snap. It will snap fine on the horizontal line. you could extend it a little beyond the snap so that the reversing end is centered if you want to. Fixed, thx looks great!

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13277

01:03:076 (1,1) - Spacing and the blending of the approach circles with the background make these notes to hard for an easy. Reduce. Fixed. Reduce the space and darkened the colour.

01:04:876 (2,3) - Keep this spacing in check. Fixed

01:16:476 (2) - Move up 1 unit. Fixed

Sebastian

00:13:876 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Fixed

00:16:276 (3) - Move to 00:16:076 - Respace it afterward. Then move 00:17:076 (1) - to 00:16:876 - . Next add a note here 00:17:278 - and stack it on 00:17:476 (2) - Fixed

00:23:076 (3,4,5) - Move 3 down one unit to conform with the snap and align 4 and with 3 and 5. Fixed

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13279

00:36:876 (2,3) - 3 doesn't sound like a slider. The note where 3 ends sounds like the real slider. Maybe you could make the stack a triple and make the third note in the stack a slider instead. The slider would start 00:37:276 - and end at 00:37:676 - . The spinner should start at 00:37:776 - Fixed. Looks+sounds awesome now! thx.

00:45:076 (3) - Make this into a squiggly slider? Sort of like this 00:46:076 (1) - Fixed. Yay more squiggly sliders!

00:55:676 (1) - All the slider segments should be half a beat long. Fixed

00:57:076 (2,3,4) - Delete 2 and 3 and move 4 to 00:57:076 - and add two reverses. (Just a suggestion)Done. Like it better your way, thx.

01:05:276 (4) - Belongs here 01:05:076 - Fixed

Kid's Grell

This is completely overmapped.

00:05:476 (5,1) - 5 is part of 1's sound. You should map 1 as the slider instead.

00:06:276 (4,5) - 5 is part of 4's sound. You should map 4 as the slider instead.

00:07:076 (3,4) - ^

00:11:276 (6) - Empty note. Remove?

00:14:176 (2) - Empty note?

00:45:676 (9) - Empty note?

00:52:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Just harsh angle for these notes.



Eh. I'm not starring a beatmap with such an overmapped difficulty in it.

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello.

[Ciel]
00:17:476 (2) - Stack it with 00:15:476 (2). How do i do this without wrecking the spacing?
00:34:276 (4) - Out of the rhytm.Remove it and add a note at 00:34:476. Okay
00:55:043 - Remove and use following notes:[00:35:476,00:35:876,00:36:276,00:36:476,00:36:876] aww, thanks but I like the sliders so I think I'll keep them. Thank you for the suggestion though

[Sebastian]
01:11:076 (1) - Allign better. Okay Fixed

[Kid's Grell]
01:04:076 (6) - Ugh..maybe copypaste from 01:03:676 (5)?
01:13:076 (3) - Mirror with 01:12:476 (1) then.

Well,good job,star~ THANK YOU

Armin wrote:

Offset: 670 Oh wow, THANKS!
Remove "Anime" from the tags, it's already on the Genre (yeah, when this will be ranked, I guess) Okay

[Ciel]

00:07:876 (1) - Silence this spinner fixed
00:17:476 (2) - Whistle fixed
00:18:276 (4) - Whistle at the start + whistle on the third repeat fixed
00:33:609 (2) - Spacing, that's really confusing fixed
00:34:476 (4) - This doesn't fit with the vocal voice and you know <_< move it 1/2 later fixed
00:35:276 (x) - Add a hitcircle here fixed
00:37:876 - Move this 1/1 earlier and then prolong it of another 1/1 fixed
00:41:176 (2) - 1/4 later, on the red tick fixed
00:44:476 (4,5,6,7,8) - A little hard for the easier diff, I suggest you to try with another pattern fixed
01:07:676 (1) - This is completely random, you should resize its length of 1/1 BPM Not sure what you mean by this- start 1/1 early? Or actually cut it down to 1/1 long :S
01:17:276 - Add a finish fixed

[Sebastian]

00:07:876 (1) - Silence this spinner fixed
00:37:276 (4) - Remove this slider, add a hitcircle instead fixed
00:37:776 (1) - Move this on the previous white tick and then make it shorter of another 1/4 fixed
00:46:676 (2) - Whistle or Finish at the end? fixed
00:51:676 (2,3) - Finish fixed
00:53:876 (4) - Remove the finish at the start, add instead the finish here: 00:53:476 (3) fixed
00:56:676 (x) - Add a hitcircle here and then stack it with this slider: 00:55:676 (1) - fixed
00:57:076 (3) - Remove 1 repeat fixed
00:59:476 (2) - Whistle or Finish at the end? fixed
01:07:676 (1) - This doesn't fit with the actual rythm, but this time just try to add a hitcircle here: 01:09:076 (x) fixed
01:11:076 (1) - Stack perfectly the end of this slider with this one: 01:09:476 (1), mabye turning off the grid snap fixed
01:12:676 (1,2,3,4) - Weird and ugly pattern, try to add a hitcircle here: 01:13:076 (x) and move this 01:13:476 (4) 1/4 later fixed
01:17:276 (1) - Finish fixed

[Kid's Grell]

00:25:076|00:25:476 ~ (Timing sections) Try with a Normal instead Don't understand :S
00:21:476 (2) - Random jump, use the DS here please fixed
00:37:276 (x) - Add a hitcircle here, to finish the pattern (and move the next spinner on the white tick, reducing it of 1/2) fixed
01:17:476 - Remove the finish, it's very bad this time, also make it ends here: 01:19:876 fixed

Not starred, fix these issues and I'll remod it. Okay

Davidz123 wrote:

Mod! [REQUESTED VIA QUEUE]

[Sebastion]
00:24:676 (5) - end of slider whistle or finish Fixed

I can't find anything else. Yay!

+Star!~

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[ Ciel ]

00:34:143(3,4) - spacing Fixed


[ Sebastian ]

00:15:176(2,3) - spacing Fixed

00:47:376(3) - there is small displacement Fixed

01:04:976(3,4) - 3 combo is it possible to drop downward under 4 ? spacing Fixed

[ Kid's Grell ]

00:18:376(5) - spacing ~ can do slider higher? [/color] Fixed

00:19:376(6) - ^ Fixed

00:25:976(2,3) - do at identical level . spacing Huh?

00:31:776(5,6) - spacing. kombo number 6 a bit to drop Fixed


not bad ~ STAR

Thanks

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Ciel]
00:12:770 - remove this timing section Fixed
00:44:470 - new combo
[Sebastian]
00:34:676 - remove this note Fixed
00:44:476 - place under by grid absolutly similar as slider
00:57:076 - i'm not sure about this slider. Try to change it. Changed it a couple times already. I think I’ll shall leave it for now. But if I get the same comment again then I will change
01:02:076 - distance Fixed
01:07:676 - end this slider here -01:08:476 Fixed
01:11:076 - remove new combo Fixed
01:14:876 - ^ Fixed

[Grell]
Please increase volume i can't listen hitsounds. Fixed



Seems to me very nice map :: )
Good Job with SB. STAR!

weezy47 wrote:

the start for insane is too quick
besides that awesome map!!!!

weezy47 wrote:

the start for insane is too quick
besides that awesome map!!!!

You're right, I'll see what I can do about it. Fixed

• • 00:40:070 - Set current position as preview point.
  • Disable Countdown. Also, delete "ready.png", "go.png", "count1.png", "count2.png" and "count3.png"
  • Resnap all notes
  • Tags should be the same on all diffs. Also, remove "Anime" from it becouse it's the genre.

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670
  • 00:57:070 (3) - Add a repetition
  • 01:13:270 (4,5) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

• • Stack Leniency: 1

xxheroxx wrote:

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[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • 00:40:070 - Set current position as preview point.
  • Disable Countdown. Also, delete "ready.png", "go.png", "count1.png", "count2.png" and "count3.png"
  • Resnap all notes
  • Tags should be the same on all diffs. Also, remove "Anime" from it becouse it's the genre.

[Ciel]

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670

[Sebastian]

• • Start kiai here 00:40:670 and end it here 01:05:470.
  • 00:12:570 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:12:670
  • 00:57:070 (3) - Add a repetition
  • 01:13:270 (4,5) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

[Kid's Grell]

• • Stack Leniency: 1

Thank you, Fixed them all and used all your suggestions

kino77 wrote:

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Hi~

[General]
The offset sounds odd,find someone good at this to check~
Resnap all note all diffs~

[Ciel]
Hitsound suggestion:Don't abused finish.
00:13:470 (1) - Don't slience here ,volume 40%? (after I turn up the volume,I found you add hitsound this part ORZ...)
00:22:270 - Add note?
00:22:670 - ^
00:27:870 (1,2) - Spacing?
00:30:270 - Add note?
00:34:270 (4,5) - Spacing?
00:37:470 (1) - End with 00:39:070 ?
00:42:670 - Add note?
00:43:870 (3,4) - Spacing?
00:45:470 - Add note?
00:59:070 (1) - End with white tick?
01:04:670 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
01:05:870 (1,1) - Odd...
01:12:670 (1,2) - Spacing?

Combo mod
00:15:070 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:16:670 (5,1) - Switch new combo?
00:25:470 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:26:270 (3) - New combo?
00:27:870 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:31:470 (1) - ^
00:58:270 (1,1) - ^
01:04:670 (1) - ^
01:07:470 (1) - ^
01:15:870 (1) - ^
[Sebastian]
Hitsound suggestion:Don't abused finish,try hitsound partten.

Combo mod
00:14:676 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:15:676 (1) - ^
00:22:276 (1) - ^
00:23:076 (3) - New combo?
00:26:276 (3) - ^
00:27:276 (1) -
00:29:076 (1) - ^
00:29:476 (3) - New combo?
00:30:476 (1) -
00:41:076 (1) - ^
00:44:476 (1) - ^
01:00:476 (1) - ^
01:07:676 (1) - ^
[Kid's Grell]
00:00:670 (1) ~ 00:24:876 (1) - Volume 30%?
00:40:676 (1) ~ 01:17:476 (1) - Volume 50%?

Star~

Oh wow didn't notice I silenced everything, thanks. ummm...I kinda screwed up Ciel's difficulty (all the notes shifted in different directions on the time line ), but I think i fixed all the spacing problems. Sorry you had to mod that headache. Fixed the all the volume problems. Used a couple of your combo suggestions but still kept the ones I liked unchanged. I'll have someone double check the offset.

THANK YOU

Kurai_ wrote:

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Hi~

[ciel]
What the hitsouds are silent at the begging :O
00:44:270 (4,5,6) - Spacing
01:04:670 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:670 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^

[Sebastian]
00:39:870 (1) - Move 1/2 later
00:49:276 (5) - Move 1 grid up ?

[kid's grell]
00:08:876 (1) - New combo
00:10:076 (6) - New combo and remove new combo of 00:10:276 (1)
00:40:676 (Timing section) - Incrase the volume of hitsounds ?

Star~

tmokb93 wrote:

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Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
Raise timing sections before kiai time by +1 or +2 ticks.

[Ciel]
00:28:670 (2) - Spacing
00:30:670 (2) - ^.
00:32:670 (1) - ^.
00:33:470 (2) - ^.
00:35:070 (5) - ^.
00:41:070 (2) - ^.
00:43:070 (1) - ^.
00:44:270 (4) - ^.
00:53:470 (1) - ^.
00:58:270 (1) - ^.
00:59:070 (1) - ^.
01:04:670 (1) - ^.
01:09:470 (1) - ^.
01:15:870 (1) - ^.

[Sebastian]
00:47:676 (3) - New Combo.

[Kid's Grell]
Okay

.

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
01:17:470 (1) - This spinner has different end between all diffs. Fix it. Fixed!

•Kid's Grell•
Lol, OD 8 and a very very high distance snap. I think you exagerated.Lowered it to 8 for OD and increased stack leniency a bit...although not too sure if that's what you meant :/

•Sebastian•
Why in this map there are many bookmarks? Delete them.Deleted

00:35:270 (1) - Fix this slider? It's awful.Fixed!

00:36:870 (2,3,4) - 1 grid left?Fixed!

00:52:670 (1) - Distance error.Fixed!

01:03:070 (1) - Make this start 1/2 later.Okay

01:12:670 (1,2) - Distance error..Fixed!


•Ciel•
Why in this map there are many bookmarks? Delete them.Deleted

HP Drain Rate and OD -2.Changed!

00:13:476 (1) - Make this circle closer to the centre-grid since there is a spinner previously.Fixed!

00:15:076 (5) - New combo?Okay


+Star. Thank you

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Ciel]
00:19:876 (1) - There are a bunch of sliders with the whistle on the slider slide that I don't like the sound of. A lot of people don't care, so I'll just leave the mention and leave it to you to fix 'em if you want. Took off the whistle for those two sliders, but i left the others.
00:45:076 (6,1) - Spacing. Especially when it really feels like there should be another note after the 6 with that heavy synth hit. Fixed

[Sebastian]
00:35:270 (1) - What rhythm are you following here? I'd do something different... Moved it to start 1/2 earlier...not sure if this fixes it

[Grell]
I can't mod this too well since it's way beyond my skill level - sorry.
00:18:070 (2,3,4,5) - I don't like the rhythm that these sliders produce. :/ Removed and replaced

00:26:070 (3) - This would look better with a copy/paste of the 2 before it, and flip it vertically/reverse it. It does look nice, thx

00:59:470 (1,2,3) - Yeesh, really? Muhahahahaha...okay I guess that was pretty evil. Brought them closer together..psshh now its easy


Maps are fine, though Grell felt really over-mapped (Been hearing this a lot, does that mean *shudder* I should delete notes?) Deleted 33 notes hope that makes a difference
. Ah well.